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Hi guys! Part 24 of the Bet is ready. I hope you guys enjoy the ending. This was the first story I ever wrote and I’m glad so many people liked it. I have started a new story and plan to start another one so there will be two stories on rotation. I hope you guys will like them and will continue to support me. As always thank you for all the continued support!

Part 24

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Weresmurf

Whys it say tbc?

Lewdtext

That’s my bad. I will fix it. I’m just so used to putting that once I’m done

Lewdtext

Fixed. Thanks for letting me know!

Weresmurf

All good. It's an ok ending, just wish there were actual consequences for her to some degree. Still, good job

Sarana

nice Story~ <3

Lewdtext

Thank you! What kind of consequences were you wishing for if you don’t mind sharing

Weresmurf

It feels like they both got off scott free. Comedically, it would've been fitting for her to get knocked up and not know which ones the Dad I guess. There's the idea she could've dropped all of them after he tricked her and moved on. Then there'd be the out of left field idea she could've gone away from the main two, we find out she's been screwing the third guy behind both their backs as he's the only one who doesn't treat her like a toy, or neglect her etc. Many possibilities. But ultimately it probably ended the most realistic way where assholes get away with stuff :)

bvk

can we get that folder at the end? maybe uploaded on imgchest