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Author note: Going to be some retcon and rewrites which isn’t something I like to do, but I feel is correct in this instance. 

I was pushing for a few scenes I thought would be cool and believed I needed Tyron to stay Gold for that, but I actually don’t, and I agree that the whole adventure to the Realm of the Dead, and this whole book as an extension, feels like a waste if he doesn’t get level 80 here and now.

So that’s the change. I’m going to rework the battle scene to make it a bit more epic. More losses probably. I’ll change it so the wyvern brings the ghoul baddie through the portal so Tyron gets to kill and study him. Then, at the end of the last chapter, he’ll perform the status ritual and see that he’s reached eighty, and then this chapter will continue from that point.

Again, I don’t like to do it, but I feel like this is going to be a much better book with this change. Sorry about the discontinuity in your reading experience.

Second Author note: I apologise for this being late and a bit short. I've come down with a cold again. I'll try and finish the next chapter tomorrow.

Looking at that number on the page, eighty, Tyron felt powerful emotions stir behind his eyes. He choked out a strangled laugh, then blinked to clear the moisture from his eyes.

He’d done it. This was the milestone that Magnin and Beory had reached and so many others had failed to attain. In a world where Gold was the upper limit allowed to Slayers, his parents had dared to go beyond, demanded it, and now he too had reached that same stage.

With trembling hands, he placed the status sheet down, then folded it in his lap.

If he were asked, he genuinely couldn’t say why it affected him so much, but seeing that number… It made him feel like he was sitting at the dinner table, his mother and father playfully ribbing each other as they prepared the food together while he watched. Just back from another adventure, they still smelled like the road, like blood and oil and smoke and steel, but as always, they revelled in it. 

He would sit and watch them, his legs dangling from the tall seat, as the two strongest Slayers into the entire Western Province, to him, the two strongest in the entire world, prepared a simple stew. When it was ready, they would turn to him with broad smiles, asking him how he’d been, what he was learning, as they sat beside him and threw their arms over his shoulders.

Even then, when he’d only been five or six years old, he’d known he wanted to be like them. 

In fact, it went beyond a want, he needed to be like them. Deep down, he’d always expected he would make it, that he would succeed and climb to the same heights they had attained. It hadn’t been an ambition for Tyron, it had been a fact. He refused to live in their shadow his entire life, it wouldn’t be tolerated. No, he had to make it, otherwise how could he possibly justify staying by their side?

Now that he’d done it, now that he’d finally made it, for the first time in years, he felt close to his parents again.

And it hurt like hell.

For several long minutes, he simply lay back on the grass and endured. Pain was followed by anger, then grief, then pain, then anger. His rage was incandescent, all-consuming, and in its wake he was left shuddering, with the taste of ash in his mouth. His pain was hard edged and sharp, like the knife that pierced Magnin and Beory’s hearts, it dug deep into his chest and carved out a space for itself, nestling there like a dragon in its den.

And his grief. It crushed him all over again.

Every member of the horde gave him space as he lay back and let his emotions roll through him. Perhaps he’d locked them away for too long, leaving himself icy cold and unfeeling so that he could do what had to be done, so now they came boiling to the surface.

Or perhaps, even years later, he was still suffering from the events atop the mountain, outside the rift at Cragwhistle.

Regardless, Tyron wept. Tears slid down the sides of his face as he stared into the sky and tried not to think.

When at last the waves of crushing emotion had receded, he felt hollow and listless, as if his insides had been scraped out along with his feelings. Fatigue, or more accurately, exhaustion still gripped him. It would take time for him to recover from his journey to the Realm of the Dead, a while until he felt like himself again. 

Filetta had been right, he should have waited to perform the ritual. How else could he explain this excess of emotion? He hadn’t cried since the day he had sealed the remains of his parents in their crystal tombs and on that day he’d thought he probably never would again.

Scrubbing at the sides of his face, he summoned the ever present hatred inside him, trying to use it as fuel for the fire, to gain the energy he needed to focus and complete the ritual. This was important, perhaps the most important status ritual he would enact in his entire life. He couldn’t afford to make mistakes.

A guttering ember compared to the roaring flame it usually was, the wisps of hate were all the emotion he had left in him after that outpouring. Carefully, he stoked the flames, terrified it would gutter out, and soon he felt the warmth of it heating him from the inside once again. When he was ready, he sat up and shook himself, trying to throw off the bone-deep lethargy that gripped him.

