The feeling of rewriting like 75% of Keo's ch 10 romance interaction: (Patreon)

It feels so good. I hated the original so much omg 😂 I had to write it bad before I could write it good, which is my least favorite part of being a writer. I'm almost done with it and i​t's way more in-character and way less cheesy now, thankfully. I don't know if I'll wind up rewriting it again after beta feedback comes in, but for now I'm at least no longer embarrassed to be seen with it. Can you tell I'm my own harshest critic? 🤣