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Tyron didn’t need Dove’s prodding to ensure he was fully prepared to cast this absurdly complex ritual, but that didn’t seem to stop the skeleton-trapped soul. He nitpicked about everything, questioning the young mage three times about every little detail. Was the circle correct? Was it actually correct? How stable were the components used to draw it? Did he realise that drawing the circle with your finger in dust is a fucking stupid idea? Had he double checked his notes and ironed out all the wrinkles? What focus was he using? Was it suitable? Had he checked it was suitable?

And on, and on, and on.

It was incredibly frustrating. Tyron didn’t particularly want to say it, but he knew he was a better mage than Dove, yet he allowed himself to be drawn into arguments over and over again, defending his choices, proving his work and covering each little detail to his mentor’s satisfaction.

Dove managed to drag the process out so long, it was two days after their first conversation in the cave when he was finally prepared to cast the ritual. Which was entirely the point. The former Summoner had delayed as much as he could, forced Tyron to rethink each aspect of the ritual, until the version he was about to cast was vastly superior to what he’d held in his hands two days ago.

In all that time, Tyron’s undead had continued to intercept and destroy the rift-kin descending the mountain, collecting their cores and depositing them just outside the cave. They also kept away the villagers who, for some reason, continued to emerge from Cragwhistle to catch a glimpse of the Necromancer, bowing to him if they happened to see him, bowing to the skeletons if they didn’t.

Which, thanks to minion sight, Tyron also frequently saw.

Standing over the wide, flat rock Tyron had engraved his circle on, he sighed with satisfaction. It was perfect. Each line, loop and whorl, every symbol of arcane power, was without flaw. Which they needed to be if he didn’t want to have the entire thing blow up and kill him. This ritual demanded so much magick, so much power, even the slightest mistake would cause it to backfire with spectacular results.

“Dove,” he said, “I’ve wanted to kill you so many times over the last few days, but, as much as it pains me to say it, thanks. You’ve helped a lot.”

The skeleton shrugged his onyx shoulder bones and chattered his teeth, an annoying habit he’d picked up.

“You’ve got one major flaw when it comes to magick, kid. You’re too damn good. Sometimes, you don’t seem to believe it's even possible for you to make a mistake.”

“I didn’t,” Tyron pointed out defensively. “All of my work was correct.”

“But it wasn’t complete. You were rushing and you know it. Casting Raise Dead the day after you learned it is fucking crazy enough. A ritual of this size? That’s straight up insane asylum material, and I would know.”

“Why are you making me argue with you? I was in the process of thanking you.”

“I have an argumentative personality.”

“Well shut the fuck up. I’m ready to begin.”

“As you say.”

“And when I’m done, I’ll work on developing a status ritual for you.”

The skeleton stood still, dumbstruck, for once.

“Y-you will? Do you have a lead on one?”

Tyron nodded, a sly grin crossing his face.

“What? You don’t?”

“Eat a sack of dicks.”

“Ah, if you keep talking, I might change my mind.”

Dove mimed locking up his jaw, then dropping the key into his imaginary trousers.

“If you can help keep the villagers away, though, that would be great. I have skeletons positioned along the path, but not that many.”

The vast bulk of his forces were on the mountain, with the rest positioned around the ritual site for protection. At all times, at least twenty skeletons and two of his revenants remained with him, but he was much more comfortable when that number was close to fifty. If the slayers in town teamed up to attack, he had to have at least that many. Thanks to Ortan, he knew that, at this moment in time, such an attack wasn’t very likely.

Unable to talk, thanks to the locking mechanism he’d put in place, Dove gave him a double thumbs up before he turned on his heel and bounced his way down the mountain path, almost skipping.

Tyron shook his head and turned back to his circle, steadying his breathing. For the final time, he checked to ensure he had everything he needed. In his right hand, he gripped the staff his mother had prepared for him. It was still too powerful for him to handle in battle, but as a ritual focus, it would serve him well. On his left hip rested a pouch, the string pulled to reveal the five shards of mage candy contained inside.

At his current constitution and tolerance, five was pushing his limits, and hopefully he wouldn’t need them all. There were several charged cores sewn into his robes, power arrays that he could draw magick from, but each one contained less than a fifth of the energy in a single piece of candy. Satisfied that everything was as ready as it could be, Tyron planted the staff in the groove he had prepared in front of him, raised his hands, and began to speak.

Mage tongue, the words of power, slammed into the air, each syllable a hammerblow that Tyron used to shape reality itself. At his current level of mastery, with the backing of his mysteries, his ability to draw out the full strength of each word was at its peak. Magick flowed out of him, through the staff, which began to resonate with power, then out and into the circle.

Tyron’s hands wove through graceful and deliberate motions, unhurried, forming one sigil, then the next, as he moved through the opening phase of the ritual.

