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Idk wtf I’m doing with the backgrounds on that last page lol. Also tell me what order your eyes naturally read the panels in the first page cuz I realize the size of the panels may make it read wrong. I know word balloons add to the flow of everything but still.

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AkiDave

I’ll send it on discord one sec

Luciano Franstric

I read it left to right, first the top then the bottom, I had to read it like 5 times before realizing how his helmet appeared and disappearer from his hand xD

Luciano Franstric

I think the fact that the left panels are separated makes me not read them continuously, maybe if the line dividing the left to right is bigger? Idk