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This was the outline that I used to create the story "A brief pause" which can be found here: http://www.spiralsnightclub.com/2018/03/ncu-brief-pause.html  It is the first of the N.C.U. story line. 

 (The outline may differ from the final story line) (also spoilers). 

Yuto P.D. 

  • Eve working as an assistant to the P.D. 
  • Cleaning up leftover stuff from sleepndarlin's stories (Sleepndarlin is my IRL girlfriend).
  • Working on cleaning the stasis pod she trips and hits the button the close the door.
  • Two buttons open and freeze.  
  • Hits wrong button

Ten years of bureaucratic bullshit later

New Chicago University

  • Trisha working on grad student project
  • Going through stuff sent from Yuto
  • Discovers cryopod, about to discard it when discovers person in it. 
  • Drags in Laura to try and help her open it. 
  • While Laura is working on the pod Trisha discovers hypnotic device left over from spirals
  • Hypnotizes herself with it. 
  • Laura manages to open the pod and thaw Eve
  • Tries to explain what's going on and that ten years have passed
  • They discover trisha tranced and eve turns off the device
  • Trisha starts to ask her questions in high speed style
  • Eve is distracted looking at the hypnotic device
  • Accidentally turns it on and hypnotizes herself
  • Trisha see’s and realizes what her grad project should be, on hypnosis and susceptibility
  • Gives suggests to eve to want to stay and move in with trisha for observation
  • Laura objects, but trisha turns the device on her and programs her with a new memory
  • Scene ends with trisha looking at laura and eve and deciding a little … fun might be in order.

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