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Sorry, posted wrong chapter! I'm all over the shop this week.

“Shame you can’t raise it as a minion.”

“For whatever reason, the Unseen doesn’t want me to raise anything other than humans. I’m not sure why.”

“Seems like a bit of a waste.”

“Well, I can do horses as well.”

“Horses?”

“Yes. Horses.”

“Why horses? There aren’t that many of them around.”

“Not on this side of the rift, at least.”

“True.”

BOOM.

In the distance, the giant kin put down another leg, and the ground rumbled with the force of the impact. It was almost unbelievable to think something so large, something so dense, could even move under its own power.

Staring at the beast, Tyron could feel the immense amount of magick radiating off of it, enough to disturb the tempestuous winds of power that ran across the entire realm.

“Remember, I get the core,” Tyron said.

Banner, the scout of the slayer team Burning Blade, rolled his eyes.

“Yeah, yeah, you get the core. I don’t care about what happens after we kill it, so long as it’s dead. What are you even going to do with the thing? Sell it?”

“I thought you didn’t care.”

“Call me curious.”

“I’m a trained Arcanist. I’m going to use it to make something.”

“I thought you were a Necromancer.”

“Enchanter sub-class.”

“Right.” 

Curiosity sated, Banner turned his attention back to the enormous kin. It wasn’t moving quickly; perhaps something that large couldn’t. Every now and again, it would pause, as if resting, or listening. It was eerie to see the thing, standing totally still while smaller kin ran past, sometimes directly under it, heading toward the rift.

A number of these beasts had already punched through during the break, but if they started coming through outside of such dire events? Woodsedge would need many more, higher level slayers to fight them off. All the while, each and every one of these creatures that made it through would tear the rift that little bit wider.

Which meant teams like Burning Blade had to come through and intercept them, every time.

“Are you sure about their weakness?” Tyron asked.

“That’s the intelligence we have. If it's wrong, then we won't live long enough to complain to anyone back at the keep. You know what we call these things?”

“Ten-legged man eaters?”

“We might be slayers but we’re a little more creative than that.”

“Slayer squashers.”

“Your naming sense is worse than mine. We call them rift smashers.”

“I think my names were better.”

“Not remotely. All right, I’ll leave you here. Good luck managing the troops, try not to get yourself killed.”

Tyron shot him a cold look.

“I’m at far less risk than you and your team. Worry about yourself.”

“It’s a deal.”

So saying, Banner was gone, vanished like smoke as he crept his way back to the rest of his team, scattered around the intercept spot. Once he was alone, Tyron drew in a deep breath. He wasn’t nervous for himself; he would be protected and able to fight from a distance. His concern was for the slayers, and for his precious undead.

The kin was huge. With a single sweep of a leg, it could crush dozens of skeletons. If things went poorly, he could lose a hundred minions in a matter of moments. Such a loss would set him back weeks—time he couldn’t afford to lose.

Yet, he also didn’t want to see Woodsedge lose one of their most promising teams at this early stage. 

Keen to avoid being detected, he hunched down lower into the vegetation, over twenty skeletons flattened into the ground alongside him. This close to the rift, there were many spires and a steady stream of kin moving toward the way between realms, so it was inevitable that some would be drawn into their battle against the giant monster, but getting sniffed out before they engaged the beast would be worse by far.

Again, the massive kin began to walk forward, each ponderous step sending tremors deep into the ground. Looking at it move, he once again doubted that his skeletons, or a team of slayers, could do anything to harm it.

Something like this was for gold ranks and higher. For Magnin and Beory, but here he was, hoping to kill one.

Well, hoping to help kill one. He wasn’t going to be the star of this show.

BOOM.

Another shuddering step, and a soft whistle carried over the air. 

The signal.

Tyron hastily crawled forward, lifting himself out of the vegetation to get a better view as he ordered his packs of skeletons to act. Archers rose from hiding positions along the right flank of the beast, as did his skeletal mages. The undead silently took aim and fired, unleashing their barrage against the monster.

