Derideal ep14-03 WIP (Patreon)

Hey! I almost forget that I wanted to post the WIPS of the pages.

this page was simple, and doesn't have much text or panels... but I thought it was necessary to make it slow, dramatic for more impact :)
I hope it helps setting the mood, like, how much time alpha spent in that confused state?

anyway, this one had a few corrections from the original, and there are notes because of it.

• originally, the big panel was "on top" the note says "should it go top"? that's why the 3 panels ended up on top later xd
• there's also a note to make "Alpha" bigger in the scene.