Soon, he felt as ready as he was ever going to be, and went back to reading the sheet.

You have raised Skeletons and they have fought on your behalf. Imperator of the Endless Horde has reached level 80.

Eight levels at once was going to be a large influx of attributes. If the Platinum rank provided a boost just like bronze, silver and gold, then he may well pass out when the ritual was complete.

Excitement coiled in his belly at the prospect of reaching platinum rank. Gold was rare amongst the Slayers he’d grown up with, a goal that not many reached, and once they did, they were rarely seen ever again. Most toiled in Silver, either retiring or dying without ever getting higher. Nobody knew about the Platinum rank, even his parents had never told him anything about it.

Very, very few achieved this level in the Empire. There had to be a reason it was so restricted, and Tyron was eager to see why that might be.

That would take place when he ended the ritual. In the meantime, he had to choose two Feats and four abilities. 

He turned his attention to the list of Feats first. With fewer to choose from, it would be easier to make his selection. 

Fighting the urge to skip through these selections as quickly as possible, Tyron settled his mind and focused. Every option would be given proper consideration, no careless mistakes. Without a Class Guide of any sort, he had to be ten times as careful as anyone else.

So far, he’d taken Grand Imperator, which empowered the Imperator ritual, and Exponential Horde, which increased the rate Death Magick was shared between his minions, as his two selections for his current Class.

Both were excellent picks, but that didn’t mean there weren’t good selections left on the table. Checking the list, he carefully read through each of the options.

Endless Death I - Empower your spirit with Death Magick, becoming a source of its own.

Efficient Death III - Your mastery will allow you to achieve more with less.

Soul Regeneration - Allow your soul to replenish itself.

Empowered Generals - Wights are able to draw more magick through their conduits.

Hand of Death - Offensive Death Magick is stronger.

Skeleton Mastery I - Empowered skeletal minions.

Imperator Control - Raise the Skill Cap of Enhanced Minion Commander by forty.

Horde Mage - Draw power from your minions to strengthen your magick.

Part of Tyron still deeply regretted not taking Skeleton Master I earlier in the hopes that Skeleton Mastery II would have appeared. The empowered ritual had been worth it, but it had been a close call.

Even now, with two selections off the table, there were many he still wanted to take.

Efficient Death spoke for itself. Tyron had prioritised increasing his pool of available magick and using it more efficiently from the beginning. As his horde grew, the demands on his power grew apace, and efficient death was one of the ways he’d been able to get ahead of the curve.

Endless Death would help on the other side, giving him access to more magick. He’d been leary of Soul Regeneration before, unsure what it might actually do. After his recent experiences, he suspected he might know how it could be useful, but was unsure it should be a priority.

Empowered Generals was attractive. His wights were his strongest undead, and allowing them to draw more magick would only make them stronger. However, there were other ways to achieve the same result. If he could create better conduits, for example. Even so, he was tempted.

Hand of Death was also appealing. It would be useful, giving him an immediate boost to offensive magick, but how much? Without any reference, it was impossible to say.

Tyron was more and more active in battle now, and his fight in the Realm of the Dead had opened his eyes to the degree he could turn the fight. All he needed was more powerful spells.

Imperator Control was an absurd increase for a single skill, and would instantly solve the problem he had casting spells through his minions. With practice and time, his control over his minions’ movements would become incredibly precise allowing him to unleash his power from anywhere on the battlefield.

He had a feeling Horde Mage would allow him to pull magick out of his minions, rather than the opposite, or perhaps let him draw in the portion of death magick they created amongst themselves to fuel his spells. Useful, to be sure, but not something he wanted to prioritise.

What choices to make?

Skeleton Mastery called to him with a siren song. It synergised with everything he had tried to do so far and had the broadest application. All of his minions were some form of skeleton after all, with a small collection of ghosts as the exception.

He had to take it.

The second choice was much more difficult. Efficient Death was also attractive, but at some point Tyron needed to turn away from having more magick available and invest in power. His horde was sadly lacking against the meager forces the Death Lords had sent his way, his minions needed to be stronger. Better. And so did he.

Empowered Generals then? It would make his deadliest weapon immediately stronger, but he was reluctant to take it. There were better ways.

Soul Regeneration tantalised him. He’d only brushed the edges of proper Soul Magick, and he knew it would be immensely powerful. This Feat wouldn’t immediately unlock that branch of magick, but he could sense some of the implications. Many Necromancers walked the path of lichdom, and he knew more about it than he had ever let on to his students. Many writings of Arihnan had never reached their hands, locked away out of sight, volumes in which the ancient Necromancer had ruminated on the ways and means of transforming into an undead.

