Beyond the Witchlight: Attempt one thoughts? (Patreon)

Hello all,

I'm starting to prepare maps for Beyond the Witchlight and wanted to see the thoughts of all of you! Please feel free to comment if you have any thoughts on how these will look. Please note that the first section of the book is the witchlight carnival which is technically in the normal realm (not in the Feywild). The Feywild will definitely have a slightly different look to it. 

Anyways, below is a close up of the map in the of the Witchlight Carnival in chapter 1 of the book.

Now, here is that section as a battle ready map.

Any thoughts on how it looks, or is it good to go forward with mapping out the entire carnival?