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Laurie decides she's done wallowing in self-pity; it's time to take action!! She's going to head back to school and set things right... that means with Alice, with Frank and Abida, with Jen... but she's got some stumbling blocks in her way! First of all, there's the fact that Jen might be starting a new venture of her own, one designed to REALLY piss Laurie off! Laurie loves being the center of attention for her beautiful body, but it looks like Jen has a scheme of her own on that front!

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Arragon

Jen better hide ^^

kisbie

Wait, Jen thinks her ass got fat because of exercise? :o

miki

Such a great instalment this one. Loved so many bits of it. Everything from Jen's new beauty blog and her seemingly accidentally making erotic content, to Laurie's excesses and sloth, and Laurie not being recognised by Amy. Particularly liked Laurie's struggles at school, her frosty interaction with Nurse Hopkins, and just how much of a spectacle her bloated body is. Everything from the Nurse's genuine concern that even walking might be too much for Laurie's clogged teenage body to handle, to Laurie relishing her humiliation, and almost having to snap herself out of fantasising in public. I'm normally an Alice Simp, but this is excellent to see.

Arragon

After reading the hallway scene for a second time, I came up with an alternative ending for it: * Nurse Hopkins pulls at Laurie as much as she can * Laurie insults her during it * Laurie's fat ass is stuck at the armrests and they actually lift a scooter off the ground * The janitor notices it and gets the scooter unstuck * Laurie rolls forward over her own belly and buries Nurse Hopkins beneath her * Nurse Hopkins snaps and yells "Get off me you fat bitch!" * Everyone in the hallway freezes, not believing what they just heard * Laurie is desperately trying not to cum * The janitor frees Nurse Hopkins by bringing Laurie back on her feet * Nurse Hopkins realizes what she has said and runs off * Later Nurse Hopkins is called to the principal * Principal fires her, since he doesn't want a trouble with the Belmontes and he has to admit that Laurie has increased the schools popularity * Nurse Hopkins packs her stuff. She is done with playing nice. "So you want eat until you explode? We see about that!"

Christopher Aynsley

Definitely well up there in my top ten of Alice chapters. A scooter break down and Laurie getting stressed says it all. Hope there’s more to come.

Achernarus

Belated praise incoming. It's so rewarding, and exciting, and erotic to see requested details fully realized. I've been waiting a long time to see things of come to pass (e.g. the scooter break down and being forced to walk, not being recognized by Amy, the handicap parking) and of course, the wait has been well worth it. You're excellent at taking details like that and integrating them into the story in seamless and satisfying ways :)