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“I’m impressed,” Tyron noted, nodding with satisfaction. “Each of you has managed to learn the ritual and reach level two. This is where the real work can finally begin.”

The three young Necromancers exchanged excited glances, pleased that he was pleased. After returning from beyond the rift, the Steelarm scion had thrown himself into private study for a few days, then emerged without warning and resumed lessons.

“I’m happy to see that Feat worked out well for you, Georg. Your hands are noticeably more dextrous. Have you found it’s helped?”

The former farmhand nodded, holding his hands up and gazing down at them.

“It’s helped a lot more than I thought it would,” he admitted. “Feel like they actually listen to me now.”

“Good. I was a little reluctant to hand out build advice to people. It’s not as if I have a text I can study to point out the best ways to be a Necromancer. I’m figuring it out as I go, and so will you.”

The four of them sat around the crackling fire outside of Tyron’s cave. The sun was still high overhead, though it offered little warmth at this time of year, and each of them was eager to progress, having overcome the first hurdle that had been set before them.

Briss could hardly believe that each of them had managed it. Learning how to cast magick had seemed impossible to her only weeks ago. After receiving the training that Tyron had offered, all three of the students had thrown themselves into study. It was all they did each day. They rose, practised magick until they couldn’t any more, then went to sleep. The words and phrases, which had seemed so alien, began to feel even a little natural on their tongues. The hand gestures and sigils, so difficult, so demanding, had caused each of them to experience cramps and spasms through their fingers, Georg in particular.

“Before we move onto the next, perhaps most important topic, I want to provide some honest feedback for you, to help improve your magick fundamentals.”

Georg, Briss and Richard exchanged glances. They were impatient for new knowledge, but had each opted to learn the basics from their teacher while he was available. The training was demanding, but it was necessary. They were proud of how far they had come.

Tyron looked up at the tree-line, mulling over his words.

“I’m painfully aware that you’ve only been practising magick for a matter of weeks. So let me preface my words with some praise. You’ve done well. The level of dedication you’ve shown has been… acceptable.”

Richard’s eyes widened a little before he caught himself. Acceptable? They did nothing but practice magick and sleep! What more could they do?

“However… all of you are still terrible,” Tyron said flatly. “If the ritual I constructed for you wasn’t as stable as it was, each of you would still have failed. If you’d attempted to cast the actual Raise Dead spell, you would all be dead. Your breath control is poor. Your lung capacity is lacking. The way you transition from one gesture to the next is… it’s… dreadful.”

He can’t even find the words, Briss thought to herself, heart sinking.

“The cadence is barely within the limits of tolerance. That has to sharpen up if you want to be a proper mage. How many times have I told you that rhythm is exceptionally important when casting any type of spell? To properly utilise magick, you must be as reliable as a metronome.” He smacked one hand into the other to form a solid beat. “Every. Time. Perfect.” He let his hands fall.

“To be honest, it’s dangerous for you to start progressing this quickly when you are still so poor. You aren’t capable of raising a battle-ready undead at this point, but I’m hoping the attributes you received from the Unseen will be enough to help push you forward a little and accelerate your progress.”

All three of the students were hanging their heads at this point. Of course, they knew as much without being told, but it was difficult to hear it stated so bluntly.

Tyron looked at them without pity. It was true, they were awful, and if they got a false sense of confidence now, after experiencing even a tiny amount of success, they would surely fail soon down the line.

“Don’t think I’m just trying to burst your confidence so you don’t get a big head,” he warned them, “because you are dangerously incompetent. Do not attempt to cast any ritual magick without my supervision. You’ll die. Now, with that out of the way, let’s talk about advancement.”

After having their ego’s crushed, the young folk were still able to perk their heads up. Having performed the status ritual not long ago and made their choices, the heady rush of progression was still very much on their minds.

“I know we talked fairly extensively about the choice you need to make at the second level,” Tyron stated. “Bone Stitching or Flesh Mending. One to unlock the ability to make skeletons, the other to… freshen up corpses, basically, make them more suitable to create zombies. As I told you, I went down the skeleton route, but that doesn’t mean you have to. Now, tell me, what did you all pick?”

Georg spoke up first, as he usually did. He wasn’t as shy as the other two.

“Flesh Mending,” he said.

Tyron nodded slowly.

“Any particular reason?” he asked.

The former farmhand lifted his fingers and wiggled them wryly. “They might be a lot better than they were before, but I’m not sure my fingers would be quick enough to do that stitching you showed us. I figured going with a more straightforward type of undead would be a safer bet.”

