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Wanted to post the original version of the comic. The first 2 pages remained more or less the same, but wanted to go with a different approach with the rest of the plot. Since I'm working on it weekly, I preferrred to take it with more patience and develop it more. After this, there was supposed to be a third part where she goes to a library to search for informations about how to control the totem, but while alone it reactivates, with the ghosyts being more evoluted and having a full ghost body this time. After being completely broken and lost in pleasure, she mistakenly broke the totem and the ghosts disappeared. Then the comic would have ended with her running aways from the library, having done a mess in the room she was in. The new version will go into a completely different way, so no worries for spoilers. Also, don't ask for things drawn about that old part 3, there are none, it was only written so far., sorry.

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Jesster The Gooose

It is so interesting to see your process. It looks like you made two versions of the same story. It is so intriguing.

Eirgallant

I actually -really- like this version as well. Her being pulled back to the back of the carriage, only to get full on assaulted is extremely erotic. Mind you, the current version is also really great. This is me basically saying that I enjoy both versions equally.

MadProject

I liked the sequence too, but it was too short and a bit too much "more of the same" compared to the first chapter. I added a whole new situation for part 2 that you'll start to see next week. Basically this is just a premise. But since it's completely different, I thought people may have enjoyed seeing the old version too. One of my next plans in future for side projects would be update the first partt (mainly adjust the colors and some minor details) to align it with this the new comic.

MadProject

yeah, it wasn't bad, but a bit too rushed for my current tastes. Plus it was a bit "more of the same" of part 1. I added a whole new part in the new version that you'll soon see. The gangbang on the cart is just the beginning.

Jesster The Gooose

I am looking forward to where you are taking the story 👀 Keep up the great work.