This Feat would help, Tyron was sure of it.

Still, he ultimately chose Imperator Control.

Such an extreme boost to a Skill was rare, along with the Class specific name, which was an indicator of exclusivity. Only his Class would be offered this Feat, and such things were usually strong.

With those choices made, he turned to selecting his abilities. With eight choices to make, he would have a lot to think about.

Comments

Van234

I think this is a good choice to redact story. This will feel much more satisfying.

braeden winstead

Aye nice! Good to see you really care about the quality so I don't mind rewrites like this occasionally, Tyrone might actually stand a chance against the upcoming gold army now!

Romulo Moreira

Autor, nos conte como você pensou em fazer o Tyron alcançar o 80?

RinoZ

I would love to answer this question. I really would.

David Burchfield

Agreed I like it much better like this. Nice to see he is still following his fathers advice on raising skill caps.

Greyg

I like the changes making Tyron reach his goals after death realm will make for a more satisfying read if the retcon flows well. I dislike the emotional discharge they feel repetitive he is a master of death that watched his parents die shouldn’t he be driven towards reclaiming their souls? Not just revenge or anger? It’s like he forgets he is a Necromancer those souls belong to him edit: otherwise how could he possibly justify staying by their side? This line is the closet thing to a declaration of intent for their souls a goal beyond just revenge

Greyg

Author, tell us how you thought about making Tyron reach 80? Translated through google

Sean Hibbitt

Heya, thanks for the chapter, and I think you made the right choice!

Dailion

Magnin and Beory made a deal with some entity, I don't remember if it was explicitly mentioned but I believe it was some vampire clan, to make sure their souls didn't fall in the hands of the gods, so with their mortal bodies secured for Tyrion and their souls secured by this unknown power Tyrion has no means to seek his parents souls.

BubblyGhost

'ghoul baddie' - I almost thought you mean Filetta

Dailion

I'm a spanish native speaker and never would I post something in spanish on a media written in english, like just why people do this? jajaja

CentaureHeart

Yean I like that as well. Those feats are all great honestly

Gonvas

IIRC, his father was specifically about foundation skills not skills in general.

Greyg

Copy pasted into google works fine for the majority of the internet. Making/asking a good question is the more important part, as Rinoz states he is rewriting the battle that got him to lvl80 the answer to his Spanish question would be in the future released retconned chapters not yet written

Greyg

My point is his anger should be directed and focused he should be furious someone anyone has their souls not just that they’re dead. Those souls belong to him after spending time in death realm it would be similar to the behavior of the death lords. I don’t hate that he is expressing his anger i dislike how pointless it is wasting half the chapter if the end of his emotional discharge was a declaration for his parents souls i would feel that’s inline with a necromancer that just spent weeks bathed in death clawing at dust for a few souls payoff. His parents made a deal he didn’t agree to it those souls belong to him possessiveness is what’s needed after his emotional outburst.

Sean Harper

Take your time man, i personally think this book is your book, if this is a change you want go for it, if you feel rushed don’t feel rushed. So far I’ve loved this book and I trust your vision for what it should be. Thanks Rinoz

Slapjack

Its wild how Tyron AND Anthony are becoming OP at the same time. Very exciting as a long term fan of your work.

Greyg

Pretty sure Rinoz tried not to make them op even when it makes sense, as this is retconned and the hate he received prior/during Anthonys evolution likely changed his plans/writing

Merf

I actually don’t think it changed anything. Here he definitely did, but with Anthony I think that was always the plan, people were just so impatient.

Daft Dolphin

"It was all a dream ..." *whimsical hand movement*

Magnus

Definitely don't mind retcons that make the story better and this one does. I do think the part where he's talking about maybe locking his feelings away for too long sounds a bit off though. Wasn't it specifically the vampire's leader magically manipulating his mind that did that? He was aware and a bit concerned about it before so to me it's a bit weird for him to blame himself for that here. How is he even feeling it? I thought the suppressed feelings were after the Three undid what they could of the manipulation, so shouldn't he still be like that? Did the Realm of Death eat away at the vampire's magic or something? Or maybe Tyrion being so near death broke their hold?