“Well, I’m glad that at least one of you picked it. Now you have an ability I don’t and we can take some notes on it. I’m especially curious to see what sort of Class advancements will be offered to a zombie specialist, since I’ve never seen them. What about you, Richard? Briss?”

“Bone Stitching for me,” Briss spoke quickly.

“For me as well,” Richard confirmed.

“Very good. Well, we’ll need to split up the lessons a little between the three of you now. You two will need to work on your stitching technique, while Georg will need to find some dead flesh he can mend. Getting a handle on these fundamental abilities will be key to creating your first minion. The better your stitching, the better the skeleton can move and fight. The same goes for a zombie. The better a job you do getting their muscles and tendons back together, the more mobile your minion will be.”

The most fundamental building blocks of the Class, creating functional undead. There was so much for him to teach them, Tyron almost didn’t know where to start. He drummed his fingers on his knees for a time as he thought, the three students waiting patiently for him to speak.

“I’ll have a corpse brought up here, Georg, so you can practise. Fortunately, I don’t believe it needs to be human for you to train your new ability, even if you won’t be able to raise it as an undead. My ghosts have spotted a few dead deer out there, mostly frozen over, that you can work on.”

Richard looked a little green at the thought, but Georg simply nodded. Working with and around dead animals was daily life as far as he was concerned. He’d worked on a cattle farm.

“Richard and Briss, you can start immediately working on your threading.” Tyron raised a hand, palm down, and spread his fingers. After a moment, threads of magick extended from the tips of each digit hanging down, unmoving in the slight breeze. “These are the threads you’re going to work with. You should have a basic understanding of how to manifest them now, right?”

The two newly Awakened nodded before they too held out their hands and concentrated. It took Briss a minute before she was able to create the threads, Richard slightly behind her.

“Just another thing that you have to practise,” Tyron said. “When you manifest the thread, it’s important that your concentration doesn’t waver. If they flicker out of existence halfway through working on a joint, you are going to be filled with regret, since you’ll have to start over. It’s also important that the thickness is consistent. If some fibres are thicker and stronger than others, then it won’t function right, whether it's sinew or muscle you’re imitating.”

He looked at his own threads.

“I made this as thick as I could so it would be easier to see, but I’m honestly a little stuck when it comes to threading.”

It was difficult for Richard to imagine that Tyron Steelarm would struggle with anything magick-related; it all seemed to come so naturally to the man that it was unfair. What could someone this proficient possibly be struggling with?

“What’s the difficulty?” he asked, curiosity overcoming his instinct to remain silent.

Tyron frowned, but not at the student. His ire was focused on the threads. He lowered his hands with a sigh.

“I don’t mind sharing. Half the point of teaching you is to get an outside perspective on Necromancy. The issue is simple. Eventually, you will reach a point where you will turn increasingly powerful levelled individuals into minions. Some types of Undead can retain the abilities, or at least some of them, that they possessed in life. So if you happened to get your hands on a dead slayer…”

Richard’s eyes widened. That would be a powerful undead indeed.

“The issue, Tyron grumbled, “is that the threads are not strong enough.” He held up his hand and the thin lines of magick formed once more, dangling down from each finger. “When creating a skeleton, this thread takes the place of the sinew and muscle, allowing the bones to move. However, the thread isn’t as strong as a high levelled person's body. You may not ever run into this problem, Georg, given you’ll be using the original materials rather than replacing them. When this new undead attempts to use the abilities they could use in life, the threads may not be able to take the strain and begin to degrade, or even snap.”

Once again he let his hand fall, frustration written plainly on his face.

“This is a key milestone I need to overcome to create the highest tiers of skeletal undead. I’ve tried thickening the thread, adjusting my weaves… everything I can think of, but so far, nothing has worked.”

Richard and Briss stared blankly ahead. The thought of turning a high levelled slayer into a skeleton was shocking enough to them that the rest hadn’t really registered, but Georg merely shrugged.

“Have you tried weaving the threads together?” he said.

Tyron blinked, then scowled.

“What do you mean? How do you weave the threads together? For what purpose?”

Now the other two students turned to face him as if he were crazy, offering advice to this expert, but Georg continued doggedly.

“Like we do when we make rope. You never made any rope before? You take a whole bunch of long, thin fibres, and then we weave ‘em together to make something stronger.”

The gears visibly turned in Tyron’s head as he tried to visualise what he was being told. Rope? No, he’d never given a moment’s thought to the construction of rope.

“What do you make rope out of?” he asked intently.

A little uncomfortable with all the attention, Georg shrugged.