Arrows forged of bone, death bolts, even the occasional death’s hand, flew towards the monster, only for the majority of them to clatter harmlessly off the creature’s shell. A small number actually found their mark. Tyron wished he could improve his minions’ aim, but at least some of them managed to find the gaps in the kin’s armour and sink into the soft flesh beneath.

Not that they would be enough to do serious damage. It would only be enough to—

BOOM!

—make it angry.

The beast turned towards his undead horde, and towards him. For the first time, Tyron was given an unobstructed view of its face. It was dreadful. Huge, wide jaws that detached from its face lay under its beady eyes, so many he couldn’t count them in the moment. Two smaller limbs protruded either side of its low hanging head, each longer than he was tall, tipped with sharp barbs which could likely skewer him to the ground with a single stab.

To think his own parents, even his uncle, would regularly fight barn-sized monstrosities like this. It was absurd. Would any number of skeletons even make a difference against something like this?

There are already plans in place for stronger undead. Focus!

Tyron threw his distracting thoughts to the side and concentrated on the scene in front of him. As soon as the kin began to approach, he raised his body from the ground and began to cast. With his hands, words and sheer force of will, he began to bend reality, adding his own spells to those of his minions.

The Shivering Curse sprang into existence, a wide zone between his own position and the kin. The creatures of Nagrythin seemed poorly adapted to the cold, and even a kin this size may be slowed down by it.

As soon as he finished one cast, he flowed smoothly into the next. Soon, the black aura of Death Magick began to glow around the weapons of his minions, and Tyron directed them forward to attack.

Not many, though. He wasn’t supposed to do most of the work, only to distract, which suited him just fine. Limiting the number of minions at risk was exactly what he wanted.

Enraged by the needling attacks, the massive kin advanced steadily, moving faster than it had before. Much faster. He’d been told it was more nimble than it appeared, but seeing it was another thing entirely. Obviously, if it was always as slow as before, it would hardly be a threat, but seeing it gather momentum as it charged toward him caused his heart to seize briefly in his chest.

He expelled a breath and calmed himself, raising both hands once more to cast. This time, his two hands moved independently, each flicking from one sigil to the next in a flurry almost too fast for the human eye as he spoke the words of power with incredible speed.

Double casting, slipping the words of one incantation into the gaps in another while forming two sets of sigils, one with each hand.

The signature technique of his mother, a Battle Mage so accomplished at flinging out deadly elemental magick so quickly in the midst of battle that she became renowned for it across the province. Each hand performed half a sigil at a time, and normally those halfs would combine to form a whole, but not when double casting. Each hand needed to complete the sigil it had half-constructed, which meant he needed both hands to leap to the next form before the magick lost its shape. It wasn’t twice as much work as normal casting, but four times.

When it was done, he thrust his hands forward, unleashing both spells at the same time.

Double Death’s Fist.

Dual clouds of formless, black magick streamed forward, twisting through the air toward the oncoming beast until they clashed against its left foreleg.

Tyron clenched both his hands as the spells took form, clutching around a single joint, the crushing pressure trying to pull in different directions.

Against the mighty creature’s immense strength, Tyron felt as though even his strongest spells were like spitting into the wind, yet he was surprised to see the kin stumble, even if only slightly. Seemingly uncertain as to what had caused the problem, the monster turned its head slightly, which was when the slayers ran forward to strike.

Powerful offensive magick burst from the cover they’d been hidden in before they emerged. Banner was there, moving like the wind with a bared blade before he leapt and hackdown, aiming for the same joint Tyron had targeted.

Rell was there also, bow at the ready, loosing arrows with a slow, deliberate pace, taking careful aim for each shot.

The kin screeched in rage and continued to turn to deal with this new threat. Its legs stabbed down into the ground sharply, trying to flatten any slayer who drew too close. Everyone was careful not to move near the monster’s face lest they fall victim to the deadly, sharp-tipped limbs flanking its head.

Tyron lowered his hands and turned his mind back to his troops. His mages and archers continued to fire at the kin, hoping to land hits on its more vulnerable areas, but he pulled back his other minions in preparation for the next obstacle.

