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Very quick lil cover mock up for y'all before the kickstarter goes live (hopefully next tuesday but waiting on confirmation!)

I'm stuck on what to name this one - vol.1 was "At First Flight" which I thought was a cute pun, but I'm struggling on not doing something super cliche for this one! Main points in this book are: meeting Cyras and him getting involved in Scra's life, the storm flying class where ree falls, ree being offered a deal by reamer to kill ky, ky getting caught by cyras and apologizing to scra, and the three getting closer as friends. 

so far I have:

Dark Wings, Long Shadows

Temple of the Sun-Reacher

Caught In Your Slipstream

Gathering Storm

A Break in the Clouds

A Hint/Slice of Blue

The Crow with the Neck Tattoo

Blue eyes, Blue Skies

 

yes some are ridiculous lol I'm usually better at naming things but I've set a strange punny president for some reason and I'm at a LOSS haha, Would love y'alls opinions on any of these? 

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Heather

I kinda like gathering storm

Mediea_Nim

I kinda like the Crow with the Neck Tattoo

Pilar Swanson

Maybe do a poll? Break in the Clouds is speaking things.

Phylicia

I like gathering storm and also caught in your slipstream

Destii

Naming things is hard! This is really the volume where things get worse before they get better so, to match that tone, my two faves are Gathering Storm and Dark Wings, Long Shadow

Kaylee

Gathering storm or caught in your slipstream

Memphis Magpie

I really, /really/ like Blue Eyes, Blue Skies

meniph

How can I choose when all of these are amazing but crow with the neck tattoo is speaking things to me

dantnty

gathering storm or blue eyes blue skies!!! i think both thematically work really well

Firehawk

Gathering Storm. It’s very angsty.

Amélie

This cover is amazing!! They all look so good on it 🥹 As for the title, I think I like Gathering Storm the best considering everything happening in this volume and the rain on the cover ⛈️

Nyx Covault

I like Gathering Storm. I also like Crow with the Neck Tattoo but since he isn't pictured here it makes less sense to me idk

Sav

I also really like Gathering Storm. It feels like that point in the story is where things begin ramping up and continue to get more tense from there

Keru

'Birds of a Feather' :D

Divinely Diva Zebra

‘Caught in your Slipstream’ seems to vibe best with me. We are afterall still seeing the plot go from slight side lovey-dovey with some intrigue to ‘Murkey Ass Morals Everywhere’ ‘Gathering Storm’ works best with the later chapters when the old crows on the island get purged or the wedding gets crashed.

Mari

I'm thinking something about "Secondaries". Like the feathers. (Typing first things that come to mind; almost definitely trash) Clipped Secondaries. Secondary Flight Feathers. Secondary Fledge. Secondary Opinions. Secondary Chances. Secondary Risks. EDIT, SINCE I CAN'T DO PARAGRAPHS- Or Dark Wings, Long Shadows. I like that one because shadows are starting to be cast by all the murky shenanigans.

kreativeart93

Caught in your slipstream, I like gathering storm but it used a lot so slipstream is more unique