Author's Commentary 88: 15:18-25 (Patreon)

Accidentally forgot to uncheck advanced access when posting this so here it is for everyone i guess!

I think this might go down in Familiar history as one of the best/most memorable sequences. At least, that was the goal. We built up to it for so long!

In looking at the thumbnails all in a row like this, I'm especially proud of the visual and pose continuity of Jack pulling Diana's robe open. It was intentional and paid off.

I also remember this being a challenge because it's where the chapter was halved for release. I had to kind of invent a "commercial break" in the middle in a way that felt OK to wait for 2 months, but also didn't feel weird for anyone after the fact reading it cover to cover in one sitting. I hope it worked out okay.

Freddi was planned to have a noticeable boner in this scene but it got upstaged by Diana's boobs........ as is expected......

Yes, I put the knots and frictions in the back so no one can scrutinize my depiction of them after Jack talks about how specific they are.

There's something to be said about consent here but I'll save the comment for the next section because the consent climax, if you will, is in those pages.

IDK what else to say. I love these pages. They turned out like I wanted them. I did a good job. You're welcome!!