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I added a Lazlo scene and some additional scenes for the club scene :)

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Anastasia

Oh, groovy, but on mobile the first page ends/cuts off at "We are criminals." with no option to go beyond.

Aetheries

The updates are coming along nicely :) I do not see these issues listed elsewhere so I will add them here just incase: 1) A little off here, "should read young man": “Luce!” your father called behind you. “Come back, young $gender!” 2) Double line here: His voice was barely audible. If you knew him better than what he let you know, perhaps you would’ve had enough confidence to say he was ashamed—of you? Of what he was asking? You felt hurt. You only ever tried to be nice to him. What was he implying? You felt hurt. You only ever tried to be nice to him. What was he implying? 3) Error here: Her voice has a tone you’ve never heard before. Sam was always so friendly, she never once raised her voice or had a mean streak. She spoke to you with love.Error: cannot find a closing tag for HTML … Even if you deserved it for your indifference towards her. 4) Male MC is referred to as ma'am even when sir is selected: “MA’AM!” Charley whispers furiously but you stand up.