Announcement: Chronicles of Hunger Forest – Issue #1 Descent Into Umbra - Sample Script Dialogue Attached (Patreon)

The first chapter of our newest comic arc, Chronicles of Hunger Forest – Issue #1: Descent Into Umbra, has officially entered production.The full script is complete, the visual direction is locked in, and the atmosphere for this arc will be unlike anything we’ve created before.

This story marks the beginning of a journey into a place that feels alive… and watches back.

To celebrate the milestone, we’re releasing three exclusive page teasers for patrons:

Page 6 Teaser - "A moment where confidence meets danger."Tension coils along the treeline, shadows shift, and the first real test of presence and instinct steps forward.Two sides measure each other—one with easy arrogance, the other with hungry certainty.Nobody moves at first. Nobody blinks.

And then… someone pushes the wrong button.The forest stops being quiet.

Page 13 Teaser - “The Moment Kate Stops Holding Back”

A standoff collapses into motion.Three figures close in, one stands her ground, and the wind itself seems to pause as something sharp inside her finally snaps awake.Her posture shifts.Her weapon changes.Her eyes ignite.

It’s the first time the forest realizes Kate Brightpaw is not nearly as soft as she looks.

Page 15 Teaser — “Victory Is the Most Dangerous Moment”

The danger doesn’t strike during the clash—it waits for the celebration afterward.Confidence invites shadows closer.A playful taunt turns into a fatal opening.A presence hiding inches behind her breathes in the opportunity she’s too busy basking in to notice.

Page 15 is the moment you realize the forest never attacks when you expect it to.It attacks when you think you’re safe.

These teasers will give you a glimpse of the tone, the lighting, the emotional texture, and the worldbuilding style we’re stepping into with this arc—without spoiling the unfolding path.

More updates, previews, and behind-the-scenes shots will follow as production continues.

Welcome to the beginning.Welcome to Umbra.

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Page 6

Panel 1 [Top Left Wide]

Visuals & Actions: Five Shadow Wolves step fully out of the tree line onto the path. They are quadrupedal and currently standing on all fours, sleek, with dark grey fur that seems to smoke or blend with the shadows. They are menacing, fangs bared, with thick drool dripping from their maws. The Leader Wolf (slightly larger, scarred snout) is in the front, eyes locked on the group.

Background & Environment: The edge of the path where the serene forest meets the darker, denser undergrowth.

Dialogue (Leader Wolf): "Well, well, well... our instincts didn't lead us wrong. What have we here?"

Dialogue (Wolf 2): "Soft skin... and hearts beating fast enough to taste."

Panel 2 [Top Center Narrow]

Visuals & Actions: A tight close-up of Rayna’s face. She is looking slightly down at the wolves. Her expression is serious but touched with unbothered arrogance. She sports a slight, challenging smirk, one eyebrow raised.

Background & Environment: Blurred forest background.

Dialogue (Rayna): "I hope you weren't planning to intimidate me with that routine. I'm not your average poodle."

Panel 3 [Top Right Narrow]

Visuals & Actions: A tight close-up of the Leader Wolf’s face. His snarl deepens, eyes narrowing. He is clearly unimpressed by the prey talking back.

Background & Environment: Dark, shadowy textures.

Dialogue (Leader Wolf): "Your bark bores me, little meat."

Panel 4 [Middle Left]

Visuals & Actions: Miranda and Rayna in the frame.

Miranda: Looks at Rayna with a questioning, slightly exasperated side-eye ("Are you really doing this right now?").

Rayna: Looks confident, eyes rolling sarcastically but with a daring glint. She is relaxed, not yet drawing her blades, baiting them.

Background & Environment: The path behind them.

Dialogue (Rayna): "Oh, I'm relieved. For a second, I thought you were one of those desperate hounds coming to ask me out for a dinner date."

Panel 5 [Middle Right]

Visuals & Actions: The Wolf Pack bristles. The Leader Wolf steps forward aggressively, muscles bunching for a pounce.

Background & Environment: The shadows around them seem to lengthen (Pulse influence).

Dialogue (Leader Wolf): "Cute. But I came here for you to BE dinner."

Panel 6 [Bottom Left Narrow]

Visuals & Actions: Rayna has turned her back to the wolves, looking over her shoulder with a "seductive" pouty expression and innocent glare. It is a taunt—making herself look vulnerable to bait the attack. Her hand hovers near her hip (hidden from the wolf's direct line of sight).

Background & Environment: Focus on Rayna's profile.

Dialogue (Rayna): "I expected just as much from a filthy dog."

Panel 7 [Bottom Middle]

Visuals & Actions: The Leader Wolf lunges through the air,still quadrupule and on all fours in a pouncing motion, paws spread wide, jaws wide, aiming for Rayna’s exposed back. He looks triumphant and savage.

Dialogue (Leader Wolf):  “Filthy dog am I? And what does that make you?!!"

