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Quality check (Patreon)

Published:
2024-05-18 23:36:11
Edited:
2024-05-18 23:41:09
Imported:
2026-06

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This one was an experimental illustration, I want to start playing with weirder concepts and elevate the insanity and creepy factor. I would love feedback on this piece here, do you think the colors were too saturated or dirty?

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Blank88

If you are trying to elevate the insanity and creep factor, keep up the colors. Gives LSD vibes

Max

I'm no artist but from my perspective, the color might just be a little muddy around her leg area? I get that the focus is on her face and everything, but it would be nice if we could see what's goin on down there a little clearer too. Other than that, really lovin the concept here.

Yoyoro

I see, nicee, thanks for the feedback!

Yoyoro

I'm glad you liked it! And yeah her face is the focal point, I was actually thinking that I should have hidden her legs a little more, I think they are still getting more attention than I initially planned XD. Thank you for the feedback tho, I really appreciate it.

Max

It was my pleasure ✌️

VrissyIRL

Graaaah I love this! Turning it 90 degrees makes it easier to "read" everything that's going on, admittedly. But either way it's an incredible piece. The perspective reaally adds to it, every little detail is hff, and overall the art goes real well with the color! I'd say it's best for like, a climax rather than a *whole* comic with the same lighting/color.

Yoyoro

Ohh thank you very much for the feedback! Yeah, I agree that it seems to work better for an important moment, I need to start balancing the use of colors better so that moments like this are more impactful.