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the original page I thought it was so bad... that I basically re-draw this entirely :c

and almost every page in this episode was so dark! 

I also took the time to divide their environments by color, so the panels would be also easier to tell which side, Ivory is standing in a orange-lit hallway
Alpha's room is mostly dark and bluish with night light

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EunosMiata

I like the change to partner. And also the new updated page does look better. Keep it up👍

Memsys

alpha comes across as more edgy in the original x3

Kit Foxboy

I love her infatuation and his uncertainty in the face of it. It would be a rush of possibility to meet another of your kind when you've been alone for so long.

Dakkota

Both versions look good, and it's cool to see a bit of insight to that! Though, I gotta say, they didn't technically GIVE her a partner lol