“Straw, mostly. Or hemp. As long as it grows long and stringy you can make pretty decent rope out of it.”

Would that even work? How thick could the threads that bound a skeleton together be before they were no longer practical? Tyron had seen the ropes used to tie ships to the dock in Foxbridge, some of them as thick as his wrist. Obviously that was far too large, but perhaps something thinner would work? If he was able to double the strength of the threads with less than a threefold increase in thickness… then it could possibly suit his needs. Growing more and more interested, the atmosphere around him began to change.

As the subject of his attention, Georg saw the worst of it. The intensity that was always present in their teacher became… almost manic. His breath came a beat too quickly.

“You need to explain to me how you make rope. Now,” Tyron demanded.

“Uh. It’s… it can be a… there’s a few steps…” Georg muttered, wracking his brain to recall exactly how it was done. His grandfather had been the one to show him, but that had been years ago. Whenever rope needed making, he’d just done what he was told. “You need to… braid the fibres. There’s an… a pattern.”

There was also a heck of a lot of preparation involved to get the straw in the right condition to turn into rope. It wasn’t like you could just yank some reeds out of the ground and make a rope out of them.

Tyron stood, stalked forward, and clapped a hand down on Georg’s shoulder.

“Show me.”

Comments

Octophobia

Great chapter! Hope Tyron creates some sort of necromantic loom. Gloom loom? Bone braider? Spinning Skelly? Could cart it around in his ossuary. Would be rad.

Seamole

I thought braiding would be the next step for him. Very natural the way it came about. No sudden epiphany where he just so happens to get the answer out of thin air

Kris Piskorski

Nice, I'm happy tyron is beginning to see the benefits of teamwork

D.A.Janik

I was jsut about to write this. Seems VERY unbeliviable that he didn't think about braiding. It's kind of a natural next step. Even a coddled noble child(which he was not, even if he was generally bookish) knows what a rope is or how it looks. And having a thread is like an instant association and short logical jump to rope. when thinking about how to make threads stronger, and especially for someone like Tyron who will manically research EVERYTHING I think rope would be pretty up there on the list of things to check out. This is a problem of writing genious characters, you have to be smart too to make it beliviable that he missed something kinda basic. To be clear, I don't actually mind this chapter, it should stay as it is, I just wanna say that when you think a little about it it comes off as a bit unbelivable.

Gonvas

Tyron complaining about corpse preparation step but refused to upgrade the foundation skills for it xD

seth

Oh man, that took a lot longer for him to realize than I expected for Tyron. Its in the damned name! Thread and weave. Didn't he consider a weaving feat?

John goode

I’m so glad they where able to teach him something

braeden winstead

He's a genius of necromancy and focused as one can possibly be so it seems to be that it makes sense he would forget obvious things sometimes, especially after being mindfucked

Koala Man

Not really , his ma n pa were slayers , they didn’t need to make their own rope they’d just buy what they need . I think it would be a similar thing to when suburban kids find out their milk and meat comes from cows and freak out . He never had to think about the way rope was made , it was just there ,, rope

Space Pirate

This chapter was amazing. I really like this side of Tyron.

Greyg

love the school lessons hope they get to experience his crazy pursuit of magicka see firsthand why their level of dedication was only acceptable to him. Had a feeling georg would go zombie route because of the stitching.

alt31415

Oh now you fucked up, Georg! lmao

alt31415

I think it's entirely believable. He researches everything he THINKS is relevant and even then there's still only so many hours in the day.

Merf

I like that Georg isn’t afraid to go his own route. He’s quickly become my favourite of the three

CentaureHeart

I called that so much. Thanks for the chapters!

CentaureHeart

He got Weaving as a general skill two chapters ago

Macronomicon

two ability ideas for Georg and his zombies: The ability to grow plants inside the zombies to make them walking pots, so supplies can be taken on the march. mobile orchard/farms. Copycat: Georg records a day's work, and implants it in a zombie or group of zombies, and they do that work every day thereafter at no cost.

T T

The weaving is done after the corpse preparation. Nothing really that he could have taken this advancement to improve the weaving itself.

Andrew

Thank you!

Kain

I like the second one but I don’t think perpetual spells like that really exist in this setting or at least they aren’t common. Maybe near a rift if it had a component built in to syphon ambient mana to power them.

Overmind_Slab

This was great. Tyron has spent so long solving problems with intricate, meticulous rituals and research that he doesn’t consider blind spots he might have. He took a weaver skill before actually going to a weaver and talking to them. That’s probably still a good skill for him but like, he’d have learned about rope a long time ago if he was willing to consider that his expertise in magic doesn’t translate to everything else.

