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By this time, the Colony had somewhat managed to hold Anthony down using some sort of threaded rope, magic and sheer weight of numbers. He was still wiggling about, but his range of motion had been greatly reduced, which made keeping in contact with him much easier.

[Anthony,] the triad said, trying to break through to him. [We have two options that should help you survive, do you have a preference?]

[I’d prefer it… IF MY FACE WASN’T ON FIRE!]

[The evolutions!]

[GAH! Fine. Gimme a sec!]

They waited as patiently as they could while he struggled to access the menu.

[I hate them both! Acken! Flacken! ITCHY! Bulwark! Go with that one! EVEN IF IT SUCKS, DAMMIT!]

Well, not that they didn’t know how he would feel about it before, but at least he’d been able to make the final selection on his own. It was clear at this point that the potent mana left behind by Theorazzn had completely skewed the evolutionary options available to him, and destroyed his chance to advance along the path he had carved for himself.

The triad were furious at having to make these compromises, at having to curtail the potential of such a promising monster, but nothing mattered if he didn’t survive, that was obviously the most important thing. Anger boiling in their hearts, they locked in the Bulwark, and set to work.

A tier eight mythic monster had an absolute ocean of evolutionary potential available to them, and many, many potential purchases to be made.

Acting in unison, the three golgari surged into action. There were many things that needed to be addressed, and they had long prepared for a possibility such as this.

The three had made a study of ant physiology, and tore through Anthony’s physique like a hurricane, adjusting, shifting, realigning and perfecting his musculature. It required almost no energy to do so, but would result in a noticeable difference in power. The default was not necessarily correct, and this was one such instance.

In addition, Anthony had not been overly careful in the way he had expanded his size and added additional muscle. The density and bulk were generally spread fairly evenly, but an even distribution wasn’t the best way to achieve an optimal result. Further corrections needed to be made, condensing muscles in certain areas, shifting mass from one place to another. In particular, the muscles in the head connected to the mandibles needed a significant amount of work. 

After this initial pass was complete, Anthony’s body was much better streamlined. With more time, they could squeeze a few more percent out of him, but that was a luxury they could not afford.

Next, they distributed the free stats gained from the evolution, of which there was an abundance. Anthony’s size would again need to increase, if only to fit everything he needed to cram into his body, but the bulk of the physical energy was spent on condensing key muscles. With all of the room, the brains were expanded, gaining a great deal of processing power before they needed to start condensing the grey matter. 

Defensively, the carapace was hardened and thickened, the joints reinforced and slight adjustments made to his shape, making it more difficult for enemies to target his vulnerable points. In particular, attention was placed around Anthony’s head. The giant ant had quite frequently damaged himself using his own abilities, and his new chomp attack had proven to be especially potent. Thickening the carapace there, shaping it to better deflect the power unleashed by his mandibles, would hopefully reduce the damage he did to himself.

Next, the triad turned their attention to the purchases they wanted to make. First of all, a Mind Construct. A very specific organ, it would act as a construct would, taking in raw mana and converting it to the desired attribute. With careful positioning, the triad was able to ensure a steady drip of mana would be pulled from the core and fed to the organ without spending any energy to forge an actual, physical connection.

With mutations and an eventual reforge, Anthony would be able to very efficiently create the mind mana that he constantly needed without having to devote any of his own mental resources to the task. Further freeing up his brains for more important work, the purchase of this organ was more than justified.

Next, Anthony had been at pains to try and address the weakness that was his legs, increasing the speed at which they could regrow, but it simply wasn’t enough. Although the triad planned on a reset for his limbs, it was necessary that energy be spent on a better solution.

Vestigial Limb Incubator. 

This would place six small organs adjacent to each of Anthony’s legs. Should one be damaged, the existing leg could be disconnected and the vestigial limb would take the place of the lost limb. Combined with mutations and healing fluid, the new leg could grow to an acceptable size in a matter of minutes, rather than hours.

The three had long considered Anthony’s… rather unique collection of senses. He had, thanks to his origin as an ant, a very broad ability to see, though his compound eyes began at an exceptionally poor baseline. His antennae, covered with fine hairs, were extremely sensitive to touch and smell, especially so after their reforging and subsequent mutation. In addition, he was able to sense future echoes, adding yet more information to an already crowded picture.

