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Chapter 10 - COMPLETE

Edited, enhanced and remastered by ME

Illustrations and story by TheWriteFiction

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Side note about me: I am a big fan and supporter of TheWriteFiction, who created an account on patreon as a business associate to promote my work as a producer AND my friend's work with their consent. I know my boundaries and I know what not to upload, and any content I upload to this site I will consult with them and gain their approval before doing so.

As part of my work as a creative, I edit, revise, backcheck, and correct a lot of the drafts TheWriteFiction makes. Obviously he is overwhelmed with the amount of projects he has, and has handed me roles to assist them. The two of us work as a team.

He has a new account on SubscribeStar, as he is no longer welcome here. Link here: https://subscribestar.adult/thewritefiction

Everything I'm doing here is with the author's consent.

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Plot Synopsis: [SPOILERS] Following the Man in Black's meddling aboard the Galactic Patrol Prisoner Ship under the assumed identity of Gaunter O'Dimm, the most dangerous prisoners in Universe 7 are sent hurtling towards Planet Earth.

Meanwhile, unbeknownst to the approaching danger, Gohan is sound asleep following another vigorous day of training and studying. During which, he is visited upon by the most unlikely guest. In the astral plain, Gohan comes face to face with the most famous of the Elder Gods...


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Golden Age Chapters:

Chapter 1 - Prologue [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-96786140

Chapter 2 - Bojack Unbound - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-96836561

Chapter 3 - A Strange Tournament [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-97099436

Chapter 4 - The Galaxy Soldiers [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-97540585

Chapter 5 - Teamwork - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-97684083

Chapter 6 - Measure of Heroism [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-97806816

Chapter 7 - Resolutions [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-98365979

Chapter 8 - Prison Break Arc [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-98507539

Chapter 9 - Consumer of Worlds [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-98703288

Chapter 10 - Contract Conquerors [Remastered] - https://www.patreon.com/posts/96457143

Chapter 11 - Family Business - https://www.patreon.com/posts/99649874

Chapter 12 - Past Demons - https://www.patreon.com/posts/116714980?pr=true

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Canon stories to the future of Golden Age:

Night Out - Zangya X Videl - https://www.patreon.com/posts/night-out-videl-96710034

Beach Harem King - Gohan X Highschool Harem - https://www.patreon.com/posts/beach-harem-king-97149600

A Potential Affair - Future Gohan X Future Bulma - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-96455665

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Golden Age

Original PDF copies of Golden Age canon comics: patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-96455665

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Comments

Nathan Gallegos

A 3some Teen Gohan Zangya and Teen Videl in the shower

GamerLegend09

I seriously hate Patreon for this

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 39* **Top Panels** That breakfast looks delicious not gonna lie **Middle Panels** 😮 *Gasp*…😃😃 GOHAN CAN REMEMBER LU-CHAN!!!😍😍😍😍😍OOOOO I AM SO HAPPY FOR HER!!!! **Bottom Panels** 😅😅😅 Gohan….you need to learn to choose your words more carefully, 😗 aaand the fact that you would’ve wanted your mother there too just digs the hole deeper, I’m positive this’ll make her want to Hire a Therapist for you…..🤪 just saying

GamerLegend09

😡 I F#####G REFUSE TO LET PATREON RUIN THIS FOR ME!!!! 🤬 ALL THAT I’VE COMMENTED AND REVIEWED MAY BE ALL GONE BUT I REFUSE TO LET THIS GET THE BETTER OF ME!!!!

De'Andrae White

*Page 39* She thought he was he laying pipe😏😂😭

Nathan Gallegos

I was hoping Teen Videl would join Teen Gohan in the shower. Shoot all my hopes for nothing 😆

GamerLegend09

😤 ohhh no worries there, write gained a solid follower in me since November 11th 2020 😠 I’ll be damned before I stop now

GamerLegend09

U*Pg. 40* **Top Panels** 😅😅😅😅😅 ya gonna mis-phrase how you spent time with her over there too? **bottom right panels** +Crickets Chirp+😐……. Awkward **bottom left top panel** 😔 it was bound to happen eventually chichi **bottom left lower panel** 🤦🏻‍♂️ F##K!!!

De'Andrae White

How strong is Gohan's base form after the end of your series?

TWF Productions

Gohan's base form is ridiculous at this current point. He can one shot Frieza's full power at this point. Or even take on Android 17. By the end of the series... he can go toe to toe with Golden Frieza in base.

Nathan Gallegos

Pg 41 did Teen Gohan tap that after they went home? Something tells me more than training happened and I want to see what’s happening between her and Gohan in Golden Age story.

