Loyal Path "concept" pages (Patreon)

Hey, it's been some time since I made these pages, and well, this project is officially dead since months now, so I decided to share these.

first off, let's be clear about this:

THIS STORY ISN'T MINE!!!

I had to attempt to translate some scripts into comic form (the scripts weren't meant for comic)

and I think the narrative makes too many "jumps" at the beginning, so I'm not sure if it was working either, I just did what I could to bring the text into comic form at the time.

but I didn't wanted to modify the story, given the fact the comic wasn't mine...

later on, I tried to adapt all the scripts into a better "comic-narrative" which was a lot of work.

My personal opinion now is this:

• I liked the characters in the story itself, even in the scripts I got they were fun.
• the world felt generic to me, as the setting. then again, I'm not interested in fantasy much.
• I think the story would have worked without all the fuss about holy weapons.

I'll try to translate the "scripts" I made based off the original story and comment a little further about that process, my mistakes and all that.

PS. I quickly translated these pages, I don't want to improve the translations.