Home
Creators
Search Recent Random
Posts
Search DMs Popular Hash Lookup Tags Random
Importer
Import FAQ
Register Favorites Keys Review DMs Logout
Community
Telegram ThePornDude
Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout

Song Demo: Suffer (Patreon)

Published:
2024-02-04 20:49:28
Imported:
2026-06
haven't archived this post yet. have a subscription? use the importer!

Downloads

  • Suffer.wav

Missing 1 file, as this post has not yet been imported.

Content

This is what I've been working on this weekend! Lemme know what you think. Verse is gibberish, chorus I'm kinda ok with, maybe some variations in the lyrics the second time could be in order tho.

One interesting thing I tried was straight 8th notes in the chorus on top of a triplet beat, at "messing up my rhythm...", making it a bit meta. I like it, haven't heard that done before. Kinda nerdy.

Enjoy! :D

Comments

Marioni

I like it a lot. Interestinf vibe! Your newer songs sound very recognizable like you!

Shauna

This. Is. So. Funky.

Elle Quinn

This beat 👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽 ahhh love it. Chorus totally slaps but you’re right with the verse deffo needs tweaking. I hope you finish this, would love it on Spotify

Airyckah Lane

It’s very boybandesque… which is a good thing for someone like me.. The “messin up my rhythm and actin like we are friends again”… how the key drops (is that right?)… that’s one of my favorite styles/rhythms in songs and really fits there

Dannielle O'Neill

😎👍Sounds like it's coming along nicely. Happy music making 🎶

Naomiskyyy

Love the sound of this!😊

Melissa Rogers

I like it when you get a little bit nerdy, Joel. It means that I can learn things. 😁

Melissa Rogers

Maybe working on this song can be part of a new “making music” video?! 🙏🏻🙏🏻

Artemisia-the3rd

Love the instrumentation, love the melody, love the vocals! I was not expecting a "love song" though. I thought you wanted to fight someone, XD. Keep working on it, it's very catchy 👍

Miriam

Love the chorus and overall vibe of the song!!

Dorie

🔥 love the beat and the melody. And the nerdiness. 😆 Agree on tweaking the words for the second part of the chorus. Can’t wait to here more.

Nina L

Sounds amazing, it's very catchy, love the way of singing too

Snoodle

Your voice is sick in this. I like it, it's a bit The Wknd but thats good ❤️

Courtney Walker

Love the beat! It is different than a lot of recent stuff and I like it! Very cool vibe.

Valerie Tisdel

I really like the duple over triple thing.

Bua (mintteafortwo)

I'm a music dumb dumb, so all I can say is this track sounds pretty funky and me likey 😬 Love, love, love the bass in this one 😎

xtina 🖤

🔥man - ya have so many cool songs started! i like the vibe, attitude, and style a lot so far!!!

JustSomeJK

Thanks for sharing this 🥰 🎶 It was way nicer to wake up to a Monday morning with this funky beat 🙂 That unusual beat matching the lyrics like that was a very cool idea 😎 Can't wait to see this song grow and to hear the rest of the lyrics 🙂

Sugary Magnolia

The funk line reminds me of Higher Ground by Stevie Wonder - absolutely love it!

Jen 🦙

The rhythmic disconnect in the chorus combined with the sharpened 6th followed by the synth build up is pretty neat, I like it! This is feeling like an 80s and early 90s comeback simultaneously, pretty cool 🙂

Roomie
>>128854923

That’s the one!! I was thinking it reminded me of stevie wonder but couldn’t find the song. The vibe is similar, bass riff too, but not suuper close which is nice. I close the clavinet thing because I thought of him

Franceska

Hell yeah! I love this 2024 Joel with fight mode on 🔥 Suffer (no more) seems perfect message and kind of motivation for me too, because last 2 month were truly disaster… So thank you Joel for being you, and sharing your music and thoughts with us 🖤 It makes my life much more bearable on so many levels

Mona

Love it so much! Might be my second fave after Bit by bit!

Elli

So catchy, love the beat 🎶🎶

Gayle

Joel, so very sexy. Channeling emotions and just synthesizing all that power...so very seductive and sexy. The rhythm that you chose and tempo adds to this overall grabbing at ones core....at least for me. Just want to reach out and dance with that special person to this, whisper the words into their ear, add a few of your own. Put this on repeat and just be in the moment. Just really putting out how this gets me. Joel, in a way the industry is an idiot to let you be you in a contract. They will at some point be begging. This newer stuff that you are producing is just so wonderful. You amaze me, put me in an awe of really talented you are, and I know there's more amazing music within you that I'm excited to hear. I swear I'm not just saying that in relation to how much I love you....it's more because I love you I feel compelled to let you know how truly amazing you are in my eyes. Within my heart, it's close to the rhythm of this song. Thank you ✌️✌️✌️❤️❤️❤️😂😂😂

Gayle

Sorry, but I had an idea for a verse: when I look at the picture I just understand what is wrong , why does it look like something is missing. Can it be that it's supposed to be we two and not just me in the picture..... ✌️✌️✌️❤️❤️❤️😂😂😂 I'm trying to get ready for work and just wanted to write this before I forgot. I don't always remember to write, but I do think a lot and some really good stuff comes through. I'd have a book by now, but when I sit to write, I don't remember what I wanted to write. So, this is me trying to get better this year and write the stuff down. Who knows I maybe an Ernest Hemingway or Shakespeare.....

Gayle

Was just thinking about another possible verse: in the dark not pausing for any clarity. Acting on the shadows, the illusions we thought we were seeing. Now as the light seeps in slowly we break free and see the truth.....I hope they work. ✌️✌️✌️❤️❤️❤️😂😂😂

PhantomFidget

Sounds oddly similar to things that go on backstage * Suffer Noises * so far sounds Gute. Will be anticipating to hear the Roomie Official (Complete) Version while working backstage & not just in sekret. Tack for sharing Mate 🐺🐾

Gabrielle H-ing

this is really good actually. Might balance so that the voice comes out more than the music. The music is meant to be background. You should be able to hear the voice with a computer or phone that's just been popped out of the box. Not having to fiddle with settings too much. other than that I love it.

Nessa

I’d wish you put more of your demos out. I love them.