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Hey gang,

First off - this song can't be shared anywhere outside of here, but I know yall get that :)

Here's the song I made in the course that's going to release in a month or so. In it I'll share everything I did in real time to get there. Exciting!

Gonna get this mixed/mastered and eventually release it everywhere, but for the forseeable future it's exclusive for you guys!

Lyrics:

Verse:

My fingers dancing on your skin

Completely intertwined

I never thought I'd trust again

Betrayed so many times


I hear you in the other room

You're humming to yourself

The bed still smells of your perfume

And I log onto yelp


Chorus:

It's been four months since I got it

And if I am to be honest

I was unsure at first

Thought that it wouldn't work

Thought that I might get hurt


Some safety features are missing

And sometimes it doesn't listen

but it's a sleek design

Glad I made it mine

Five stars out of five


Bridge:

I was surprised

 it looked better than the pictures

 It makes me laugh

built in entertainment system

It synced with me

 Effortlessly 

Out of the box

Sadly they're out of stock 

Or else I'd order lots, yeah


Chorus:

 it's 40 years since I got it

And if I am to be honest

I was unsure at first

Thought that it wouldn't work

Thought that I might get hurt


And hurt I was, cause I'm crying

But all our lives, we were thriving

Farewell for now, my wife

the love of my life

Five stars out of five


Comments

Alle Engdahl

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Lianne Conroy

This is a great concept. I like this song

Genevieve

It sounds great! Can't wait for the course now 😊

Airyckah Lane

And now I’m crying… wtf Joel… the lyrics are good play on words and how people view things and people these days, but the message is still so… warm. Whether you meant it to be deep or not, they still ended up being “smart lyrics” as I call them. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Mari

This turned out so good!!!! I'm really vibing with all of this and I love the lyrics, they're very clever. You killed it with the vocals as well 🙌 I wish I could put this on my spotify playlist lol ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

emy

This is so feel-good. And I love those orchestral sounding drums in the chorus, they’re siiick. Thanks for giving us the early listen!!

Aubrey Danielle

Duuuuuude I have chills! This is so good! You are crazy talented but that’s no surprise! I’m so excited for the course my eyes are gonna pop outta my head 🤣🤣🌟🌟👑

Shiny

Five out of five 😁 the concept is interesting and it’s a bop. Catchy as anything

Melinda Young

That sounds so good. Love it a lot.

Dannielle O'Neill

Beautiful, Joel <3. Very nicely done. Can't wait to see the course (even more excited for it now!).

Shauna

This is really cute. ❤️ I can only imagine how good it will sound mastered

Cas

I was a little concerned with you calling a person an "it" but you made up for that with the last verse. I'm not crying.

Melissa

I absolutely love this sound! Especially the more acoustic/softer sound. The transitions were excellent and your voice is sounding better all the time! Can't wait to hear what you come up with next. ❤️

Courtney Walker

Such a heartwarming song! The lyrics are amazing. And the song has great movement and is something that will live in my head longer than just when hearing it play. Great job as always!

♠️ Aslyn Jobry ♠️

Review: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Hardworking boi made me smile. P.S. It's the weekend now. Please rest well.

Becky Lorion

Absolutely in love with this song! Thank you for giving us the chance to hear it first 😊

Bookdragon 43

Love this song!! Thanks so much giving us an early listen. 🥰🔥👍👏🎶

Gayle

Beautiful, just beautiful...thank you 🥰🥰😘😘😘

Sugary Magnolia

Wow I love it! Line 4 especially, and some of the next few lines, there's a kind of raspiness, gruffness that I don't think I've heard in your voice before. It's a very emotional and raw sound. What else could you do with this 🤔

xtina 🖤

Your voice is sooo good. You may have already mentioned this but how will we see your music course, will it be on youtube or a different Patreon tier? I love videos where you create songs :) … I can’t wait. I’m having withdraws-I need more Joel songs in my playlist! sniffy dust withdrawal lol..but this exclusive gave me a nice fix! thanks for sharing it with us early!

Elli

Well done! Love the lyrics and your voice 🎶🎶👏👏

Mari

Did you not watch the high note challenge video? it's literally the standard I hold his vocals to

Miriam

So great!! The chorus is definitely my favorite part!! Aww the ending is sweet, but sad!