Riley Duncan

Are we going to meet Erasa in this chapter? She is Videl’s childhood friend and future wife.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 41* **Top Panel** 😳😳😳😳😳 WHOA FULL FRONTAL THIS EARLY!!? **Bottom right panel** So dumbfounded she doesn’t know how to react right here **Bottom left panel** Y’know the fact that she’s still reacting to her being naked all the time just goes to show how much she needs to get laid right here

Riley Duncan

What do you mean young lady Chi-Chi? Zangya is technically over a century older than you.

TWF Productions

lol. She may be, but she's still gonna treat her as younger than her, because she appears naturally as an 18/20 year old.

Nathan Gallegos

18 keep your mind in the gutter lol Gohan might just jump you

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 42* **Top Panel** 😯 wow look at those rice fields (☺️ and your Tutorial video gives me a newfound appreciation this scenery) **Middle Panels** 😏 ahh finally making yourself known ey? **Bottom Panel** 😬 mmmm!!! She’s trying so hard right here!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 43* **Top right panel** 😌 yeah ok **Top left panel** 😊 we talking a small tent nearby his house? **Middle Right Panel** 🙃 a lot more than just that I’m sure **Middle Center Panel** 🤭…meet the parents (🙂 not sorry) **Middle Left Panel** 😇 oh you pooor innocent Golden Boy **Bottom Panels** 😏 careful Lazuli, your blush is showing

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 44* **Top Panel** ☺️ two of my favorite Lazuli x Gohan GA moments **Middle Panels** 🥰🥰🥰 aaah love is but a beautiful bliss to pay witness to **Bottom Panels** 🎶😫 BABY!!, 😩 WHY DON’T YOU JUST MEET ME IN THE MIDDLE!!🎶 (🤣 STILL NOT SORRY!!, 😏 Reese’s)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 45* **Top Panel** 😑 oh boy…super strong & smart while having the fact she has feelings for him go straight over his head (🤨 is this a curse for bookworms or in this case Partial book worms) **Middle Panel** They’re heeeeere…..Mates 😝 **Bottom right Panels** 😊😇😊 Did ya have a nice Swim? 🏊‍♀️ 🏊‍♂️ **Bottom Panel left** 😂 looking on the brighter side of life here

ShadowRipper

Si no mal recuerdo TWF dijo que golden age no mostraría tanto como los doujins pero me imagino que en algún momento gohan tiene que empezar una relación así que cuando será y quien será la primera?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 46* **Top Right Panel** Oh yeah damn that must’ve been some centrifugal force to have broken that glass cage **Top Left** Damnit another Sharp-witted Villain….😑 another of my least favorite **Middle Panels** 😠 heyyy you leave that poor innocent Crystal Princess Alone! **Bottom Right Panel** 😤 yes he’s very calculative that’s their main Gimmick **Bottom Left Panel** 😡😡😡 oooohhh you old Goat Bastard

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 47* **Top Panel** 🤔 y’know for as smart as they play themself to be **Bottom Right Panel** 🤨 he must’ve ignored The guard Koba when he was giving the rundown of “Her” charges **Bottom Left Panels** 🫤 cause maybe then he wouldn’t have done something this stupid

ShadowRipper

Pag 48 creo que a moro se le olvidó que a todos los que estaban en esa prisión son los pusieron por una razon

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 48* **Top Panel** 😶 and boom goes the Dynamite **Middle Panesl** 😑 You F#####g Goat Dumbass **Bottom Right Panel** 😲oooo 🤩 she could make this into her own Personal/Professional Crystal Sculpting career after this (granted she gives herself a bit of practice if she needed to mold it together by hand……. 😅😅😅 I don’t know if it would be harder making Crystal Clones of other People apart from herself) **Bottom Left Panel** 😌 I knew I didn’t have to worry about her

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 47: This is usually the part where someone who thinks their top shit gets a glorious slice of humble pie. I know this because Homelander does such a fantastic job at making you hate him that so many people have made fan art of him getting his ass kicked either by monsters that are worse than himself or people who actually act like heroes.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 49* Take your best shot Goatman, see how that goes 😀

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg: 49: Finally some violence. Looking forward to seeing Yamcha's future wife throw hands.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 50* 😑 this just makes Goat Man look desperate trying to find an opening 😒 I almost feel sorry for them considering the price they’ll pay in the end

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 51* *Top Panels* 😮 oooo you almost have it *Middle Panels* 😲 Ya gotta be quicker than that *Bottom Panels* aaand 😆👎🏻 NOPE!!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 52* *Top Panels* 😗 ooohhhh 😉👌🏻 THIS close to becoming a pin cushion *Bottom Panels* 😊 I can’t wait to see what more you can do Princess 👑

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 53* 👊🏻😬 DIRECT HIT!!!

