From Script to Page: Comic #1 (Patreon)

COMIC #1 

Panel 1 

Profile shot: Ally is on her laptop sitting indian­style on her bed. She is wearing cute PJs with a dinosaur pattern on the bottoms and a pink tank top for top. She has a green dinosaur stuffed animal next to her.

ALLY (CAPTION): Hi, my name is Ally and I’m transgender.

ALLY (CAPTION): What that basically means is I was born a boy but live my life as a girl. It freaks some people out. It also turns some people on. 

ALLY (CAPTION): Makes it hard to date anyone seriously because there is never a middle ground. 

Panel 2 

Same profile shot: Ally now has her thumb in her mouth while she contemplates a response. 

ALLY (CAPTION): I’ve been on dating sites for as long as I can remember and it’s pretty much a nightmare of epic­nish proportions. 

ALLY: “Do I do ATM?” Oh beejeebus, you had to ruin it didn’t you, “ILUVTRANNIES68”? 

Panel 3 

Ally looks over at her stuffed dinosaur. 

ALLY: Mr. Dino, we need to get out in the world and meet some real people. 

Final version: http://www.validationcomic.com/comic/validation-1/