Jen 🦙

Thank you for the exclusive, it’s so, so good! 😊 The lyrics are incredible and hit hard, they could work on so many different sound productions but the vibe of the song works so well with them 👏🏻

Dorie

This made me go awwwww. Can’t wait til it get released. You sounded great. Really love your voice on the verses and love the way you switched it up when you sang “the love of my life.” 💕

Hayley

OK, the first line has me excited already 🫠

Calize

Wowza

Hayley

Yes, yes, YES! Just listened (I read through the lyrics first) and I looooove it. Your voice is on fire and the concept is great, it's a tricky one- it could have gone either way but you nailed it! Obviously. You should be proud 👏🏼 ~The only thing FOR ME (because I feel like an ogre for saying anything even remotely negative and don't want to be attacked, lol!) is the jump from 3 months to 40 years is quite an escalation...I definitely feel like you could have some fun with another verse with some mid-relationship goings on... But that said, I'm no expert and what you have done is 👌🏼chef's kiss~ Peace out ☮️

Marioni

Love the song! I've only listened to it once so far, but it's already stuck in my head like crazy! Your voice sounds amazing! In the past when you wanted more power sometimes you would sound like you pushed it out a bit too much, but this sounds so much more relaxed. Great job! 💪

Rainbowz Grace

Wowwww I love this one! Can’t wait to put this STRAIGHT in my playlist 😂The frickin chorus is gonna be in my head all day noww haha ❤️

Nataliekey

Dude, it's a beautiful day outside, I just woke up and saw this and plopped this on while wakinandbakin 😏 was vibing cause it's a bob 😊👍 but what the hell did you do that 'james Arthur - say you won't let go'- switcheroo at the end for???? 😭😭😭😭 Now I'm baked and sad 😭😭🤣🤣🤣 But honestly though, this is a winner imho 😊😊👍👍

JustSomeJK

I read the lyrics before listening to the song and got some tears in my eyes when I got to the end of them (must be some eyelash or other crap) 😅🥲🥹 There's many little things in the song and in your voice, that I like a lot, but since I suck at the terms, I'll just say that I love it 🎶🥰 Your vocals are 🔥, lyrics are cool/touching and that build up is awesome. Well done Joel, 5/5 🤩 Thanks for letting us listen to it here!

Clair (Teampanda)

Ok I haven't listened yet and some peeps are saying it has a sad ending.. I read the lyrics and my first thought was you talking about your first drumkit or synth 🤣🤣 Now I'm going to listen to it and comment how wrong I was!

Adina

Thanks for sharing your song with us. Now that you seem to have finished up most of the stuff you need for the course can we expect you filming and releasing some videos on your channel? I know you said last time you were talking about this that you will have mixed content coming out, both songwriting and reaction videos. I’m curious if you have a plan, on upload frequency or anything like that

Clair (Teampanda)

I still believe you are talking about the love of your life, your only wife, your synthesizer! She hums to herself (especially in demo mode) She has soft skin (especially if custom wrapped) She leaves the smell of perfume in your bed (stop excessively rubbing it on your sheets!) Lol 🤣 I do like the vibe, 5 stars out of 5 is a mouthful so well done singing that without it becoming a mumble! It's interesting how you've created chapters in the song (beginning, middle, end) and with that different flows for the story telling. If this is indicative of the course material, you are going to be a busy boy, well done 👍 x

Franceska

Awesome, as usually your songs. Great vibe - partly funny /romantic / nostalgic ❤️

BellatrixBerghult

Oh wow Babes, that is a vibe! Jag älskar det! Tack så mycket!

Helga 🦊

Honestly the concept rubbed me wrong firstly when I saw the lenses and I was a bit disappointed then…But! I was mistaken! I really like the whole song and imho you’ve mastered the lyrics 👏🏼 They’re simple on one hand but have such a nice deep meaning on the other, and that’s exactly what I love! Thank you, Joel, for writing this song and sharing it with us 🫶🏼 P.S. Life reminds me again that I shouldn’t judge the book by its cover.

Kinga Konyecsik

I love that the chorus feels big, different from the other parts and hits. I can't wait to listen it other than here.

Aleece

Duuuuuuude, I listened without reading the lyrics beforehand. I was vibing until I got hit right in the feels with the 2nd chorus. Nicely done - I really like the “full circle” type lyrics in songs (for lack of better description)

Dannielle O'Neill

Idk why it took me another listen to need to come back and say it, but that was a very nice touch at the end. 💓💓💓 Also...Surely, unintentional discreet humming in the grocery store doesn't count as violation of Pat terms? 😬 asking for a friend...lol

Brandt

Your voice is amazing, the song too of course!

Gayle

Joel, can't get enough of this start my day, end my day with this🥰🥰❤️❤️😍😍😘😘 you are sooooo amazing!!!!

Karmas05

like everythings you do I love it and for real I love your voice so amazing 🥰🥰