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Do you think I deserve this?

Laurel’s voice echoed from the spectre that hovered in the centre of the obscuring cloud of mist created by the Speak With Dead spell. Ghostly eyes filled with rage glared at him, baleful and red. Tyron folded his arms across his chest.

“You went after a Necromancer in the hopes of getting some coin, Laurel. You knew what might happen.”

You have no reason to keep me. Set me free.

Freedom had always been the deepest of Laurel’s desires. She didn’t want to be controlled, she didn’t want to be bound or limited by the circumstances of her birth or place a limit on her own potential. In many ways, she’d been like his parents, manically devoted to living an unbound life. He couldn’t keep a smile twisting his lips.

“Freedom? You won’t get freedom for a long time, friend. You’ll serve instead.”

The spectre screamed, like a wind of death blown straight from a crypt.

You want me to apologise? You want me to beg?

Tyron only shook his head.

“Do you think I care about what you did anymore? The only reason we are speaking at all is because I felt like I owed it to you, given the time we spent together. I’m not sure if you can see it in your present state, but look there, your vessel is ready and waiting. The next time we speak, you’ll be there, inside your skeleton, bound to serve until I die.”

I will kill you.

“No… you won’t.”

~~~

The creation of a revenant was something that Tyron had learned without the aid of the Unseen, but after all his research and strides forward, he felt that he understood the process so much better now. Of course, that could just be his new mystery whispering in his ear. Any Necromancy he performed since earning the Essence of Death had felt that little bit more natural, as if death was revealing itself to him.

The process involved binding the spirit to the bones, something he had intuited. A spirit was a manifestation of magick, and magick could be moulded into any shape when enough will was applied. To create a revenant, he had to pour their spirit into the skeleton like molten iron, fusing the ghost and the threads laced inside the bones together. Only then would the ghost have control over the remains.

Was it strictly necessary to use the skeleton and spirit of the same person to achieve this result? Possibly not, but Tyron believed it was certainly much easier, and likely produced a better undead. After all, who was more familiar with Laurel’s frame than Laurel herself?

The first time he’d done this, Tyron had struggled mightily to control the process, but now, it was simple. He exerted his will and enacted the ritual, layering the two spells atop each other as he Raised the Dead and summoned the ghost simultaneously. Laurel’s spirit wailed as he bound it to her bones, but he didn’t so much as blink.

Finally, he bound her mind in shackles of iron, using what he had learned to correct his mistakes from the past. There would be no rebellious fits from this revenant. She would obey unconditionally and never be able to turn her rage against him.

When it was finished, light bloomed within the skeleton, inside the hollow sockets of the skull, and a brighter fire within the rib cage, the telltale sign of a revenant. It was there that the spirit was most concentrated.

He bid his latest minion rise.

“You look good, Laurel. One of my finest creations, I must say.”

Wordless rage boiled through the connection he shared with the undead, but it was confused and aimless. Magickally prevented from directing her emotions towards him, they floundered aimlessly, thrashing for something, anything, to strike at. He handed her the bow he had prepared. Made from reinforced bones and enchanted to produce greater speed from the projectiles it launched, it was an excellent piece of work.

“This is the best bow you’ve ever gotten your hands on. Hopefully, it’ll serve you well.”

Wordlessly, he ordered her to collect the quiver of arrows, which the revenant silently slung over her armour. She drew an arrow, knocked it to the bow, and drew back. A shimmering thread of purple light ignited as the hand came back, stretching until the string rested next to Laurel’s bony cheek. She released, and the arrow whistled through the air for the barest fraction of a second before it shattered against the stone wall.

The ease at which the skeleton had moved pleased him greatly. The main advantages of a revenant was that it carried over at least some of the Skills the spirit had possessed in life. Laurel had been a gifted archer from a young age. It was a shame she’d never made it to her first Class advancement….

“You’ll do,” he said.

~~~

It was too hard to keep the smile off his face as light swirled from the rock on the ground, so he didn’t bother. The mist formed and within, the shadowy form of Rufus’ spirit.

Let me die! He raged.