Reaction speed was key to the giant ant’s survival strategy, which meant rapidly processing this sensory information was critical. Shaving even a fraction of a second from his response time could be crucial. To facilitate this, they purchased an add-on to his existing brain structure: A Sensory Processor.

Looking at the work they had done, the triad could only brace themselves. They had barely made a dent in the vast reservoir before them. There was still much to do.

Comments

Toni Rayner

Heck yes enjoying the heck out of this mutation really bummed he couldn't take the first option though.

Yami

Hate it. Why should anthony even accept to a danger for the colony he should reject it. He is now a danger for all his sisters, the colony, can't play with the grubs anymore and the fortress should now be poisen for him. This completly sucks

Brandon14754

Sweet hopefully he'll get infinite self propagating gravity mana from the bulwark evolution

Rahsheem Reid

Today is my Friday at work and for there to be a triple chap during my boring day was very appreciated. Thank you RinoZ

CallMeTee

This is such a huge bummer. I have faith that Rinoz will turn this around somehow, but right now, it feels like the entire beginning of the story is getting invalidated. Yes, technically Anthony gave his nod of approval, but it feels like this entire section of the story has removed his agency, made him into a much more passive figure, with a large amount of repetition, and delayed gratification. If the ultimate payoff is a terrible evolution...I'll be pretty disappointed honestly. Hopefully the Chal arrive and fix this somehow.

shawn B

Damn… so we’re really leaving the perfect path

kev mil

I can't wait to see what the chal do here. I hope they are able to help correct Anthonys situation

Kris Piskorski

Don't like the evolution but I love that they will be able to finally optimize most of Anthony's body like he wasn't able to

Guilherme Alves

I hope this means he becomes somewhat resistant to the fifth and can rampage on the slugs for forcing him to take the sub optimal option

Lantern light

Please for the love of the colony let the chal fix this. this feels horrible and my motivation to read plummets.

Shakyamunie

TFTC ! If they really don't go with the Ascendant my only hope now is that just like the Chal, the megapool of cleansed mana inside the fortress changes Anthony during his evolution, makes him a pure mana version of his evolution, after all it's the moment where he is supposed to be the most sensible to modifications. That or a supersong from the kiddos snail that somehow affects his evolution. I would really hate it if he becomes basically a fifth strata monster...

James Seymour

I hope the chal can help correct this somehow

Tomislav Fistrić

Damn... There goes Gravity ant... Don't like this evolution one bit... And what is this infection core? Anthony is gone....

fair3238

Hope Rinoz can turn this evolution into something fantastic. i've been waiting for evolution chapter for so long for it to bum into something uninteresting

Yami

i really don't like this evolution and don't think this works in general. first the evolution: Anthony should reject it no matter the cost for him as soon as he finds out what they do. the evolution goes against everything he is and has done. the most important thing for anthony is the colony, not his survival (he starved himself to death for his ents on earth) this evolution invalidates all of that. he is now a walking Toxin source that should be poisend by being in the fortress, threatens to harm/corrupt his sisters, he can't play with grups anymore or anyone really. his entire Colony life is upended by this evolution. the core of his being. hell if that goes through he probably would just make a sucide run against some floor 6 or higher enemy.... the second option probably would have been better at least that way he would have been a colony itself. second... why did anythony wait till he hit the toxins anyway? he knew they threw them in and that he was slowly tumpling into it. so why wait with the escape till it was to late? what the hell was his plan. he even had internal dialugues about escaping before that but ... simply didn't? but third and probably a hugh problem as well. why exactly is Theorazzn doing this? the ancients want another ancient so why sabotage instead of challange? anthony got kicked off his path towards a evolution that is simply far worse what the hell. the demon challanged anthony but didn't aim to fuck him up like that. allready wrote a post but maybe this puts my thoughts in better words. by the way smooth of the triad to hide the other options from him. PS: i had a few minutes to think about what i wrote is .... rather negative towards you RinoZ. and while i mean what i wrote i want you to know that it is nothing agains you but more about my frustration.... ok doesn't sound better but i hope you know what i want to say.