They were already emerging, poking their heads out of the spires around the battlefield, clacking and scratching as they sought the source of the disturbance. With the massive kin slamming into the ground and screeching, every monster within a kilometre was certain to hear the battle taking place, and they would definitely come to investigate.

The moment they laid eyes on the conflict, the kin became enraged, pulling themselves through the holes in the spires before skittering toward the fight.

With a mental command, Tyron directed his minions to circle the field as best they could. He couldn’t completely envelop it without spreading his undead too thin, but he could manage a little over half.

The first of the reinforcing kin slammed into his lines and Tyron flinched as some of his skeletons were cut down before they could get into position. Every loss ate at him, but if things worked out well, it would be worth the price.  

With rapidly spoken words, he shaped his power and flung out Greater Death Bolts one at a time, knocking down some of the kin and giving his undead the time they needed. Soon, the ranks were properly formed, with shield-bearing skeletons in front and protecting the flanks of each group.

Of course, Tyron ensured he had defenders, but he was still more exposed than he would have liked. The moment a kin came within range, he cast Blood Shield in order to gain another layer of protection.

He’d suggested using his domination abilities against the larger kin to the members of Burning Blade, but they had seemed convinced it would be resistant to any attempt at manipulation. Instead, they wanted to rely on the tried and true method used by the slayers at Woodsedge for many, many years.

It was now Tyron’s job to keep the surrounding kin off them so they could pull it off.

In only a few minutes, the battlefield had become a scene of chaos. Everywhere Tyron looked, something was happening. His skeletons were engaged on multiple fronts, battling in squads with their backs to the enormous monster, who Tyron barely had time to think about. 

He still had mages and archers firing at it, but more and more, he was forced to pull those undead away to help relieve his melee skeletons as they became more pressed. He felt as though his brain were physically heating up as he flicked from one conflict to the next, issuing commands so quickly he didn’t have time to consider or reflect on any of them. 

Trying to manage so many fights at the same time left him barely any time to cast magick, though he still slipped in the occasional spell.

That skeleton needs to lower its shield! Those ones need to change their position to receive that charge! Those kin could be flanked by his sword wielders over there! Do it!

Fuck! More kin have run into that fight! Ghosts can move over to help, archers can fire to support in the meantime. The ranks didn’t reform fast enough to react to that charge and a kin got through! It’s going to turn and cut down the shield skeletons from behind!

Revenants, clean up the mess!

“Dammit.”

With another command, he ordered his reserve skeletons to move forward, lower their cauldrons, and activate them.

He hadn’t wanted it to come to this. They were an immensely useful tool for empowering his undead, but they would effectively surround the main battle with impenetrable smoke. If any kin broke through his lines to attack the slayers, they would have no way of seeing it coming.

It was necessary. If he hadn’t done so, they would have broken through anyway, which was the one thing the slayers had feared most. Fighting the enormous kin was incredibly dangerous. Fighting while holding off hordes of swarming monsters trying to stab you in the back? Impossible.

As the many fronts his skeletons were engaged in stabilised under the effect of the Death Magick–rich smoke, Tyron spared a glance for the massive kin.

It was struggling, bleeding from many cuts and wounds that team Burning Blade had inflicted. As stated, they’d aimed for the joints in its legs, hindering its mobility. With its incredible size and weight, the kin was starting to be unable to support itself on such injured limbs. It hissed and screamed with rage, but the slayers moved desperately to avoid giving it a chance to strike back as they continued to apply pressure.

It wouldn’t be long until they brought it down; all Tyron had to do was focus on his role.

Convinced the slayers had the beast in hand, he pulled the remaining archers and mages away and had them support his desperately battling skeletons. Fallen kin were everywhere, but so were damaged or destroyed skeletons. 

Once more, he raised his hands to lend his magick to their aid. Though he wasn’t too familiar with it yet, he cast Blessing of Bone upon his undead. A complicated spell that drew a great deal of his energy, but as the magick flowed out of him and into his undead, he could see just how effective it was.

Empowered by the additional magick, his undead moved faster, reacted quicker, as if everything had slowed down around them. Tyron checked on his reserves, and discovered that he was doing surprisingly well. With the cauldrons in play, his skeletons were being empowered by the death magick they absorbed through the conduits he had built into all of them. 