“No chance. I’ve got a use for you. It’s about time someone did.”

The ghost thrashed and howled, twisting around itself as it tried to break free of the spell that bound it in place. The anger that burned in Rufus was so bright Tyron could almost feel it like heat on his face. It warmed him.

“Do you have any idea how long it’s taken me to fuse your stupid face back together? I didn’t find all of your teeth, though, sorry about that. I’ve substituted some for you. You’re welcome.”

Did Rufus even know how he’d died? Tyron had never told him before.

“I’m curious if you remember much of your death,” he pondered. “That was the one and only swordsmanship lesson Magnin had ever taught you. A valuable experience, to be sure.”

It wasn’t you, Rufus rasped, taunting. I had you. I HAD YOU.

“And look at you now,” Tyron clapped his hands sarcastically. “You’ve continued your winning streak in life.”

Suddenly, it didn’t seem interesting any more. Why was he here, taunting a dead man? Rufus wasn’t just defeated, he was bound and broken, about to be enslaved. There was no benefit to it.

“Speak to you again soon, Rufus,” he waved his hands and ended the spell, sending the spirit back into the rock.

When the Ritual was complete, Rufus was entombed within his own skeleton, his will shackled just as tightly as Laurel’s. He ordered his new revenant to walk up and down the study, keenly inspecting its gait to ensure the repairs had worked properly. Thankfully, everything seemed to be in order.

Ignoring the rage and despair that thundered inside the undead, he handed a finely crafted longsword, the best Tyron had made, enchanted with a fairly basic form of hardening that would hopefully prevent the weapon from chipping, or worse, breaking. His Bone Forged arms were yet to be truly tested in the heat of battle, regardless of what he’d done to them on his own, and part of him still didn’t trust they would be durable enough to survive.

“Give it a swing, Rufus,” he ordered aloud. “Let’s see how you move.”

His latest revenant slashed the air, unable to even contemplate refusing his commands, and Tyron was pleased to see the articulation of the wrists and elbows. His father had always emphasised how important wrists were for swordsmanship, though Tyron himself had never really understood it. Nevertheless, the range of motion was pleasing and his latest revenant appeared sufficiently deadly.

“A shame you didn’t get more levels,” he told his minion, “eventually you’ll be replaced with better slayers, but I’m happy enough with this for now. Welcome to your new existence Rufus.”

The spirit within the revenant was apoplectic with rage, but had no outlet for it. Externally, the undead stood as still and silent as any normal skeleton, though it looked much more impressive with its custom made armour and brightly burning spirit fire. If not for the connection that allowed him to sense the emotions of the soul trapped inside, Tyron would have no idea how Rufus felt about his captivity. Ultimately it didn’t matter. To achieve his revenge, he needed powerful undead servants and that meant revenants would inevitably be part of his retinue. Far better he tested his techniques on the weak souls he had available, unranked slayers like Laurel and Rufus, than later, on actually competent people.

Similar to Laurel, he dismissed Rufus and turned his attention to his next project. He didn’t know the name of the slayer who had borne the shield in their conflict, though he could summon the spirit to find out. Tyron opted not to. Although this person had tried to hunt him down for profit, there was no real grudge between them, and he felt that taunting the souls of deceased foes may prove to be a slippery slope. Already he found it difficult not to talk to his minions, despite repeatedly telling himself not to. Next he’d be conjuring up the spirit of every slayer and marshal he killed to throw rocks at them.

A waste of time.

So he didn’t bother, instead he focused on each step of the process in creating his latest revenant. He had four archetypes of skeletons at the moment. Sword and board, sword only, spears, bow and arrow. Rufus would act as the revenant leader of the longsword wielders, he had Laurel for the archers, and now this nameless slayer for the more defensive of his minions.

To emphasise his role, Tyron had taken great care in preparing this particular skeleton and its armour. The skeleton itself had almost doubled in weight due the reinforcement he’d done, which didn’t mean a lot in the greater scheme of things, skeletons were exceptionally light, but the final result was much tougher than before. For the armour, he’d done similar, reinforcing the bone before compressing and moulding it to the proper shape. This revenant would be the most heavily armoured by far as well, with bone plating covering its entire chest, along with thick, overlapping plates down the spine. Even the knee and ankle joints were protected, a touch which had taken far more time than he’d expected.

