For the Patrons (Patreon Exclusive) - N.C.U. - Outline (Patreon)

So, I am going to be starting to write a story for the N.C.U. characters based on the polls that I put out before, Below is the outline, it is full of SPOILERS!  I can't say how close it will be to the final product as I literally just finished it.  Enjoy... if you dare!

Laura’s dorm room

• Trisha, Rayne, and Laura are discussing funding for sorority. 
• They come up with some fun ideas, for later
• Trisha comments that she asked a pro to come help them out. 
• On que knock at door. 
• Nadia comes in, looking professional
• Discusses the idea of a stage hypnosis show. 
• Debate about whether or not they could do a stage show
• Laura and trish are confident rayne not so much. 
• Nadia says she can help rayne. 
• Hypnotizes her. Gives her confidence. 
• Gieves her a trigger to bring it out. 
• Wakes her up. Then triggers her. 
• Rayne goes into hypnotist mode and hypnotizes laura and trisha easily
• Goes to hypnotize nadia but gets put out before she can. 
• Nadia gets an evil grin and tells the three hypnotized girls she’s like to make a modification to their plans.

3 days later

Student Union Hall, 

• Backstage laura and trisha are excited rayne is pacing. 
• They notice several of their friends have shown up. 
• Basic cast of N.C.U. 
• Also notice Lindsey brought jennifer. 
• Lights Dim, Laura shakes with excitement and runs on stage. 
• Starts doing her pre-talk
• Audience members banter about hypnosis being real or not. 
• Laura gets to the part about introducing her cohosts. 
• Rayne has a freak out, Trisha tries to calmher down to use the trigger but she is freaking too muc. 
• Trisha grabs rayne and kisses her as a distraction. 
• Rayne is completely baffled, trisha uses the trigger
• Sexy scne of trigger taking effect. 
• The girls go out on stage and all take a bow
• On stage banter with the three girls to the audience. (should be hard as hell to write). 
• Asks the audience if anyone has ever been hypnotized before? 
• None of the N.C.U. girls remember it. Neither does jennifer. 
• Hypnotists look around and comment they need an assistant. 
• Drags one of the girls on stage. 
• Rayne puts them under in front of everyone.
• Does a few stage gags with the girl. 
• The hypnotists turn to the audience and in unison say something about ‘picking whose next’ (figure it out later).

Selection

• All three girls move into audience.
• Rayne Hypnotizes Eve
• Trisha hypnotizes Jackie
• Laura hypnotizes Cheyenne
• Rayne and Trisha hypnotize Carly
• Laura hypnotizes Christine
• Laura and Rayne Hypnotize Jessy
• Trisha and Laura hypnotize Klaire
• All three girls hypnotize Lindsey
• Lindsey hypnotizes Jennifer while the other three treat her like a puppet on strings. 
• Brings the girls all up on stage and puts them on chairs. 

Stage show

• Deepener, do a realistic one and get the girls deep. 
• Stage gag 1
• Stage gag 2
• Stage gag 3
• Sexual gag 1
• Sexual gag 2
• Sexual gag 3
• Maybe more?
• Rayne gets dominant with the girls, puts laura under
• Puts trisha under
• Starts to dominate the girls as Laura and trisha move from person to person whispering.
• Madkes them all call her mistress.  Ham it up. 
• Trisha wakes up winks at audience
• Sneask up behind Rayne and puts her out.

Wrapping up the show

• Has the girls programed to stand and give a sexy goodbye to everyone
• The hypnotists all take their bows while the girls act sexy and flirty. 
• Lights change to a blue tint and Nadia’s voice says “Freeze!” over the speaker
• All girls are completely frozen. 
• Descriptions
• Nadia walks out and comments that the real show is about to begin. 
• As she says this the females in the audience get a dazed look in their eyes. 
• Nadia comments about the subliminals being a wonderful thing. 
• Starts to auction the hypnotized girls off one by one. 

Individual scenes

• Brief run downs of what the guys make the girls do. 
• Eve
• Jackie
• Cheyenne
• Klaire
• Carly
• Jessy
• Christine
• Lindsey
• Jennifer
• Laura
• Trisha
• Rayne
• Shows Nadia walking back stage with a wad of cash counting it. 
• Smiles and walks in directly into the line of sight of a pocket watch
• Unknown male character uses it to hypnotize her. 
• Has his way with her. While pocketing the money. 

Next day. 

• Girls all head home deeply hypnotized. 
• Klaire and rayne
• Lindsey and Jennifer
• Christine and jessy
• Carly and Jackie
• Cheyenne (and her roommate, Erin? maybe?)
• Trisha and Laura
• Nadia.

The end. 

• All girls walk out hypnotized and thank the patrons. 
• Shameless plug here =cP

Epilogue

• Email from Jennifer to thief and apprentice, 
• Details hypnotic events, 
• Shameless plug
• Maybe include a picture? (I like that idea!)