It wasn’t complicated, this part, all he had to do was gather power, but he needed so much. The circle drank in every drop of magick he could give it, the lines slowly emitting a soft glow that grew stronger with each passing moment, but it still wasn’t enough. More. With his words, Tyron continued to pull in more magick, then force it out into the circle. He drained the reserves in his cloak within the first five minutes, choosing to take them early while he still had the attention to spare. Shortly after, he popped the first of his mage candy under his tongue, letting the arcane energy flow into him and fuel his magick.

After fifteen minutes, the circle blazed with power. Ominous, dark purple light, the colour of Death magick, blinded him, but Tyron didn’t need to see to continue the ritual. To him, nothing existed outside of the circle. Not the world, not the rifts, not his vengeance, nothing. There was only the ritual.

Arms spread wide, Tyron brought them down, then up again as he moved to the next phase.

Five syllables, five cracks in the dimensional weave. He heard them, even if there was nothing to see, as the fabric that held the realm together began to break in the air above the ritual circle. Now came the difficult part.

Sweat began to drip from his forehead as Tyron used all his power and control to take hold of those cracks, to mould and shape them. For what came next, they needed to be stable, needed to be mended, without being closed.

To an experienced Dimension Mage, this was their bread and butter, though perhaps not on the same scale, but to Tyron, this was close to uncharted territory. His throat already began to feel raw, his voice strained under the pressure, but he didn’t falter, he had to continue.

The second piece of mage candy went under his tongue as he let the crumbling remains of the first drop to his feet. His forehead was creased in concentration, his words and hands never ceasing their movement. This was a test of his control. If he took too long to stabilise the breaks, he would lose momentum and power, wasting the precious magick he had gathered before the real work had even begun.

Twenty minutes later, he was finally satisfied. Darkness had crept in at the edges of his vision, but he wasn’t sure if that was the fault of his eyes, or if the ritual itself were blurring the edges of reality. In this space, above the circle, the boundary between this realm and others was now not only weakened, but punctured. The cracks had been reformed, shaped into something that vaguely resembled an arch, or perhaps a door.

Here we go.

The power had been gathered, the way had been opened, now it was time to move to the most important and most demanding step. Now it was time to create.

“Los,” Tyron said, his hands pushing outward from his chest.

The ritual circle ignited, sending a shaft of purple light blazing into the sky. Like a dam breaking, a torrent of arcane power roared into the sky, the strength of it enough to vibrate the air. Tyron nearly staggered, almost driven to his knees by the strength of it, but steadied himself at the last moment. Sweat flowed freely now, running in rivulets down his face and into his eyes. To prevent distraction, he shut them. He had to focus.

Once again, he began to speak, rapidly now, words and sigils flashing from one to the next as he sought to dig out a channel to guide the raging waters just a few steps in front of the frothing, crashing waves. All of that power, all of that energy, was gathered, directed and led straight into the arch, and then pushed, forced beyond.

The staff, standing before him, glowed bright with arcane light as it acted to enforce his will. An amplifier and defender all at once, it shielded him from the ravages of the gathered magick even as it aided him to enforce his will upon it.

From down the mountain, Dove looked back over his shoulder as his soul quivered in response to the eruption of power. Through the trees, he could see it, a column of purple light that extended hundreds of metres into the air.

“By the melons!” he gasped.

He’d known the ritual demanded a great deal of power, but he’d never expected the kid to try and pull in this much. Was he trying to get himself killed?!

For a moment, he hesitated, then growled and continued his journey down the path with increased haste. There was no point going back now. What could he do? The ritual had begun and Tyron would either see it through or die in the attempt.

Sure as shit there would be a heck of a lot of attention from Cragwhistle, though. He had to make sure some idiot kid didn’t run up and throw a rock at the Necromancer’s stupid head.

In town, Ortan gaped at the light which had erupted up the mountain. Even during the day, the light seemed to darken around the edges, as if being pushed away from that column of light.

“Orthriss defend me,” he muttered absently, eyes still wide with shock.

Around him, people rushed into the streets, pointing, murmuring, whispering.

What had Tyron done? What was he doing? Wasn’t he trying to lay low?

From the corner of his eye, he saw the slayers gathering outside the barracks, faces grim as they talked amongst themselves. He couldn’t read their body language. Were they fearful? Angry? What would they make of this? No matter what, Ortan feared it wouldn’t be good.

Within the ritual circle, Tyron danced on the edge of oblivion, funnelling the power through the rapidly forming arch and into the space beyond. As he did so, he formed it, shaped it, building even though he didn’t truly understand what he was making. In this, he was guided by the ritual, directed by the Unseen. The pace continued to be high, words and sigils forming rapidly, words tripping from his tongue as his hands flickered from one precise gesture to the next.

Was he on his third shard of candy? Or the fourth? He couldn’t remember. The ritual demanded more power, so more power he gave.