When the ritual was complete, the revenant rose and he once again put it through its paces, watching with keen interest as the skeleton swiped its weapon through the air, or braced its shield while he threw bones at it. He was satisfied with the result.

Now came the more interesting challenge. His ascension to a new Class had brought with it a number of surprises, but foremost amongst these was his capacity to engrave spells upon the minds of his minions. It may be possible for him to create skeletons capable of launching death bolts or similar, but for now he wanted to test this newfound ability on a mind more conducive to spell casting. He intended to inscribe two spells upon his revenant: Death Bolt, and Death Grasp, along with a much more elaborate enchanting array to gather the power necessary to fuel the magicks.

What thoughts and impressions he’d been able to glean from the hazy thoughts and impressions granted by the Unseen had been dutifully recorded and expanded upon in his notebook, and he referred to them now as he began to prepare the ritual. Raise Dead was already a difficult spell, or at least, comparatively, but by this time Tyron knew it like the back of his hand. Modifying it, even to this extent, wasn’t difficult for him, and he moved through the casting with confidence.

Words of power echoed through the chamber as he wove sigils with his hands, forging a new, unique form of undead.

When it was done, the revenant rose, hate and terror emanating from it in equal measure.

Tyron pointed to one wall.

“Cast Death Bolt,” he commanded.

The soul bound within the revenant had certainly known how to form a normal bolt, every mage did, to some extent, but a Death Bolt? Absolutely not. Nevertheless, the revenant extended a skeletal hand and a mass of dark energy shot forth to smash against the stone wall.

“Wonderful,” Tyron breathed.

Didn't take long, only two and a half full novels until Tyron started to really feel like a powerful Necromancer! Things should accelerate from this point on the power front, for those who've been struggling with the slow pace. I really want his improvements to feel earned, and to be honest, it'll probably still be slow because dammit I suck at pacing.ALSO! If you want to support BoD (more than you already are you legends), please head over to Amazon and leave a rating or review for BoD volume 1. It helps a TON!

Comments

Rubeno

I love how MC is not squeamish anymore without being outright evil. I'm so tired of virtue signalling, childish goody two shoes protags. I want moral quandaries that stem from complicated reality not Disney like stories for toddlers!

Rubeno

You know I wonder whether the greater rage the ghost posses the better revenant it creates in the process. Emotions means attachment, desire to achieve a goal which I believe will strengthen revenant as magickal shackles will direct undeads will toward necromancers orders. On the other hand fearful ghost that has given up on life produces on resistance but at the same time it has no drive, no personal attachment making it no different than puppet on strings. How different is that from a normal skeleton? Besides I like idea of hateful ghosts making strong revenants. It fits the theme so to speak and would explain why necromancers don't break their victims will and instead flare it out...which is due to practical reasons rather than personal perversion.

Rubeno

Actually, did Tyron used his Bone Armour spell in creation of armaments for his better undeads? I can't honestly say whether he did that or not

fity0208

I've always felt Laurel could reach some kind of agreement, being so pragmatic in her quest for power. Now I realize that her quest was for freedom, power being just a tool, but also the fact that her agreement was irrelevant from the begining

kjrubberducky

Bone Armor is a personal protection spell, not a passive skill that enhances his skeletons.

Rubeno

Nothing in spell description have said it's personal protection spell only. What stops Tyron from casting it on his skeletons and hooking upkeep to the enchantment network?

Rubeno

Laurel in comparison to MC parents had no personal loyalty to her friends. Tyrons parents at least cared for him at least at the same level as their thirst for adventure.

Rubeno

Agreed. Lace is ideal.i like slower pace overall as it allows me better immerse myself in world uilding.

Adevna

Bone armor is a personal spell for the caster. It doesn't make permanent armor. He's using shaping.

