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CYOA Feedback, suggestions, etc (Patreon)

Published:
2023-11-09 21:06:01
Edited:
2023-11-10 00:57:39
Imported:
2026-06

Content

The end is nigh! In December, the final page of the Boruto CYOA will be uploaded, and with that, preparations for the next CYOA will begin.

But before we get to figuring out what the next theme will be, I figure I should pick your brains a bit.

If there is anything you wanted to let me know, whether it's something you liked and would like to see again, or something you didn't like/would like changed going forward, this is your opportunity! I'm happily open to criticism.

I'll make a poll later with some suggestions I've already received, plus anything reasonable that's mentioned from this post (whether it's in comments or through a direct message/discord/etc). I have my own changes I would like to do going forward, but I'll add them to the poll as well in case others feel strongly against it.

That's it for now! Working on the next picture ($13 Tier Reward one)! Expect the lineart to be done around Saturday night, and the colors a day or two later.

EDIT: Just to be clear, this is not regarding what series the next one will focus on! Just general changes to make.

Comments

ShadowGoose

For the next CYOA setting themes, I'm thinking either fantasy (Baldur's Gate 3 or Witcher) OR sci-fi settings (Cyberpunk 2077, Overwatch, or Mass Effect)

Lygot

I think it might be helpful when picking the new theme/story to put a limit on repeated aspects. The last story had the key aspects of 'Boruto/Naruto', 'Kidnapping', and 'Sanae-focused', so it would be nice if the new theme options provided some variety. The CYOA was great, but I would be worried if the next one just retraces the same aspects/themes.

John Doe

Hmm, let's see: Likes: The poses/binds were great! Punishing, elaborate and delightfully kinky. Combined the dialogue a comic format provides, it makes for some very fun stuff. Improvements: maybe some kind of veto on keeping things from going too much in circles or repeating plot points but with different characters. This happened a bit in this one, with Ino and Sakura and while nice in it's own right it did take the wind out of the sails for the scenario a bit. Granted, the spirit of the project means that imposing limits is a bit tricky, but some kind of "let's get going to the next part" type of veto would be good. Also, if you're taking suggestions for the next setting, I'm throwing Persona 5 into the ring :)

Joe Dover

Some people have already said this, but choosing a overall plot theme before starting the next one would be great Also like a decision for which characters to include can be good too

ChefWizard

Needs more mummified foot worship -a very concerned individual

TakeOverFairy

I got nothing. It was fantastic and fun.

Erza

How about Detective Conan？There are many beauties to choose.

dtmen

My hero academia or AOT could work.

DarthRevan

I agree that a greater plot focus/character limit might help. There was way to much "and then X character shows up and gets tied up." I think focusing on a smaller cast would help make the choices on how they are tied much more interesting/focused.

ChefWizard

Now that I'm home It was really good and can't wait to see the ending I think a character limit might help keep things on track in the future

ninman42

It seems I was beaten to the punch when saying it but I do gotta agree with a character limit or limiting when new characters come to keep it from every page is just insert new character here that then gets tied up. But overall it was a very nice and fun project to do with everyone and can't wait to see how the next one goes and what it is about.

IMK2015

Farewell, My Dear Cramer has plenty of cute boys and girls to tie up.