This was the final phase, and Tyron raced to complete it, not wanting to waste a single drop of the magick he had gathered. From within the ritual circle, energy continue to thunder out and into the arch, taking shape on the other side as Tyron managed multiple processes at once.

On and on it went, until his throat was red and raw, his entire body ached and his spirit was gasping, almost squeezed dry of the last of its magick. Even Tyron, with all of his endurance and fortitude, felt himself begin to waver as the ritual went on, well past an hour, and into the second.

When finally it was done, he spoke the last word, formed the last sigil, and collapsed to his knees, hands shaking as he at last relinquished his iron control.

Exhaustion crushed him as the light faded from the circle, yet still, a small satisfied smile creased his lips.

Before him stood a doorway, wedged in a frame of bones.

Note: Cliffed again. DEAL WITH IT! :P

Comments

Number 98

I’m sure a literal beacon of death magic will have no adverse consequences

crusaderstar

WHAT CLIFFS THOU HAST WROUGHT

Andrew

Thank you!

Jakebert

Tyron's unlocked instanced player housing :0

John goode

1st rude lol 2ed please tell me there’s more this week I don’t know if I can wait a whole week for more!!!

JaegerMaxim

Must be Level 99 in rock climbing at least now haha

Hughes Andrew

NOT AGAIN YE BASTARD!! YE CANT KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THIS!

Lsshin

Be nice if that ritual would have closed the rift unintentionally

Rylie Harris

Thank you for the chapter 😁

Persepolis

There's no way bro can keep getting away with this, TFTC

John goode

If that happened where would you farm for lvls

Jac Onue

to the ossuary, obviously :)

Sheffi Ben-David

I'm pretty sure the energy of the ritual isn't death magick, or at least not primarily death magick. It's magick he's taking directly from the rift/his mage candy, which should be "pure", and he's feeding it through a ritual that is primarily dimensional magic. There should definitely be traces of death magick in there, but at a cursory inspection I'd guess it would be a massive dimension magic spell. Which, I mean, it is.

Sheffi Ben-David

We're on our third cliff in a row on what the ossuary actually *does*. At this point, it had better be massive.

Lsshin

There are plenty other rifts. I just expected tyron to become some sort of rift expert. Able to travel between rifts, close and open them as he wishes.

Moonspike

"After fifteen minutes, the circle blazed with power. Ominous, dark purple light, the colour of Death magick, blinded him, but Tyron didn’t need to see to continue the ritual"

Moonspike

Pretty sure that would be a beacon of death magic.

RinoZ

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! *runs off into the night*

RinoZ

it contains the only known source of fluride in the realm, along with calcium tablets. Tyron will have the strongest teeth and healthiest bones of all!

ottoto

THANKS FOR THE CHAPTERRRR

alt31415

Man, I can't believe you gave Tyron a ritual that epic and in the middle of it just have him say, "Loss."

alt31415

... why? He's a necromancer, not a dimension mage, and if ANYONE was able to close rifts at will the world wouldn't be slowly sinking into the apocalypse.

Ascendedreality

"How are his teeth so strong?!? That's his third piece of stale bread!"

Heara17

The status ritual could be using the essence of the soul, like they cut the soul, and it can leek “blood” and for the paper that they use they can simply use a wet paper and were the soul “blood” passe it creates frost so that they can read the lines made of frost.

Sheffi Ben-David

The door leads to a new dimensional space that he created with the ritual (the part where he forces massive amounts of energy through the portal to build something), which will be his "ossuary" that I assume in the future won't need a ritual of this size to summon. We're still cliffed on what this ossuary actually does, but it seems central to his whole class.

Nathan Quitugua

After all that power and work...itd be funny if all it is, is just a multidimensional mobile workshop that he can summon on a whim. Which...i guess would be really interesting. Take time to build minions, work in a space that you are virtually undetectable from so you don't have to spend time trying to hide all your death magick byproducts from the air. Just a TARDIS-like dimension you have access to, can summon on a whim, and holds a vast amount of stuff. A veritable Pocket Army as it were and then the only kind of logistics youd EVER have to worry about were how to get yourself to where you needed to go to make use of it.

alt31415

Well, not a whim. Not until he gets a LOT more stats.

CentaureHeart

I think the fact that it took so much out of him was because he created it. He should be able to summon it much more easily in the future

Nathan Patrick

Don't know if anyone else has said something like this, but what if Dove needs to go through an awakening again rather than just perform a status ritual?

CentaureHeart

Interesting ! But what would cause him to Awaken ?

Seeker10

I don't think so, that he can create gaps in dimension that easy but I do think its semi permanent gate, meaning if he can open this gate in to places he can essentially create corridor between them + plus any added bonuses to that ossuary brings

Nathan Patrick

His soul being "released" from his original physical shell, his "race" changing to undead/construct, or perhaps the Unseen observing his "desire" to be so strong to warrant him a second chance (kind of basing that part off how the Mysteries seem to work). Regardless of the options, the Dove we have now is not the Dove that lived. Still one of the greatest goddamn supporting characters out there!