Rubeno

Bone Armor is a active spell that drains Magick continuously which is why I earlier speculated that Tyron can cast this spell on a revenant and then hook the upkeep to network of enchantments. Nothing says that the spell has to be on him personally only. In the end shaping is also just a spell and Bone Armor is a rigid spell. Cast it once and forget while maintaining Magicka upkeep.

Rubeno

There is an error. "He had four archetypes of skeletons at the moment. Sword and board, sword only, spears, bow and arrow.". - I remember undead types with shield and spear in previous chap not sword and shield.

Koala Man

I have really enjoyed the pacing , any faster and it would feel rushed . It has given the yrs of him laying low and skilling up the time it deserved . He’s heading out now, I think, and he’s heading out pretty well set up . Watching him put everything to use is going to be fun and I suspect even he will be surprised.

BRUNO ASTUR

Why cast it himself when he can have his revenants cast it on themselves? It is a spell and as such it can be inscribed in his mage revenants.

Rubeno

Because only his mage revenants will be able to cast it then on themselves. Why waste spell slot though or lower skeletons potential as a warrior by forcing it to be a mage when Tyron is perfectly capable of incorporating spell into his more precious undeads? The only cost I see here is increase in Magicka upkeep.

Hammy

I like the pacing, great story. My only suggestion is that Spear is a better weapon then a sword. It why (One of the whys at least) the Legions used Shield and Spear and the Gladus was a backup weapon

Gonvas

IMO, the pacing was only too slow in B1. B2 was great.

Blackking👑

Did she forget that the brand was a thing

Josh Turple

Won't feel slow if you write more!!!

alt31415

It was stated, some time ago, that Necromancer is a 'lategame build'. Seems all of Tyron's farming is finally paying off!

Elio Rossetto

You just got my first ever review! I hope it helps and many people finds this masterpiece!

Ceranai

Laurel doesnt deserve her fate here, but neither does the random shield dude. If Tyron wanted to be an ethical necromancer he would only use willing souls… so yea, if you think too much about it it is a bit dodgy

Poncemaster General

Laurel was never going to be free, slayer with a brand or shackled minion. Plus, taking Tyron’s freedom for gold, she made a choice that would only end in death even going well, she would be dead by his parents and not realising that was stupid.

jonathan Wieringa

Solo leveling vibes, army battling. 200 minions letgoo!

Rahsheem Reid

@David Are we reading the same novel? They all tried too kill him. If someone tried too kill you 4v1 you would use whatever you could too not let it happen again.

Rahsheem Reid

This not Rome. People have super powers

Rahsheem Reid

@RinoZ In terms of power is Ty at the level where he could take on a party like Doves?

Thomas Issa

I sincerely doubt it, definitely though after he figures out how to raise rift kin revenants

CentaureHeart

Pacing is great honestly! Tyron is slowly growing and improving, there is no rush really. His way of doing Necromancy was always going to be slow, even when he hits some rifts he won't be able to go straight to Gold because he'll have to get back to study and polish his skills and spells.

Forint

Pacing is fine. I'm not fucking around. There are lots of good stories and I'm putting my money where my mouth is.

Judurange

I love this book. Keep it up!

Rubeno

@David, Did Tyron deserved to be betrayed by his friends who after decades of being colleagues backstabbed him at the first occasion? Every action has reaction. They went after necromancer and how they are paying the price. They aren't innocent. They knew what they were courting with.

Rubeno

Super powers cancel each other out. Superhuman spearman vs superhuman swordsman at the same level will be like normal spearman vs normal swordsman. Besides another example is that even as high level Slayer going with a dagger against giants won't work out well.

Rubeno

To me when MC was running ragged at the beginning it felt too fast. I just wanted to MC have deserved rest and training arc otherwise it was too tiring. fortunately this book delivered.

Rubeno

Every action has reaction. Laurel knew what she was doing and now she is paying the price of her actions.

Rubeno

Tyron doesn't have yet silver ranked slayers as revenants. Silver ranked party can easily punch through and behead the general without bothering to fight undeads on even step. People at this rank are no longer inexperienced kids flailing around like they did first time Tyron confronted whole group of academy slayers by lonesome.