Greyg

I actually liked the toxic evolutions so was fine with all outcome's personally didn’t like giving the evolution choices to the three rocks, but it opens up the future story with more plot lines from the cults so makes sense. Chrysalis has no retcon or changes i know about i think BOD has two atleast the spell/skill of exploding skeletons and the return from death realm good changes. Hope Rionz the best

Greyg

If anything is left of the vampire mistresses mind alteration exists it is deep and hidden it put him into a self destructive spiral that the old head priest fixed honestly expected a subconscious draw towards blood magick he unlocked that one spell for a blood shield and life steal so sorta, but those were more logical choices filling his weaknesses. In my comments below i want him to feel and express a possessive quality towards his parents souls even if out of reach. The possessive attitude of death lords after bathing in death for weeks a declaration for their souls would tie in all of the emotions for me ‘otherwise how could he possibly justify staying by their side?’ This line is the closet thing to a declaration of intent for their souls a goal beyond just revenge

Slapjack

For Chrysalis there was definitely a plan to subvert evolution exepctations with the Chul. He must've thought of that 50 chapters before, when they were first introduced.

SlanneshSoldier69

Personally I was fine with it either way you don't always achieve what you want even with effort and smarts. I could have seen vampires doing something to inhibit MC from reaching it without their help for example. That said I think the extent of what he did practically would be worth the level up so makes sense.

Greyg

Yeah all the talk of miracles foreshadowed something i like that they are acknowledged, as purified chul not the ancient chul i like the distinction people were so pissy when it happened though made me laugh

Nordbard

That could happen later on, but right now he still has emotional attachment towards them as in he doesn't view them like he would other randos souls.

Greyg

He acknowledged they would be his best minions early on so your ignoring the obvious he preserved them the best he could he carted them to the estate i think they’re hidden somewhere kinda forget because he didn’t have the skills necessary or the souls which he still doesn’t have a clue about, but he should be possessive of them his emotional attachment towards his parents is focused on their death all i want is him to express his parents souls as a goal. I assume it’s a plot point for the future, but his emotional discharge ignores the fact he is a necromancer his parents death is not the end of his relationship all he needs is their souls a possessive attitude would fit himbetter than just being whiny he is the closet thing to a living death lord he should be ashamed of being weak and angry at himself

Tsurani

Do you have any backlog of chapters, or are you posting them here shortly after finishing them?

CentaureHeart

I wonder when Tyron will try to make his own offensive spells. I don't see why he couldn't do it, it just was never a necessity.

Greyg

Minions are class requirements for xp gain so minions are the focus he has created(invested time) more so than unlocked an average necro would grow slow the unseen are stingy with minion unlocks(i want student chapters so bad). He modified a ritual to attach doves soul to his skull then came revenants then the constructs cauldron, Dove body, and giant it took awhile for wights and demilich think of everything only the demilich was an unlock and wyvern/riftkin improved from notes maybe forgetting a few i think he is avoiding a massive status sheet as best he can also time/page limits of mc and author it’s occasionally mentioned he tries regularly to improve upon his repository of spells i don’t remember many offensive creations. Craftsmanship FTW minion focus forever his casting is well practiced he has double cast and reacted to an attack during a ritual he is already above and beyond any mage we are shown (we need a view of empire mages to compare too)

Samuel May

The retcon was a good choice for the flow of the story IMO. Full support here RinoZ!

Runaway_Cactuar

Fully agree on the retcon. Narratively, we are on the eve of the big battle. So we don't need another side quest to get to plat.

Liam

That’s fine just take your time.

RinoZ

pretty soon after finishing them. I'm ahead for chrysalis, but not bod

RinoZ

the plan for the evolution was set quite a ways out for chrysalis. The end of this book is something I came up with relatively recently

Señor de las hormigas

It could very well establish a priority for future arcs, or a problem that could interfere with his revenge at some point in the future. It wouldn't necessarily have had to be a small, self-contained arc.

Señor de las hormigas

t's your story, RinoZ, and it's nice that you let us know about any changes you plan to make that will affect future chapters. So far, you've kept both this story and Chrysalis interesting. Just out of curiosity, how did you plan to continue the story with Tyron if he didn't reach level 80? And if the Ghoul bat is dead, won't Dove have problems with the associated Death lord?

lenkite

> Very, very few achieved this level in the Empire. Not true - as we know there is the Imperial Guard who are all [Platinum] ranked.

Nordbard

How is the statement not true? You can probably count the number of imperial guard members on one hand if not two at most. The golden legion members are said to number in the 10000 or something like that. Less than 1% of the empires forces hold platinum rank