A smile came unbidden to his face. It was working. His minions were so much more efficient, despite all of them fighting, drawing deeply on the magick they needed to function. 

It was working.

He brought up his hands and once more began to mould a pair of Death’s Fists. 

They were going to win.

Comments

Forrest Ogden

Oooo that was a juicy one thanks for the chapter!

braeden winstead

Thanks for the chapter! I wonder if Tyrone will finally invest in intelligent minions soon? His army is already getting too large to properly manage on his own and he's only taken baby steps towards what will be needed to slay gods

Dan K

I’m expecting he’s gonna use the core for the one woman he’s gonna turn into a wight.

Killer Pickle

Thanks for the chapter But I’m going to be honest here and say that if Tyrone doesn’t get any stronger or at least start making more powerful minions or being able to raise rift kin soon without being exhausted by just actively using some of his puppets then I will probably drop this. I will explain why, there hasn’t been any Real growth in Tyrone himself particularly when you consider how far he needs to go to achieve his aims and after rereading the entire story it could of really been shortened and we would already be at a point where Tyrone is actively gaining power that is a threat to the empire, Don’t say that he is now because he isn’t if the empire really thought of him like that they would of killed/destroyed him by just sending an average soldier/platoon from the capital… puts in perspective how Weak Tyrone is when he can barely even do necromancy. You have just nerfed necromancy way to much with all the restrictions to make it enjoyable with how long it has taken to get here. So yeah if things don’t improve I’ll probably end up dropping this, but yeah thanks for the chapter and story so far.

CentaureHeart

The man is going by himself into rifts, and doing the job of whole teams by himself. He's awakened like 5 years ago and already had a speedy rise. I think you just got too used to all the OP MC's we see in web novels.

Killer Pickle

It’s not nessesarily how quick IN universe he has progressed but how slow the actual story is taking to get there, we’re at book 3 atm and still really being able to work (barely) as a whole team of slayers and Tyrone not even going far into the rifts is Nothing compared to the foes he has to go against. And he level wise is already 2 thirds of the way to the same level as his parents which Really is indicative of how lacking he is to everyone else or at least his class as it really hasn’t begun to shine through in its strength as a rare class with Tyrone not being able to raise non humans, any skeleton that’s not complete trash and most importantly able to sustain them

TPG

Idk, while I agree it feels due for some pickup, I enjoy the world building. It’s what gives this story character, makes them feel real. But yeah, in the grand scheme of things it’s actually pitiful how weak they all currently are. Even the ‘rebellion’. Rebellion my ass, I thought it was hundreds slayers or something. A few dozen?! Hell he’s basically met half the rebellion at this point. I get ‘training them up’ and such, but that’s still pitifully small. Forget an actual incursion by the magisters, even a small platoon would wipe the map off. During times of rebellion kingdoms and empires used to send armies out to remove dissidents and reassert order. I get awakenings and all, but take like 50 soldiers —is there a soldier class?— and your rebellion is gone before they even begin.

Greyg

I slightly agree he is fundamentally weak compared to where he needs to be necromancers are one man armies, but against an empire it’s lacking i feel the city storyline was planned to be longer more drawn out especially the other enchanter and tower, but between jumping around to two different stories and the lack of real drama and growth within the city we have an earlier start to the rebellion and rift grinding. He needs a power spike soon the wright is his next creation with hints at mystery, but he does feel underpowered. I much prefer the focus on craftsmanship over raw power, but he does need to expand his thinking and dive in deep into the forbidden

Runaway_Cactuar

Well, your complaints would be reasonable if necromancy is an established field with references and guides. But it's not. Ty has to R&D everything by himself. On top of that, his focus on the fundamentals meant that he isn't developing as fast as possible. These are intentional choices made in-universe that hindered his improvement. I think after the rift mini-arc is over he'd be able to craft Wrights and commander undeads. With those 2 upgrades, he'd be much more lethal.

