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Puck 489 - The 'Lost' Original Draft (Patreon)

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2019-04-12 02:19:40
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2026-06
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I said I'd post this glimpse at my first draft of Puck 489's last two panels, so here we are.  Lots of tiny differences.  Nothing too major.  Note that I didn't have the original to go from when I was drawing it a second time.

Which ones do you prefer?  I think I like the second take of the slap panel but the first take of the final panel better.  

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FuryoftheStars

I agree on the first panel. The second panel, I actually like Phoebe looking at the palm vs back of her hand, but do like Daphne's pose in the first take better (not putting her hand to her cheek).

Sylvician

I actually prefer the last version of the second panel, but that is purely because Phoebe's shocked look really tells us how devastated she was of even doing a weak slap.