Alex Shinall

NGL I'm hating this entire evolutionary process. Anthony has no agency to pick and choose his own upgrades, and now he's stuck with a subpar upgrade. I'm holding on to hope that something good happens during the upgrade.

Gonvas

Anthony fuses 4 organs -> less mutations -> less itch. Triad buys a set of new organs 🤣🤣

Gonvas

I don't get the angle of he's now dangerous and blue mana now poisons him. From the description, this is not like T7 major option where he spread corruption with a passive aura. And he isn't covered in 5th stratum toxic materials that may react to blue mana...

Yami

Lets say he somehow lifes with it till tier 9. All i can see is him spending all his energy to get ride of the toxin and cortuption organs thereby reduxing his potential even further

Gonvas

To delete the organs, it would need to be a feature of next evolution. I don't think the custom menu allows to revert organs and mutations just like that.

Greyg

Theorazzn doing this? He corrupts everything just because the ant gets corrupted doesn’t mean it wouldn’t descend becoming an ancient under Theorazzn the ancient has everything to gain that’s also likely why he sent the krath seeking the other Monster anc. candidate somewhere in the fifth. Consider this the raise of dark Anthony

Greyg

Rinoz everyone is mad at the raise of Dark Anthony i still imagine the evolutions as a web not so linear imagine you plan on making the next evolution something more aligned with his previous path of ant godhood, but whatever dark Anthony is in control now only the chal can change it

jeffrey niski

Everyone definitely big mad about this evolution choice.

Greyg

Lies my bias is right demiurge all over agian i want my fortress realm

bobby2dreki

Wait, I forgot the Chal's!!! Indeed let them come in time to somehow fix this evolution mess.

Greyg

Misinterpreting context is common the infectious aspect is his will so dark Anthony influencing the colony going to war baby i see silver city invasion and focused wipe out of krath

CentaureHeart

Welp there it goes, kinda feels like the Triad took the easy way out. I mean, if you're going to help him, just do it well. They litterally took the first solution that popped up. They are even saying that they have this juge reservoir of energy to use and they couldn't even try and find a solution in there ? Anyway, sorry Rinoz, thanks for the chapter ^^^

jeffrey niski

Also I think this evolution is when Anthony does the big sleep

Ozzy

I agree with every point you made. I'm usually hesitant to be over critical of plot points as they are released in serialized stories since as the audience we don't have the full picture. The author has a plan for how the story is going to go and it's usually better to just let them cook and everything will turn out alright in the end. On the other hand we're pretty much beta readers for the story so some constructive criticism while we are still at at point where things can be easily changed might be appreciated. My biggest issue is Anthony just letting himself roll into the pool. It's straight up and idiot plot moment that makes no sense. If it's important for the plot going forward that Anthony gets infected and is forced to take this substandard evolution, ok fine. I don't like it but I don't like any point in a story where the protagonist gets a big setback but they usually make the story better in the end so I will trust you know what you're doing. But the scene where Anthony gets dunked should be changed. He should escape before entering the pool like he planed, have a brief skirmish with the slugs before being forced in or splashed. That way this evolution feels like the consequence of enemy actions rather than Anthony just being a complete moron for no reason.

BelligerentGnu

May a twist save this Evo, because it's a massive bummer.

Yami

It says spring in his name and talks about how the everproduced corruption will also kill his enemies therefore be external as well. It is based on the corrupted form of the fifth therefore it is damaged and attacked by the blue mana

TheLostGolem

So, looking at how things are going, Anthony is going to be a highly toxic gravity based super ant, which sounds awesome. Downside, his grub tickling days might be far behind him.

TheLostGolem

Still Waiting to see what the chal decide to do, since that's a hanging plot point. Theorozann was insistent that the singing must stop, so there must be a reason for that. Imagine that they interfere with the evolution process through singing to convert the toxic aspect to a purification aspect.

