Derideal ep14-25 WIP+BLOG (Patreon)

This page got some clues to think about, huh?

the original dialog was more about asking for accessing the xeno lab and now having to meet Ivory next.

I decided to change the dialogs to be more about the deal C.WALLY has with Orozco.

this was something I included specifically in the remake, because I felt she needed to be teased earlier in the story.

She's also presented in part 2 as a similar character to C.Wally in terms on how she see xenos, she doesn't care about them and got one objective we'll discover later... a prototype version of this character first appeared in "Custus" spin-off comics, I say she's a prototype because she was supposed to be C.Wally replacement for that timeline, but I ended up including her in the main story after some thought... when the Derideal story is finally over, I think I could try to explain how much things were changed along the development.

this page is also a good example on how I ended up modifying the original sketches of the comic, some pages were boring and I tried to improve them..

this was left of the original: