Derideal 17 - 02 WIP+BLOG (Patreon)

Finished page: https://www.patreon.com/posts/103277030

Alpha just want forgiveness.

I had to modify this page's dialogs a lot, but this is the anti-way of how you should write a complete episoe/story.
to be making it as you go, and make sense out of it as you push forward.

I decided to bring back this method for a few reasons...

first, I was tired of writing, I had spent a lot of time writing Derideal until the end, and I forget that "the dream" episode wasn't up for the remake tale.

second, I thought I would capture part of the original feeling the comic had when the dreams and visions had a more prominent place on it.

Alpha's past is still alive inside him, but maybe fragmented, maybe in his subconscious... and this time he hasn't stopped thinking.