Pmonk

Nice chap overall, just wondering about the Legion, those guys would be glad to give Anthony a hand 😆

artisticVulpes

Ok... I hate this whole evolution thing! This is a terrible choice! Anthony HATES this, I hate it too! The first evolution was the best one! I don't think that this is salvageable if they pick this terrible evolution! Polishing SHIT is STILL a SHIT!

Gonvas

I see it as a mana gland, where it produces mana and he then uses said mana as he sees fit. Which most likely is to kill enemies, same way he uses his gravity gland. It's a spring because it doesn't need the core to create mana. If he doesn't want to spread mana of X attribute around him then just don't use that mana attribute. That applies to all mana types xD

Loulatsch

Wow, so many comments just its a really disliked direktion of the story.

Blackking👑

I mean, it's gonna be like what happened to tiny

Blackking👑

Next evolution he's probably gonna sacrifice everything that doesn't fit with the direction he wants to go in for for one that fits better with what he wanted in the first place before he was infecting you'll probably end up, only keeping the upgraded acid system

Blackking👑

I mean, if they took the one that he wanted, he would've died. It's the same situation that happened with tiny. They took the one that he wanted of the ones that would've saved him and next evolution he's gonna be able to fix everything and probably will sacrifice the organs that he doesn't want for more energy on his path

Blackking👑

I mean, it's just a little bit strange why everybody is so upset. We've seen something like this earlier in the story and tiny is on the path that he wants to be instead of the one that he was pushed onto Anthony is just gonna sacrifice the organ he got for this evolution at tier 9 for the ones that are more in line with his wants

Blackking👑

The option he will want at the 9th tier evolution is probably just gonna erase all of the organs for that he got in the eighth tier other than the fusion of acid organs

Blackking👑

They're literal babies. Are they have some ancestral knowledge they would have no way to modify his evolution choices at all.

Skipping

I’ll trust the process

CentaureHeart

I don't remember being able to sell organs for energy like that. But anyway, it's not the same impact as Tiny. And they took the first solution without looking at anything else, that's what bothers me more.

Ether's Blessed One

No, not the grubs tickling. Anthony: Am I here just to suffer??!!

Ether's Blessed One

Hey, I'm just waiting for Gandalf to come and says: You shall not choose these.

blue turtle

Yea the choices suck there is already contanimination based ancient , it wouldnt make since for there to be anotherone.

Noquele

I trust in lil chal bros, they will safe Anthony from this miserable evolution path. Have faith all. For the Colony!

Brandon14754

This always happens, it happened with larvel god, it happened with the evolution before etc.

Yami

they held back two evolutions and only gave him the last two to choose. maybe they could have picked the they wanted. they had a plan to reset things and did not think to use that. if you have to be a toxins spewing monster at least take the swarm. he is a colony in itself then.

Bitterblue Songbird

Thank you for the chapter <3 I know you're catching a lot of flak about the evolution.. but sometimes sacrifices need to be made and the less optimal path taken to survive. And this evolution could open up excutong new future paths! So... PRAISE! PRAISE BE TO THE GREAT ONE!! PRAISE HIS GLORIOUS SHININESS!!

JulianP

Ngl that'd be pretty cool if the chal did that. And it'd give him an advantage against Theorozann in case they ever come to blows.

Napalm078

Viva la Evolution!

Greyg

Power fantasy bias i wanted demiurge with fortress realm in BOD

TheLostGolem

Okay. So I'm seeing all the negative views on this evolution and honestly, I don't see why everyone is so upset. Anthony isn't getting all the benefits of the first evolution for free, but he still has a ton of evolutionary energy to spend. It's entirely possible that they just purchase the stuff using that. The Golgari can just be like, Hey World-Infused Flesh Musculature? Brains reforged into Radiant Dynamo Matter?A Core of Ascension? All that stuff sounds great, so we'll just buy that since we have so much to spend. So we get some of the benefits of the first evolution option while Anthony also can now comfortably annihilate the rest of the 5th stratum so that no Ant has to go through that ever again.

Hayden Leech

I think Anthony once looked at world infused organs once and saw it was wildly outside the energy budget. It’s probably still extreme.

