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Chapter 28: Team Bonding

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Son-Of-Scorn

So I have to download this? Is this gonna be what happens in the future, cause I'm not a fan

Dartx King

Also if you uploaded the file for the comiket part 2? Because I got the notification but I can't access the chapter

Dartx King

A ok, so... the other chapter its going to be uploaded in this form also?

Crossedge

Please join our discord server. It will help us a lot.

Anton Peliukh

If you want to publish chapters in files, please consider to use other formats then pdf. I am reading usually from my phone and it's much better to use one of the formats for reading apps(EPIB, MOBI, FB2, etc.).

Crossedge

Got it. Will do so from now on.

savitar

Great chapter, the discussion with Kuroka made a lot of sense. I mean, it was very obvious she was faking it. And if Arthas, being as young as she is, noticed it, then surely Venelana saw it and everything. While I liked the character chapters, I admit I'd like to see the next world quest. And I think Akeno would have to be a great mage. I mean, I understand she wants to be a healer, but I'd like to see her full future potential as a mage. I wonder what face the Golden Dawn people will make when they see Elaine is too much for any of them. It serves those pieces of trash well.

Jose Matos

Can the OP add the another format for the document? Preferably googledocs or microsoftword. Please??

Crossedge

It's already up there as a doc file. Check the 4th attachment. I have added pdf, epub, mobi and docx

Valentin Reyes

I don't see the document, only the chapter title :(

Crash

I like the doc file format, thanks for posting it

Crossedge

There are four files in the attachments. Just download any of them for the chapter.

DTShadow

I can't wait for they main characters to all meet each other!

Konoyaro93

Bro love this new style of getting the story, I sometime during work have my phone read it so having a way to download it makes my life so much easier

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

alecB

I wish there was more updates for your other stories… I read neither Restaurant nor Soul Art…

Travis

Isn’t Marielle a healer in Akeno’s group already? In chapter 9 she’s dancing around after having gotten the Cleric class from Akeno’s POV. I assume you’re having Akeno get some form of healer class for a future plot point so perhaps edit the chapter to include a different justification for becoming a healer.

Revan009

Could have used the quote. "With a keen eye for details, one truth prevails" Case Closed

Travis

something I just noticed, Arthas has a very noticeable distaste for Sleeping bags and is quite happy that there are no sleeping bags in this world. However in the beginning of chapter three there is this comment "While I normally slept in caves or at the top of trees in a sleeping bag, she had somehow ordered a tent from her recent income." I thought it was funny but figured you might want to edit it, or at least have it brought to your attention.

Johny14

Could you add that chapter in the text instead of the appendices? I translate using google translator. Thanks