From Script to Page: Comic #8 (Patreon)

COMIC #8 

PANEL 1

Ally is walking down a sidewalk in a downtown shopping district. She is happily within herself. She is listening to music via earbuds from the phone in her hand. She is humming along so let’s add some musical notes around her mouth and head. 

ALLY (CAPTION): Sometimes I get in a groove and I forget where I’m at. 

PANEL 2 

Side shot. Ally ignores two guys sitting at a table in a cafe outdoor patio. They are whispering to each other. 

GUY 1: Dude, I think that’s a tranny. 

GUY 2: No way, she’s a guy? 

PANEL 3 

Ally is walking on in the distance. The two guys look on after her. General cafe and sidewalk business all around. 

ALLY (CAPTION): Sometimes to stay in that groove you have to ignore the world around you. 

Final version: http://www.validationcomic.com/comic/validation-8/