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I finally have the entire page 5 for you!

I really hope you like it and I have another question, do you like short or longer speechbubbles more? I think with less like in the last panel it looks cleaner but if you want more text I could just plan more space in future drawings ^^

As always critique as well as ideas and questions are welcomed!

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Jackal-7

I think mixing the lengths like how you’ve been doing is fine. The second panel MAY be a bit long, but I personally think words add a lot to a piece especially if they evolve/get more teasing as she gets fatter. Also, what would Turras thoughts be on doubling in size over the next few years?

Kekspflaumchen

oh okay that's fair yea and idk if Turra would like it that much, she would most likely be in denial!