D.A.Janik

I actually agree. I won't drop the story, but I did find myself enjoying it way less than before. It honestly is time for Tyron to start taking names. I know that RinoZ wants to do it slowly but IMHO this is slow enough. We need some epicness and more progression. I am honestly hoping (and kinda see it coming very soon) that intelligent commander undead will solve this problem. Let Tyron make intelligent, sapient, commander type undead. I expect to see death knights, liches and wights VERY soon. Also, make them sapient and capable of talk. Make them characters, and then let us see the dynamic between Tyron and his commanders. It gives you more characters to work with. Characters that are ALWAYS present. That's what I would like to see at least and im definitely getting a feeling that the story is stalling a bit.

Roger Mayol

I have to differ with your point of view; every class is nerfed, not just the necromancers. If any other class had to grow with the conditions that had grown tyrion, they just would had been a future minion of the undead army (you know, 'cause they would die). In the previus chapters we have seen another rat of what can be said a similar time experience, and tyrion is far more useful and stronger, comparable to a full team. In this chapter, Tyrion himself implies that new, stronger minions are at the door, so the upgrade is coming... And still we hadn't seen what the 3 old gods have done with his knowledge of the dead magic. So, faster? Literally the autor said that this was a story were he tried to fix the overpowered necromancers, and, myself at least, I'm enjoying this novel, with its pace.

Killer Pickle

Yeah I’m the same it’s the reason I’ve stuck around, I love the world building but quite a few of the decisions restrict the story to much with some of them not being truly thought out on a societal narrative perspective like what you said about dissidents etc or the impracticality of necromancy compared to how it’s meant to be (by more experience individuals that do have knowledge of it I.e vampires)

CentaureHeart

I don't know, for me I knew from the start that this would take the long haul. His enemies are Gods, I'm not surprised it's taking time.

Killer Pickle

The complaints Are reasonable as Tyrone has had a decent amount of time to practice/learn about what makes a skeleton tick, then with the knowledge provided by his parents/vampires. But also with related to Tyrone’s abilities themselves with how the unseen give knowledge to people and how Tyrone has explored/experimented with his given skills should be a lot more advanced if limited in area width of abilities that would complement a necromancer and his summons like death aura rebuffs etc. Most importantly the unseen I.e the author hasn’t given him any real skills when he Does level up and with him being low gold/high silver level without those extra skills or imparted knowledge by the unseen compared to other classes he literally has nothing.

Killer Pickle

Yeah it’s frustrating to read atm but I have a feeling that the higher tier undead are going to have some dumb restrictions on them as well. I wouldn’t be upset if JUST Tyrone could self Maintain his summons like if he can’t even do the most basic of things by this point how is he meant to progress, and I would REALLY not like having the answer be the intelligent undead as it’s to external, Tyrone needs to be able to just resurrect the dead on the fly and have them not cripple him. But here’s the thing there’s only meant to be two books max left until the story is finished That’s nothing when you think about how slowly the author writes

LazyWizard

I presume you would be six feet under in his position. Now that the rebellion is taking shape he can move and level up more easily, plus he figures most of things himself, yes slower but more profitable in the long run. So I think he'll probably power up in a couple of the next chapters.

LazyWizard

I presume you would be six feet under in his position. Now that the rebellion is taking shape he can move and level up more easily, plus he figures most of things himself, yes slower but more profitable in the long run. So I think he'll probably power up in a couple of the next chapters.

Kain

o7

Patrick

Thanks for the chapter, loving the pace and world building. You can see in this chap that Tyrion is noticing that he is having trouble keeping track of Hundreds of soilders and there was the hint of more coming so looking forward to next chapters coming up.

John goode

Also don’t forget that most of the time of the time skip he barely worked on his undead at all. He hasn’t had as long as it might seem to work on his craft as it seems

dethrothes

I don’t mind him being a little underwhelming right now, but the author has stated that there will be two more books in the series. This is a problem because, given the pacing, I don’t know how he’s going to be ready to take the empire on, much less the five. I just hope it doesn’t get rushed.