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 53: I mean compared to what Janemba or any of the reality warpers from DC/Marvel would've done to him he's getting off easy

GamerLegend09

IKR? Just imagining how Mr. Mxyzptlk could F**K up their shit with the power to Create and Destroy a fully functioning Dimension just cause…..😰 they should count their blessings (😒 however little may be left at this point)

Giorno Giovanna34

He thinks getting stabbed is bad? Try a reality warper taking control of your body and forcing you to rip your own head off. And keep in mind that's Neo when he doesn't feel like being creative. You don't want to know what he would do if you tried to attack or God forbid kill his son.

Silverstrike

So that is the 18 clone. Also I had cracked up when chi chi realized her son is growing up. I think Moro just got skewered…😁

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 54: Well I was right. He's started using his magic, which means Yamcha's future wife will have to start trying now.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 54* 😅😅😅 to be fair princess……we BOTH should’ve seen this one coming

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 55* 😨……😰 did Not read the recent chapters of the Manga sooo did Not know his abilities could do that

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 56* Wait! 😶………. 😬 Where exactly on the other side of the earth did they crash land!?

TWF Productions

Moro's abilities to involve fire and lava, since he can control the energy of the planets' he's on and absorbing the energy from.

TWF Productions

If you imagine the continent wraps around the world, it can be implied based on shot placement that these two are closer to West City than East City.

GamerLegend09

😄😄😄 and refresh my memory….there wouldn’t happen to be a Certain Martial arts school nearby said Shot placement…..😅😅😅 right?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 57* ☺️ she’s a good listener… 😁😁😁 Exactly what Yamcha Needs

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 58* 🫤 OK I know there’s a lot going on in this page right here, 😅😅😅 but only one thing stands out to me is the fact that I learned a new word I never heard of before. (😉 not that that’s a bad thing knowledge is power after all)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 59* 😃 *Gasp* I just thought of another profession for her… 🤩A Jewelry Craftsman🤩…..😆 it’d be PERFECT!!…🤷🏻‍♂️ I mean Granted her abilities specialize in crystallization techniques but I mean Crystals can be made into jewelry too…..and maybe her abilities can help her cut and polish certain gems for said profession

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 61* 😱😱😱 HOLYF#####GSHIT!!!!

ShadowRipper

Pag 61 llegó papa a detener la pelea de los niños

Silverstrike

Well this is going to be interesting. Because that Cthulhu wants to devour his soul. Gohan needs to be careful and not be naive and befriend every pretty lady he meets.

ShadowRipper

Pag 63 Recordaba a scorch más robusto me imagino que tanto tiempo sin comer lo adelgazo

De'Andrae White

Is Scorch skinny cuz he hasn't absorb any energy yet

Chris Cannon

All caught up and I don’t know where to begin. For now I’ll just say I love how you’re handling Vidro. And Scorch’s presence has gotten even more frightening.

GamerLegend09

😊 Cthulhu might be in just as much trouble, I predict some heavy conflicted moments for her 😏😏😏

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 62* 😄 Hiya there Scorchy, did ya lose some weight?….😅😅😅 or a limb?

TWF Productions

He's apparently still partially bound in the bottom layers of his prison straightjacket, and emaciated from lack of energy food.

De'Andrae White

*Pg. 64* Oh nah, giving bro a boost in power🤦🏾

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 63* 😬 a New Challenger has entered the fight!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 64* 🤨 ok unless that Fireball was some part of magic ho-……🙂 never mind…🙃 I’ll just wait and watch

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 64: Scorch absorbs energy so....yeah have fun with that Walmart Krampus.

ShadowRipper

Si no mal recuerdo el ya estaba aprendiendo de piccolo y zangya cuando entrenaron juntos

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 65* 🤪 yeah no yeah that tracks…🤓 but now we know that They potentially might be able to absorb “ANY” type of energy based attacks

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 66* 😁 if only going to the GYM was 😄 THAT 👉🏻 💪🏻 easy

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 67* **My thoughts if I was there** 😤🙏🏻……😠🙏🏻 you’re a f#####g Dumbass Goat Geezer

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 68* 😑 yeah there’s no hiding the fact you just did a stupid ya Goat Half-wit Dumbass * edited*

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 69* 😥 Please don’t get hurt too badly princess

Glenn Baco

Nice Scooby doo and the witch's ghost reference.

Tobi

Pg 22 wtf that look was the movie that bad??? O_O

Tobi

Pg 23 HOLY COW was movie that horrible you have burn the series how long was I gone D:>