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The story continues!

Now, those of you who are paying attention might have noticed that the comic pages per post have gone from six, to five, to four. That doesn't mean it's three in the next drop. In fact my aim was five. But I'm realising that I'm coming up a little bit short in terms of what the set has to offer for page flow. So I need to render some extra shots, which I was already gonna do anyway because I didn't like the facial in the Tati/Bree scene anyway.

I tried to make a 5th page work but I'm really liking how this story is coming together so I want it to be right. Specifically, I'm missing penetration shots, so I need to make a few of those.

Doesn't mean that I'm not dropping another batch of Marcella/Mari renders this weekend though!

Another thing I wanted to quickly touch on was the narrative itself. If you've been here for a while you'll notice some narrative notes that might be starting to feel a bit repetitive. This is true. It's also on purpose. There's a lot in here that I've spoken about in Patreon comments, or wrote about in story blurbs I've posted. But I've never really put it down in comics yet and I want comics to be the main way in which the story is followed.

I want to move forward from here on out, so I'm just setting all these story elements up one final time in order to actually have it laid out, and then we can move on and progress the plot.

Anyway, enjoy!

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Aaron Ferguson

perfect timing on thanksgiving! good thing I checked!

TheDude3DX

happy thanksgiving! hope it was a good one :)

TheGreatCornholio

Nice! It's good to see the narrative elements being added to an actual story and becoming "official" so to say. Hopefully soon we'll move the story to the next step with the senator herself. And hopefully "getting the job done" with the senator will also include some Mari action and not just Kayla. I think everyone will love some mother/daughter-in-law action :D.... Or perhaps Kayla needs to also bring Marcella along to show the senator all that her tech can do lol. Also, I'm really excited to see you introduce a MILF character. I know your style seems to be geared towards these girls in their 20s-30s, but I hope you will adapt it a little for a character that is supposed to be older. Nothing much, perhaps some smile lines around her eyes/mouth and perhaps tits more similar to what Sayako had when you borrowed her from Miro. I know your setting has magical tech and you can just make a woman in her late 40s-50s to like she's 20, but I think it would be great to see some difference in a true MILF compared to these younger girls.

TheDude3DX

Oh no trust me I am very excited to add a MILF. I think the main challenge will be in giving her some visual definition like you said. I'll have to go through a few iterations of character design and let everyone here have some input too :) Definitely a part of the story I'm excited about moving towards though, after the wedding.

kohan

Awesome comic, lingerie is just divine! I just joined and cant believe the amount of content already available to me! Do you like to do xmas stuff?

TheDude3DX

Welcome! So I generally don't do things specifically themed after christmas or any certain holiday. Was there something you were hoping to see?

kohan

Some themed content would be nice, but you do what you enjoy bud (you obviously know what you are doing) :)