Nyther of Fyre

There is still time, nothing has been truly locked in

Greyg

Ascendant slime brain so no dynamo brain also your assuming each evolution has the same potential unlocks or cheap enough his reforges would have been cheaper other evo the organs themselves full price is too much. Power fantasy bias is real i don’t love it personally think this evo should be pure defense change the organs and the leech into passive soul/toxic defense the eye reforge option should be pure offense. I don’t really like these chapters even the trio taking over the plot device for whatever itching the slow snails i would have preferred Dark Anthony moments his subconscious/will being influenced by the ancient toxin maybe he talks to him like he did with the demon ancient plot wise i like that better than giving autonomy over to the three rock heads i dislike no Ant opinions either imagine Solant controlling the evolution this is just whatever not Ant

Greyg

Some of them overlap a little a few have multiple elements that fuse into different effects like water and darkness another was water earth death then the worm was Earth/metal maybe likes eating the rock people then another more pure metal emphasis on sharpness i think Anthony so low tier in comparison the eventual fusion of differences makes something unique

TheLostGolem

The amount of evolutionary energy each evolution goes up exponentially. By no means is it cheap, but he's gone through several evolutions with Max core and mutations at this point, meaning he should have a boatload of evolutionary energy at this point making the options that would have previously been to expensive more in line with the budget.

Robling49

couldn't they take the first evolution then get him an extra organ to deal with the bad energy?

Greyg

People are angry and want him to take that chance, but is an organ or reforge good enough to deal with an Ancients toxin the evolution menu gives an out that otherwise might not exist Tinys evolution was similar at a low tier with a special shadow mana. Logically there would be no discussion, as Anthony shouldve been fully corrupted on or after initial dip in the pool of filth. Logic or limitations inside unknown deep magic dungeon planet though aren’t logical like Anthony creates blackholes inside a planet logically that’s suicidal

Mo Alawami

I don't think this evolution is that bad, until we compare it to the first one and our past expectations. It still sounds powerful and super helpful in combating toxic mana, which Anthony would probably have to deal with again soon. Maybe even to a higher level, so this might be blessing in disguise. Still wishing on a miracle though so we get that sweet first option 🥺. Maybe by song?!

Enzo Elacqua

Yeah but that’s a whole wasted evolution for no reason, honestly it double sucks because we’ve spent this whole time fighting the fifth with barely any focus on advancement and now that we’re actually making some changes we get this sub or option?

Enzo Elacqua

Yes but it also takes exponentially longer to reach the next evolution, I wouldn’t care as much if this was earlier. Also honestly what’s annoying is more this doesn’t really fit with the vibe of Chrysalis, if this happened in BOD sure it makes sense to have to sacrifice to survive since it’s grim dark but not so much for happy go lucky Anthony.

Shakyamunie

Honestly for me it's purely "vibe" based, nothing about power or something like that, I would just be very sad if he ends up being something this "close" to a 5th strata monster, using corrupted mana and such. And even more when you consider the reactions of basically every other civilisations and groups outside the Colony. The fifth is feared and hated, not just in the Legion but probably even with the Colony current allies

ZaneofBane

I feel like the other ancients are going to punish Thorazz for this one. He may have shaved off some of Anthony's potential, and if the other potential ancient dies, it's a risk to their plan.

Colin C

Yeah, still waiting for the revelation of how the chal chorus will impact Anthony.

Anthony Romanov

Well, ants in general are biochemical warfare masters. So having Anthony have really potent acid is aligned with the ant theme. It will allow Anthony to combat Toxic Ancient in the future. All in all, it's good evolution. RinoZ never delivers a straight path. I like how the story is never optimal. Bad situations happen and we can't have it all. This is called good writing. Keep it up, RinoZ.

Collector of Stories

It’s at moments like this that you need to remember to trust the author. Obviously this is less than ideal but Rhino has to have some sort of plan

Kewi397

I’m listening to book 4 and I just noticed something. I don’t think Anthony used meditation skill for the entire 5th floor. The book reminded me that he has that skill, but I don’t remember him using it at all during this entire floor

Yami

nowthere in the evolution does it state that it will deal with the corruption either. None of them do the triads just asumes they do. maybe the evolution just adds another corruption on top and make everything even worse. and what if a Core of Ascension would just purefy every poisen or toxin? endless options that were disregarded because they had a plan. if they knew him and how important the colony is to him they would not have done that. also anthony does not fire blackhole he fires dense gravity balls. and whats the point of getting better at dealing with the toxins of the fifth if they already are purifying it? it wasn't really that much of an issue before. Anthony just let them dump him into the toxin pool without fighting against it. now with their massive savety zone it should be a breeze in comparison.

