WIP: MAXIM Inspection (Patreon)

This is sort of a cross between a WIP and an exclusive work, but to keep the possibility up it'll be a WIP for this post. This was a test of a "image set" style of drawing where most drawings are similar but the dialogue is what helps tell a story, I'm not sure how this could be posted and displayed on DA but Pixiv would be fine. Should I continue this to be a full on mini story?