Rubeno

I love slow burn necromancers and seeing nuances of the job. Most necromancy stories are boring. Most often Korean novel where ostentatious protagonist waves hand and awesome undeads raise themselves without any work

Greyg

Who is she?

Greyg

Keep the pace slow add in some QOL moments for MC and his interactions with other characters. Drop feed us lore and world building, as he slowly accumulates knowledge and resources. Far too many Necromancer stories go exponential too quickly i want him facing hardship and setbacks that force character growth. I regret the subclass got glossed over hopefully the next and last sub class isn’t treated the same way as enchanting was I understand why but that time skip felt heavy handed making pacing feel off, but overall amazing writing we all hope you the best

TheRNGenius

Don‘t worry too much, about improving your pacing! For me it feels exactly like you say, Tyron works his ass off for every improvement and I m right there with him, able to recall the trouble he went through for every one of his skills and mysteries! I love this style of pacing!

Chris

Two chapters both with the same title. And odd choice

Joshua

Pacing is great. As long as we see the effect of all this progress. While potentially ramping up the genius sparks of inspiration, sort of snowball.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

John Yap

I usually don’t like slow pacing because the filler feels unimportant and generic. But your story is engaging and every step is relevant to his progress.

chris

@Rubeno im pretty sure if theyd had the choice between tyrons death or adventure, they wouldve chosen tyron. they wouldve hated it but preferred their son live more than anything else. @David theres something tyron and the author seem to have forgotten, tyron gave her a chance to leave where he didnt to tyron or any1 else, he knew she was the only 1 who might. she didnt, she stayed to kill him and instead offered herself up to beory as tyrons future archer revenant they knew at minimum from fighting the revenants he had that they might become his next revenants. they stupidly believed they could get away with killing him and that they would b able to frame some1 else without his parents finding out. they actually believed that a pair of the most powerful slayers of their generation wouldnt b able to save their son or at least get revenge b4 they even left the mountains/towns vicinity. so no matter any1s opinions shes at fault for her situation more than any1 else since she was the smartest, most pragmatic and most likely to b convinced to leave while she still could. whether dying in the fight with him, like the shield barer or by his parents b4 they could actually deal the final blow or in revenge for his death. i bet she had a significant chance to live (whether beory spared her or tyron let her go later, mayb under some sort of control and a sort of ally similar to the young archer that was sent on her way to tell of tyrons death and their were no survivors) if she was walking down the mountain after being convinced by tyron whether b4 the battle started or after their mind battle.

chris

ya that also sort of makes a little more sense for sword and sheild and spear and shield, he also used to have shield only archetype in the battle with laurel.

chris

agreed, also u should always have variety. spear is mid range and he cant outfit all his minions with spear AND sword yet, but even if he could later its been made crystal clear many times that each weapon type uses different muscle coordination which he has to thread magick musculature with each 1 and its to use 1 type per archetype. so no its sword group and spear group not both.

chris

im guessing they meant laurel, she hadnt gotten a brand yet, she wouldnt know. im on the fence about tyron telling her but shell probably eventually find out. she might laugh in his face about it for all the pain his parents went thru, or start to figure out some things about his parents last moments and that he wouldnt b doing this if the brand didnt exist causing them to take their own lives for his sake.

chris

BOOO!!! slow pace is solid polished world building and brilliantly fleshed out plot and character. i dont want tyron and others to b an ironic skeletal frame work of their current selves with no idea to their thoughts and no clue as to the difficulties and what measures r needed for his army and him to reach his current lvl of power.

chris

agreed, amazing story seeing so much world building and polish being done and fleshing out the characters. i rly cant get enough of the way rinoz writes his stories. im paying a few bucks for BOD and im getting the worth of a kings ransom with every chapter not to mention each volume, i cant wait to buy each volume in audible form. already paid for chrysalis volume 1 and i have no doubt BOD volume 1 will b just as amazing in its own way. ^_^

chris

exactly, slow pacing but theres bad and then theres good slow pacing and then their rinoz amazing slow pacing and not a single paragraph is filler. :D