Panel 8 Divided [Bottom Right Wide]

Panel 8a:

Visuals & Actions: Rayna’s face, head turned to look over her shoulder, eyes half lidded, back still mostly turned toward the hound, the ‘not impressed’ style facial expression.

Background & Environment: Focus on Rayna's profile.

Dialogue (Rayna): "Sweetheart, I'm not a sweet little puppy..."

Panel 8b:

Visuals & Actions: Rayna pivots on her heel with blinding speed. She executes a ferocious, high-spinning back kick that connects squarely with the Leader Wolf’s jaw, knocking him sideways mid-air with a burst of impact force. The frame of the panel if focused on the connect of the kick while we see after images of the Wolf leader getting kicked away from Rayna, and speed lines indicating the direction of Rayna’s spin.

Background & Environment: Speed lines indicating the velocity of the spin.

Dialogue (Rayna): "...I'm a bitch!"

Page 13

Panel 1 [Top Left Large]

Visuals & Actions: The three wolves are regrouping, closing in on Kate. Wolf 2 walks confidently toward her. Wolf 3 is pushing himself up from the dirt with two paws, a trail of earth marking his previous crash. Wolf 4 is standing up, dusting himself off, looking behind him at Kate. Kate stands facing them, holding her combat pole diagonally across her body. Her expression is dead serious. A gust of wind billows through her dress, pressing the fabric against her legs and offering a subtle hint of her panties.

Background & Environment: The forest path, churned up by the fight.

Dialogue (Kate): "Three big, bad wolves... and you need to team up to take on one little girl? I thought I was just an easy dessert."

Dialogue (Wolf 2): "The sweetest meat always requires a little... tenderness."

Dialogue (Wolf 3): "Shut up! I'm going to snap her legs!"

Dialogue (Wolf 4): "Just hold her down! I want a bite!"

Panel 2 [Top Right Large / Divided]

Panel 2a (Left Sub-Panel - Jagged/Peace Symbol Split):

Visuals & Actions: A jagged, three-way split frame showing the snarling faces of the wolves. They are furious now, the playfulness gone.

Left Section: Wolf 4, teeth bared in humiliation.

Right Section: Wolf 3, eyes wide with rage.

Bottom Section: Wolf 2, calculating the kill.

Dialogue (Wolves - Unison): "GET HER!"

Panel 2b (Top Right Tall Sub-Panel):

Visuals & Actions: Kate stands visibly relaxed but intensely focused. Her eyes are closed, head tilted slightly down. She holds the combat pole horizontally in front of her chest. Her hands twist the center mechanism, and we see the weapon separating into two independent batons.

SFX: CLICK-HISSS

Panel 2c (Bottom Right Short Sub-Panel):

Visuals & Actions: Extreme close-up of Kate’s eyes snapping open. The pupils seem to burn with intensity ("on fire"). The "cheerleader" is gone; the fighter is here.

Dialogue (Kate): "It's time for you to see..."

Dialogue (Kate): "...Velvet Claw."

Panel 3 [Bottom Left Tall Wide]

Visuals & Actions: A dramatic, low-angle shot from behind Kate. The three Shadow Wolves appear colossal, a storm of fur and claws looming over her small figure as they rush her. Kate is in a dynamic stance: right leg slid back, left knee bent forward. Her arms are extended downward in a 'V' shape, holding the separated batons. Shimmering force indicates small spikes emerging from the tips of the batons.

Background & Environment: The shadows of the wolves cast over her.

Dialogue (Kate): "Class is in session."

Panel 4 [Bottom Center Narrow - Divided Diagonally]

Panel 4a (Top Left Cut):

Visuals & Actions: Rayna (looking toward Kate/Viewer) has one eyebrow raised high. She looks genuinely surprised, perhaps even a little impressed, breaking her usual unbothered facade.

Dialogue (Rayna): "Well... look at the pom-pom girl go. She actually has teeth."

Panel 4b (Bottom Right Cut):

Visuals & Actions: Miranda (looking toward Kate/Viewer) looks shocked and serious. She realizes the implications of Kate’s stance.

Dialogue (Miranda): "Dual stance? Spikes?... She was holding back this whole time?"

Panel 5 [Bottom Right Wide Divided]

Panel 5a (Left Section):

Visuals & Actions: Kate twirls forward into the oncoming rush. Her dress flares out wildly from the spin, giving a full view of her panties amidst the motion blur and speed lines. Wolf 4 is mid-leap, jaws aiming for her throat.

SFX: FWISH!

Panel 5b (Top Right Section):

Visuals & Actions: View from behind Wolf 4. We see Kate’s face, smirking almost cruelly, looking down and to her left at the wolf. Wolf 4 is bent forward, gagging, eyes bulging. He has been stopped cold in mid-air.

Dialogue (Kate): "Still think I'm dessert?"

