Author's Commentary 76: 13:05-08 - oops all tiers (Patreon)

Sorry for accidentally posting this to all tiers this morning. To make up for my oopsie I'm releasing it to all tiers for real. Enjoy one of 76 similar posts that go to the Scholar tier.

I really enjoyed this interaction with Rosemary (and the Freddi joke). I felt like it was pretty efficient in character building, relationship building, and even some world building (something I don't do very much of in Familiar, lol). I always meant to write a bunch of stuff on Rosemary's notebook but I just never got around to it.

One of my FAVORITE PANEL SEQUENCES OF ALL TIME is on page 8: Diana looking at her notes and thenlooking up. I don't know why, I just liked how it went. Simple but perfect.

And: Finally, some ✨exclusive BTS content✨ in an author's commentary.... two thumbnails I cut before the final! Diana deciding what she wanted to do at the Spot with Rosey and a transitional NYC page. I actually decided for this moment I wanted Rosemary to give Diana the encouragement, but I wanted her final decision to be made back at her apartment with Jack. :)