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The Block Party - Part 30 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-04-11 19:15:00
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2026-06
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Hi, everyone!

This is the official finale of my latest feminization comic!

I love you guys and I hope that everyone of you has an amazing weekend. ❤️

Please feel free to leave any criticism or suggestions in the comments below as I am anxious to hear what you think about it!

~ Sammy xx

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Samus

Good story but the ending was a bit too fast again.... 🥺 Like he was injected then caged and had 0 sex nothing happens then he just married a cop and everyone is in jail lol like nothing had any building up just bang over. Alsteven at least needed a sex scene we didn't even see him naked once since the "butt surgery" that was just forgotten about lol

Watch

Would you ever be open to doing an epilogue chapter showing some more 18+ with Steven and the cop? I feel like nothing really happened there.

Semag

Now that it’s over I can finally speak my criticisms with it. If I come off as harsh I apologize in advance. I think you have good strengths and ideas as a writer of feminization and Sissification stories. I’m just speaking my piece as a consumer. This overall felt… directionless. From what started as a set up to a classic Sissification/NTR story quickly turned into a mess of different plot points and characters being introduced every other chapter. The kidnapping plot line could have easily been its own story but felt to me, shoe horned in to forcefully speed up Steven’s transformation. The cop felt like a last minute decision to give Steven a happy ending, but I only felt pity for him because the only reason he was even in this situation was because Jane went from the loving caring wife to a directionless plot device that keeps fucking over Steven for literally no reason and so suddenly. As well as once again a rushed ending with no sex scene pay off. I think your strength is your ability to pace the feminization of your characters, rite of passage didn’t feel rushed or to short and that’s difficult for erotic writers but the endings always feel like they end just when they’re about to get good. I definitely see potential with symbol of lust, just try not to over complicate things and be confident in writing a simple story for us lifeless sissy gooners.