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Thanks to everyone that played and left feedback on the game! It's terrifying to share the project for everyone to see, and I really appreciate everyone that took the time to play it. I'm still new to writing, and I hope you'll be able to see me improve as the project grows. The fact that even one person chose to support the game is mind blowing, and I'm very grateful to everyone that did!

I thought I'd create a public thread here for people to share their feedback. What did you like, and dislike? What are some features you'd like to see implemented? Any design choice that you particularly liked or disliked? And what sort of content would you like to see going forward. This is not an official poll or anything, just a place for everyone to voice their feedback. I'm not entirely sure how DMs work, but if you can, you're also welcome to DM your suggestions or questions!

Besides that, I'm already hard at work on v0.2, which will bring more apps and QOL features, along with some new content. Expect more updates to follow!

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Ciabatta

NTR/humiliation/femdom are my favorite genres, so this game is right up my alley. My only complaint so far is mostly tied to the actual game itself, such as the poor replayability aspect, slow moving text, and a not so very good gallery app. My personal hope for the game is no BBC content, and if there is any, that it take up minor space. BBC/ugly bastard is the one thing I don't like about NTR and humiliation. Not a fan of NTS/sharing also unless it has NTR undertones. Ultimately though, just make the game you want to make.

Eroshyl

Already working on QOL features, hopefully you'll like them! I can't talk about specific fetishes but so far BBC content is only planned for one of the characters. Whether there will be more or less is undecided.

Julkrat

I'm a Stream moderator already, I really like NTS/Humiliation/Fendom, and Hope there Will be alot of contents about that... Hope to see the MC, GF get more confident. Also the QOL, for me make a better Skip Button placement, probably close to the choices. And make the text Go faster, Thats better for a replay

Julkrat

A Discord server would be cool also

Eroshyl

I'll look into it soon enough. Just not exactly sure what goes into managing a public server yet!

Ciabatta

Welp, my hope is that it isn't a main part of that girls route then, lol. But yeah, do what you must.

justeleblanc

I really like the idea of Lily being a virgin when it comes to all her first experiences. That way, the MC could miss all of them, and it would be another guy (or other men) who get to enjoy them instead. (I’d like it if Lily gives in to another guy because of Evelyn. For example, she meets a guy she finds very attractive, and Evelyn does everything she can to make sure Lily and him keep spending time together, and eventually end up having sex. Evelyn could then tell the MC about it so he gets angry at Lily, but he would slowly realize that he actually enjoys it, even if he has trouble accepting it at first. And it would be Mia who helps him understand that it’s not wrong to like that, and that maybe he actually enjoys being a cuckold. He could then eventually admit it to Lily. Yes, I’m just spinning my own little story here, sorry :P) Ultimately, I’d like Lily to grow less shy, realizing that she actually loves sex and enjoys being seductive. She could also talk with the MC about his fantasies and desires, and Lily could try things out β€” for example, since she knows the MC enjoys her having sex with other men, she could see whether he wants her to humiliate him and choose the men herself, or if he prefers having a say in it and telling her who to sleep with, etc. In short, I find the NTS route far more interesting than the NTR one.

Arthurvyrin

i really want to see a dark NTS path, with MC being the cuck to all the girls, and with lots of cum eating (hoping cummy food is involved)

Arone Tajhiri

The texts shd be a little more faster also needs the save load function

Kesash

Just... go slow... so many rush into the girl becoming a s**t and it sucks.... I think the only believable way this would happen, for me anyway, is if she believes she is doing it so that she can be better for the MC when its his turn. Which is way better than the 'oh i was loyal and now im just f****g everyone who walks in front of me'. There are ZERO stories that take the slow corruption path. Think we've all been waiting for one :D

Eroshyl

Haha I wouldn't say zero, but yes this game is meant to fill that niche.

Raizant

Think you're doing great. Love overall what you're doing and do your own thing. The only part I felt blue balled was if they're was more description about what the guy saw. It was a brief comment and moved on. If there's opportunity to go back and add a little more dialogue there would be nice to have that filled out more. But love the story with it as a whole!