Alexander O'Brien

Bonesmith "so like I told ya, I pump the mana in the make the bone soft like. And then I hammer it with my hammer into the shape I want. Then use my mana to set it. What have you been doing?" Tyrone "AOL dial up noises"

Moonspike

To be fair most rope isn't plaited, it's twisted, the same as thread, and he doesn't have to make his magic threads the normal way so why would he think he needs to scale them up in a different way than he makes them.

BubblyGhost

I concur with everyone else. Lots of stuff people take for granted and have no knowledge about, especially for a world without the internet.

BubblyGhost

I mean, death mana kinda creates itself. Make an environment that passively produces it, it'd probably work to some degree. But yeah, I could see and 'intro' to that ability being reduced cost->greatly reduced cost->etc

Gonvas

But the bone animus is still a preparation step to later on cast the Raise the Dead ritual and raise bone based undead. From what I understand the preparation phase is everything the necromancer does to prepare the remains to cast the ritual.

Izzay

Loved this chapter! Considering what we know of Tyron i feel like the description of him considering the possibilities is still a little subtle perhaps? Anyway love George!

conkerer

You would be surprised, this is exactly the stuff that happens every day with genius scientists and mathematicians

T T

If he improved the remains even further, his weave might be under more stress. If the curent max from the old life a skeleton can exhibit is 0.7 going to 0.9 just worsens the situation

Robothaus

This is what he gets for ignoring Dove's level 10 rope-tying

Gonvas

B1C5: Unless he missed his guess, this Spell would enable him to prepare bones so that they might be animated by the Raise Dead spell.

T T

Bone animus is a different skill than corpse preparation. Just because one gets an upgrade the other one doesn't upgrade with it. I stay with this, corpse preparation improves the maximum capabilities an undead can exhibit. Bone weaving had to catch up as is because the corpses were too good for his skill.

Gonvas

For me this is a similar situation as when Tyron raises revenants and he depends on the specific skill Bone-Soul Melding and the foundation skill Raise the Dead. U have specific skill for specific higher tier minion but nonetheless he still depends on the Raise the Dead ritual. As for the preparation step, he has bone animus to specifically make the weave, had he chosen the purifying bones skill he would have that to specifically purify the bones, ... and in the end all of these preparation steps also depend on the foundation skill Corpse Preparation. Appraisal step is the same. Tyron's analysis of death magick on the remains and how it behaved depends on death magick skill and corpse appraisal.

Wolve

TFTC

Tyrunex

So Tyrone is a high specc idiot. And all other Support classes Show him some possibilitys from which he can grow

Ledski

Hello, did someone say… bondage?

chris

i nvr thought of rope and then when it was suggested in this chapter i thought OFC! DOH! i mean hes already been weaving them together every way he could but that was nothing like rope if u think about it. he was likely weaving the entire muscle together in different ways. a muscle was already made but depending on the person their muscles "threads" r likely thicker than some of the magick threads hes been making and making the threads thick and visible enough to see will do nothing strength wise, its likely his mana just spread out or there was more but not condensed similar to anthonys spell skills that he condenses spells into 2x as powerful or more. making them thicker makes no improvement without the cost of room. threading them into a rope for each thread of muscle works much better. the other thing is that our muscles always tear, its their purpose to have micro tears and degrade but also to heal automatically to become stronger and more complex. which is the key difference between mana threads and real muscle. its always growing, imagine if dags did all his killing moves as an exercise theyd b even more developed but in way body building which becomes bulky and too much.

chris

been wondering if and hoping hell b able to make his threads out of death mana as well as super infuse his skeletons with death mana. im sure that would make them even more powerful. especially after his problem with roping the muscle together solved. hopefully some of the other bone weaver classes specialized in corpse preparation get some good skills to build and enhance this idea which im sure rinoz has thought of after everything. tyron will likely need a professional weaver to come with him everywhere in the future since if the threads will be made with pure death mana in the future that should make things much easier and perhaps less draining on tyron since his ossuary is overflowing with dense death mana. he can just use the death mana in there to so the muscles of his dead, hopefully then hell only become physically fatigued from it, since right now iirc he can barely make a few skeles muscles threading at once in 1 sitting. hopefully this will become reality in future chapters.

chris

i love this, i hope it pops up in tyrons thoughts of "how was he so blind" XD rofl

Igor Chmurski

I guess tyrone would never bother considering how musles are made of thousands of thin strands instead of one big ass thing becouse he dismissed anything zombie related as if studying human anatomy wasnt critical