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Story and writing by ME

Illustrations by TheWriteFiction

Since I loved the artwork my friend came up with (and I enjoyed editing it), I requested a short comic from him to cap off this month.

I always fancied Erasa, so this'll be an interesting piece.

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Kam

Booba

Dean Zamp

Erasa 😍 in her very own "Flying Accident" what a good idea TWF. Since you have lots of pull with Write I was wondering what you think about possibly some creatively unique sex positions for this project since both are able to fly & it's flight themed? Thoughts? Also Gohan for whatever reason is particularly... let's say "manly" in Flying Accident, could this be a sequel to that? Since this could be (I'm fairly sure it might be because they're clever); why wouldn't Write wanna build certain concepts together in an alternate universes pertaining to specific tropes topics that align.

Chris Cannon

Videl: (Scoffs) Beginner’s luck. Goten: Earlier, she also learned how to shoot pew-pews! Goten: It was awesome! Videl: WTH, Gohan!? Videl: I wanna shoot pew-pews!

Chris Cannon

I like this. Given her carefree go with the flow type of style, it goes to show she’s a natural born talent at this compared to Videl. *Spoiler* Although it does make me wonder if she’s unintentionally using magic instead of ki.

GamerLegend09

*Cover/Pg. 1* 😆 I can just picture Goten saying “mommy why is she wearing underwear with no clothes on?”

GamerLegend09

*Cover/Pg. 1 Pt. 2* 😉 also, I love what you did with the title just like the take flight Videl episode in Z

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 2* **all 4 Panels** 😄 ah… way to show off them lethal Weapons Golden Boy (😏 luv it) **Bottom Left Panel** 🤩🤩🤩oooo that’s a cool new Design for a hover Car

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 3* 😳..🙄😳🙄..😳……..ok I admit it…. Erasa Doujins are a HOT!! 🥵 Thirst Trap

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* **Top Right Panel** 😳 she’sonherknees! **Top Left Panel** 😗 oh my god you could Grind meat off tho- 😵 GAH!! **Middle Right Panel** 😬 from this angle, it looks like something is entering through the valleys **Middle Left Panel** 🫢& From this angle they look like apples 🍎 **Bottom Right Panel** 🤥 & from this angle, they look like melons 🍈 🍉 **Bottom Right Panel** 🫠 Helloooo Doggie

Luis2002

Video and 18 comic to be continue????

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* 😛 This’s the Best, 😆 Wardrobe malfunction moment, 🤩 EVER!!!! (Now confirmed, 😤 Busty Blondes are a new hot fetish for me)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5 Pt. 2* 🤨 also I’m a little surprised I thought Gohan had the tolerance of a saint by this point, or is this before he developed a safely tolerance to nude shenanigans?

Mrryn

Is it just me, or are others getting notis linking to this but still only seeing the same first 4 pages?

Mrryn

Must be just an app thing. Even the email noti says 6 images, but pulling up the app even from that link still just shows 4. Sadge

TWF Productions

I suspect it's an app thing. I opened it in internet/google on my phone and it worked. Let me know if the app manages to refresh properly.

Mrryn

Yeah, I just checked and it works fine checking Patreon through a browser even on mobile. It's just the app that isn't updating for some reason

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* 😅 and we’re veering off course from flying lessons…..😁 not that I didn’t see that coming, 😉 it’d be nice if Erasa was the next girl I see Gohan Bang in the sky other than Videl (😄 it was the GT variant of them Banging in the Sky from said Doujin)

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 6: I can't think of a more obvious sign that a girl likes you than her giving the "I don't mind if its you" line.

Jesus

Will you be making new pages of this one as well

Juan Cuellar

can you please continue this doujins

Jesus

Can't wait to see this story completed

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7* Shokuji o tanoshimu ☺️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️ 😏🍆🍆🍆

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 8* 😗🎵 lookit dem Melons work that 5 Dollar Foot Long

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 9* 🤯🤯🤯 OHH DAYUM!! She’s scarfing it down like she’s going to lose it bruh 😎

Jesus

I can't read the new pages on the app or website on patreon even tho it says its 11 pages I only keep seeing 8 or 9 pages

Tobi

Pg 5. Sigh I knew from cover Gohan going get good romp from erasa she just can't go one night without can't she :/

Jesus

Will we see new pages in the future