Yami

oh right that it will completly torpedo their relationship with all other powers in the dungeon even their allies was something i didn't even rant abou jet. god damit it get worse.

Yami

just to point it out i have nothing against a bit of dark anothony problems. hell i would have been fine if there is a nebulus link between him and the fifth and the ancient that boast his darker side thanks to the toxins. that would have been interesting and maybe even put a deadline on their purefication of the fifth. but to turn him into a corrupted fifht ant ... no.

Yami

that is 640 Levels that he has to get under the effects of that one just for the offchane of becomeing a normal ant again. and now he is a corrupted fifth stratum monster. he should now suffer from the blue mana

Yami

well anthony becoming a corrupted fifth stratum monster was not on the bingo card of most people (he should no longer be able to life in the purefied land and every diplomatic link can now be forgotten). especially because nothing in the evolution even states that it will help. it could even just ad another corrution on top of the ancients ones. the triad only asumes it will help they have no evidence for that believe.

Gonvas

Ch 1396. It was consumed in a 4 way rank V fusion to create Manifold High-Focus V.

Gonvas

He's not turning into a corrupted monster nor into a 5th stratum monster. Same way Tiny didn't turn into a 2nd stratum monster or a shadow monster when his evolution was influenced by invading shadow mana. Tiny got wings related to shadow. Anthony gets his own corruption theme organs. That's it. They need an option that consumes the corruption energy, same way it happened in the past with Tiny. They aren’t guessing about consuming the hostile energy.

alt31415

Still can't over people freaking out over this. Like yeah, it sucks for Anthony but... things are allowed to go wrong for the protagonist???

Guant

I get the feeling that Gandalf will help since he’s one of the ancient 19 himself.

Gonvas

I find that diplomacy idea ridiculous xD

alt31415

'Logically' he doesn't make black holes. Just magic effects that at first glance look like one.

zozzy the beast

I'm hoping the chal kids can help him. I know it's the authors choice but getting the poison evolution would be a mistake. He's the eldest if he becomes insanely toxic he can't stay with the colony. To an ant the colony is all.

zozzy the beast

Save him from a crappy evolution chal children. Maybe their song can neutralize the toxin. That's why the ancient I won't try to spell wants them gone so badly.

Gonvas

Let's see what RinoZ is cooking 😉

Brandon14754

For context rinoz asked on the discord people to calm down and let him cook

Gonvas

I said it first :p

Kewi397

Thank you. Man, 300 chapters ago. No wonder I forgot

Yami

Yeah sure doesn't sounds like it. The entire theme of this evolution is not based on the corrupted fifth layer. Having corruption, spreading it and the eyes will probably be some wigly parasite from the outside. ..

Yami

Why do people think the baby snails whose entire empire was destroyed and turned into the krath can or even should be able to do something?

Ragged

Rinoz, I need you to cook on this one, I am a little sad that he can't go Colony Ascendant cuz that shit sounds cool af but you're the man and an author we can trust 🖊️ 🔥 🔥 🔥

Alvin

Really glad I came to these comments to see that RinoZ is cooking coz my heart was breaking!!

Bolts

I hate this evolution

Austin Barton

Yeah but they outline an option to get rid of the toxin and instead of grabbing a random creature and injecting them the “smart” people ignore that as an option entirely then the author shows us an option that Anthony would 100% choose and could have if they just grabbed some random shmo from the dungeon. Now the author needs to do writing gymnastics to make the audience happy and give Anthony a chance to do what they are so clearly setting up.

seth archuleta

I hate everything about this and skipped most of this chapter and will probably skip most of the next several chapters

Vora_Vixen

Dang, these comments crazy. Sometimes bad things happen to characters. People are really too use to boring stories where the MC has nothing go wrong ever.