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MNTNA

i love the idea at the end of the story where the girls made him wear used clothes that smell of sweat and smoke, it is a way for everyone that come near "her" realize what "kind of girl" "she" is it could be a detail used on further stories where it cause some misunderstandings btw, are you planning to continue this story, it is a shame that ends like this

SusanGentry

I too second that the story should have continued. H didn't suffer near enough, nor was he humiliated to my satisfaction!!

ds1000

Perhaps one day but without no story ark in mind it might be best left as it is. Short but sweet.