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Here's the first part of FFD 58 everyone. Had to find a good way to cut it off so that I wouldn't have half the entire chapter in this thing. It's probably going to be pretty heavily edited later on as things progress, but it at least has the direction I was aiming for.

Enjoy.

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Alex Pruitt

Oh this is nice... Shirou gets a planned murder spree... I'm looking forward to it.

TheGDKite

Why could I not get Scab's little omake in Kumo out of my head when reading this?

ThirdFang

I know. This is pre beta after all. I normally reread and go over my chapters half a dozen times and smooth things out before even sending it to wayfarer.

ThirdFang

Thanks. As for what's happening in the US? I'm of the opinion that both candidates are full of it. One is just more competent than the other. It's too early to have any solid statements on what to expect right now, but odds are that it'll take a while for everything to calm down here before we can stabilize our relations with everyone else in the world. That said, I do hope that pressure is kept up on china. I truly do feel for the people there, but their current culture and ruling government is a plague on the rest of the world. It doesn't have anything to do with communism. Their rulers and setup is just flat out trash regardless of what rules are in place. It might be a bit radical to suggest it, but I think the current China needs to be broken up like Russia did if that part of the world wants any hope of long term stabilization.

ThirdFang

Hell no. FFD Shirou would not survive being in bed with one of them. much less both. First of all, he can't fill out leather pants and clap his ass cheeks like EMIYA Alter can, which rules out Kiara, and he isn't a mother-con, which lowers his odds of dealing with Mama Raikou to nothing.

Breaker

I find it pretty interesting to wonder whether Shirou still wants to be a hero and a human at this point. He’s getting pretty scary haha