Andrew

Thank you!

chris

ya im thinking itll b another 15-30+ chapters b4 hes gold rank, thats also dependent on how many chapters and in universe time he puts to maxing out most of his skills and completing most of his projects b4 his class enhancement to make sure he gets the best classes and 1 suited to the direction he likes and suits the path hes creating for himself. as i said b4 its nvr been said but implied hes nvr changed his mana he structures his minions muscles with death mana and whether he fully infuses every bone with as much death mana. doing both would likely significantly increase their capabilities since everything necromancy related is based around death mana and most of all the ossuary is thick with death mana. so if he used the death mana in there instead of his own to thread the muscles i think it would further cut down on time needed and further enhance his minions. idk y he likely hasnt at least infused the muscles with death mana and used the ossuary to do so. i hope thats his next foundational upgrade.

alt31415

Tyron needs to invest in those 'skeletal commanders' or something we saw as an option long ago.

Puri Iresan

The rate of growth does seem a Little Slow…. I was thinking about dropping it as well.

Killer Pickle

Yeah it really kinda feels like that, but I think the real issue isn’t necessarily his power/growth it’s just how limited he is in what he can do. I wouldn’t really mind if he couldnt resurrect/create powerful undead if he could just control a horde of weak undead which is meant to be the main strength of a necromancer. But also mages are meant to be very varied in what they can do but from what we have see from Tyrone and necromancy it kinda literally stops him from actually casting any spells lol

Gonvas

His name is Tyron not Tyrone. It took me a moment to see who U were talking about xD

Gonvas

IIRC, we were told that Necromancer is a rare and powerful class but only starts to show his prowess at silver. IMO, Tyron is already stronger than a necromancer is supposed to be at silver. Revenants should be something unlocked at this rank and he already mastered that, his talent for magick allows him to be better at it than others, mysteries bonuses (not just stats), ... I expect with the Wight minion and other silver upgrades, Tyron will have the prowess of a gold rank necromancer and that's when he won't be on the "starts to get useful" stage and enters "necromancer OP stage". I'm also expecting that his levelling speed will drastically increase with this new prowess because he will be able to fight more and stronger enemies and he has rifts he can freely farm.

KopiCAT

When I first started this novel after buying the first volume on Amazon, I had to drop it. Couldn't get past the beginning and all the sniveling and whining he did. The annoying self pity and the way he seemingly pushed away his friends and then put the blame on them for keeping their distance. Thank god I eventually decided to just skip most of the beginning village arc. Because now I'm loving it. And want to see just as many chapters of this novel each week, as we get of Anthony. Which doesn't mean reducing how often I get Anthony btw :P

alt31415

I mean, was it his friends pushing him away? The bully (forgot his name after so long) made it pretty clear he wasn't ever ACTUALLY his friend, the archer went along with it for personal convenience, and Elsbeth, though she was torn, did so too for a while. He whined a lot, but let's face it; he had a LOT to whine about. Few of us would go through half of what he did without a peep.

KopiCAT

First of all, I had no idea at the time they weren't his actual friends. That was a reveal later on. At the time, what I saw was him pushing them away, and then getting all whiny about how they don't understand him. No shit sherlock, ofc they won't understand you when you don't let them in. Just because a later reveal provides a good insight into why he acted that way, doesn't make the scene in the moment any better. Not for me. And so what if he had a lot to whine about? Irrelevant to my enjoyment of a story. Or lack there off. I detest whiny protagonists. It's honestly a trait I hate in fiction especially. Doesn't matter if it makes sense for the character to be that way. I don't really analyze the text when I read for entertainment. If I enjoy it in the moment, I keep reading. If it annoys me, I stop. Simple. The arcs where various protagonists hit rock bottom and are all doom and gloom are the arcs I hate the most. I either skip or skim those. To essentially start the novel with the character arc I've never liked? Made it an easy choice to just drop it. You can tell me all the reasons in the world for why him being the way he was at the beginning makes for a good story. It doesn't matter. That was your personal experience with it. Not mine. For you, it made for a good story and you enjoyed it. I didn't. It got me to drop it and not pick it up for several months. And then I simply skipped past the parts I disliked and got to what I consider the good stuff :) And I'm super happy I did. Because once he left he starter village, the novel got really good.

Señor de las hormigas

And to think there was a time when their skeletons couldn't fight a big rift relative.