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Derideal episode 3 "Laura edit" (Patreon)

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2023-04-21 17:28:48
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THIS EPISODE IS VERY DIFFERENT FROM THE ORIGINAL!!!

ok this took me a while! but I managed to cut certain parts of the story that just were "cool to me" but weren't exactly helping.

I guess I liked it, but I decided to get rid of the entire "nightmare" dream in this episode.

and I replaced everything with a longer Aden + Laura interaction, also giving  some more info about Laura's past.

managed to cut the episode page numbers a lot too, and despite that...  I feel this version of the episode is much more relevant now, and it goes better with the "COMPANIONS" title.

Changes:

  • Improved colors and contrast.
  • reduced number of pages.
  • improved dialogs for more clarity on motives.
  • replaced the ending of the episode with a new set of pages.

please, any text corrections let me know!

TEXT GOT SOME FIXES, THANKS @TWILIGHT!!

another text fix! thanks @madpostman!

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Comments

TheNat'LaGuy

That's it I'm going to genocide all the Consortium + everyone involved with it (Exception being Daniel) How can they ruin such a heart-warming moment like this That's your call to never trust humanity.

derideal
>>106881806

I think that this version of the episode is better than the original because it feels happier for a while.

Kit Foxboy

This is SO GOOD. Not only did it add some charming levity and bonding with a more youthful art style, but the never forget me page just brings everything together just so well.