Panel 5c (Bottom Right Section):

Visuals & Actions: Low angle from behind and under Kate. We see that the baton in her left hand has connected squarely upward into Wolf 4’s groin. His jaws are forced wide open in a silent scream, saliva spraying. Kate’s dress is still settling giving us a subtle view of her panties from the rear, framing the brutal hit.

SFX: CRUNCH!

Dialogue (Wolf 4): "GH—HUK!!!"

Page 15

Panel 1 [Top Left Slightly Narrow]

Visuals & Actions: The Bog Panther is crouched directly behind Kate in the dense bushes. The angle is low, looking through the leaves and directly up under the back of Kate’s dress as she stands victoriously on the path. Kate is relaxing her stance ("powering down"), wiping sweat from her brow, boasting to Miranda and Rayna in the background.

Background & Environment: Dark foliage in the foreground, bright path in the background.

Narrative (Bog Panther Thought Bubble): The kinetic heat is fading... her guard lowers. The wolves were clumsy tools, but effective.

Narrative (Bog Panther Thought Bubble): She is tenderized. Exhausted. The sweetness is no longer guarded by fire.

Dialogue (Kate): "See? Three on one and I barely broke a nail. You guys worry too much!"

Panel 2 [Top Center Slightly Narrow]

Visuals & Actions:  Viewed from the front. Kate performs a high, vertical cheerleader kick, holding her leg up with one hand near her head to show off her flexibility. This creates a clear, direct view up her dress for the viewer. She is singing a victory cheer.

Background & Environment: The forest path.

Dialogue (Kate - Singing): "L! O! S! E! R! S! What's that spell? LOSERS!"

Narrative (Bog Panther Thought Bubble): Such flexibility... divine. She will slide down the throat like silk.

Panel 3 [Top Right Wider]

Visuals & Actions: Kate turns around and bends over at the waist, her rear raised high and facing the defeated wolves, her upper body bent forward and now facing the bushes. She wiggles her hips side-to-side in a taunting motion. The back of her dress is ruffled up, fully revealing her panties and the curve of her ass. Her head is turned over her shoulder, looking back at the wolves with a cheeky grin. She does not notice the large shadow of the Bog Panther looming directly in front of her face inside the bush.

Background & Environment: The path and the edge of the bush.

Dialogue (Kate): "Aww, what's wrong? I thought you boys wanted dessert?"

Dialogue (Bog Panther - Voice from Bush): "That would be... DELIGHTFUL."

Panel 4 [Middle Left]

Visuals & Actions: Extreme close-up of Kate’s face. Her expression instantly shifts from cheeky confidence to wide-eyed shock and fear. She is looking forward into the dark opening of the bushes where the voice came from.

Background & Environment: Dark leaves framing her face.

Dialogue (Kate): "?!"

Panel 5 [Bottom Left]

Visuals & Actions: The Bog Panther LURCHES out of the bushes with terrifying speed. His jaws are unhinged and wide open, aiming directly for Kate’s face. Saliva flies from his maw, teeth grimacing in hunger. The perspective is from slightly behind and to the side of Kate, focusing on the sheer size of the predator rushing her.

Background & Environment: The exploding foliage.

Dialogue (Kate): "GAAAAH?! Where did you—"

Panel 6 [Middle Center Tall / Slightly Wide]

Visuals & Actions: A dynamic capture shot. The Bog Panther has lunged forward from his hind legs (which remain planted) and completely engulfed Kate’s head and neck inside his jaws.

The Pose: Kate is standing on her feet but slouched forward at a 45-degree angle from the hips (frozen in her earlier teasing posture).

Grapple: The Panther’s front paws are grappled around her waist from behind her dress, lifting the fabric higher.

Depth: His jaws have already swallowed her head down to her shoulders.

Details: Kate’s hands are flailing at her sides, still uselessly clutching her Batons.

Dialogue (Kate - Muffled): "MMMMPH!! NO!! GET OFF!!"

Dialogue (Bog Panther - Gurgled): Mmmph... Delicious!!!... the aroma!... I have stalked this flavor for miles! Intoxicating...

Panel 7 [Middle Right Tall Slightly Wide / Divided]

Panel 7a (Top Section):

Visuals & Actions: View from inside the Bog Panther’s mouth/throat, looking outward. We see Kate’s face pressed into the darkness, covered in thick saliva. She is crying out, eyes wide in the wet gloom, looking toward the light of the mouth opening behind her head.

Dialogue (Kate): "H-Help! It's slimy! Let go of me!"

Panel 7b (Bottom Section):

Visuals & Actions: View from underneath Kate’s chest looking up. The Panther’s lower jaw is CHOMPING down hard on her breasts, squeezing them against her ribcage. The pressure tears the fabric of her dress top.

Detail: Her breasts are squeezed to the sides of his lips, exposing her nipples outside his mouth, while the base of her breasts are pulled inside. The Panther’s eyes are rolled back in ecstasy, ignoring her struggles.

Dialogue (Bog Panther): "Mmmph!... soft mounds of sugar... bursting with cream... A rare delicacy indeed!"