DeadSlime

Noooooooo why!!!!!!!

CentaureHeart

I think it would work just like summoning a creature would. And Dove might actually help him on that

Ben

Jokes on you, I had my parachute ready this time!

bailey

I will not deal with it

Alexander O'Brien

Unlimited bone works? A commander has made a metal extractor? Any reason why he didn't do the ritual on the other side of the rift? With the plentiful mana and weak dimensional skin? He didn't seem to be having much trouble with the rift kin :? Great chapter :)

Nathan Quitugua

I think Silver rank is the rank where there's a sharp increase in power so it would make sense if one of his key abilities as Lord of the Ossuary is to just summon his boney homeys from wherever. I'm of the mind that he either created a demi-plane or he forged a soul connection to one already existing and giving some small domain in it that he controls.

Greyg

Rifts are dying realms everything is chaotic or even unstable so altering dimensional stability, while inside the rift would have potential consequences and he passed out after the ritual being inside the rift sounds like a death trap. The ambient magick around the rift is the good magick of his realm so he can more easily collect it. Rifts are dying realms the riftkin are driven out sure he could possibly do the dangerous new ritual inside the rift giving them a death magick dinner bell drawing in the riftkin, as he passes out from fatigue…

DeadSlime

My guess the it’s some kind of storage which will allow Tyron to transport undead easier by creating a pocket dimension. To quote the definition for Ossuary “container or room in which the bones of dead people are placed” with undead just so happening to be the bones of dead people. But I can see this working two ways Tyron can make Permanent arch ways that lead to his Ossuary e.g one in Cragwhistle and at his shop Which would then allow Tyron to use it like an immovable portal that is both a way to store items and his honey boys and as a way to travel between two locations. But I find it unlikely he’ll place it in the shop due to how flashy. So to get around this Tyron would likely do the ritual away from his shop in a hard to reach location. The other way I can see this going which isn’t as complex but is just as useful. Is through the ritual only being the method to create a pocket dimension his Ossuary. With him being to summon it whenever he wants on short notice. Therefore allowing him to be more covert while still having the majority of his power from the Necromancer class. But this route would lose the advantage of near instant transportation in exchange for being for of a rounded power allowing him to better respond to unpredictable events over the power over predicted events. I personally prefer my first theory as it’s more complex and requires more thought to be put in for the placement of Ossuary arches. Over the more simple and plain power of making an army appear out of your pocket. With the first option better suiting Tyron’s long term think for revenge. As I could just imagine a Tyron attacking one place luring out the magister’s gold and above rank adventurer’s just to use the Ossuary arch to attack a now weakened area which has lost some of its powerful adventure’s.

Rahsheem Reid

I’m wondering if he can move the door way..

Rahsheem Reid

If not that might just be his base of operations permanently.

Holly Webster

Where is my chrysalis 😭 why am I even paying at this point is how I'm feeling....

alt31415

Oh don't be so dramatic

jdouglas

BoD is so much better!

jdouglas

Next chapter when?! I'm hungry!

Prinny Knight

welcome to Cragwhistle, the home to all the cliffs.

Jerry McNair

Hey 👋 When you’re going to stop posting for over a week please let us know. Love your story and your work. Please work on your communication 😂 hope you’re doing well.

Greyg

There’s a discord not that i use it or know how active it is, but that would be a line of communication we don’t see on here.

chris

im pretty sure the dimensional spell is made of death magick. all the more reason it took so much magick, supposedly death magick is difficult and consumes or condenses pure magick of the same amount, harder to gather and everything so it takes more.

chris

in a way i love ur cliffhangers, how u make them so tantalizing and i understand a story can nvr b without a cliff at the end of a chapter cuz that would mean we the readers r satisfied and could actually bare to wait a week for another chapter or 3. so mostly i just love how much story and detail u pour into each chapter and where leave us at the edge of the cliff hanging by a single finger means we also get 2 chapters worth since u dont just cut off 1/2 way thru. i also have a rating system of great, bad and ugly cliffhangers, cut off 1/2 way thru this chapter and b4 doves comment would b cruel and ugly, bad would b b4 last few paragraphs. great is where ur satisfied but want more cuz the scene may b finished but theres still more to come but we have to wait. thats this, the only completely satisfying cliffhanger is the break between scenes where theres nothing left to know or tantilizing feeling till next chapter which can only b between story arcs. which u also usually somehow brilliantly turn into cliffhangers u always turn whats supposed to b a lull and after the climax of ur story into another cliffhanger. XD rofl im not a writer, just long time reader of urs and many other novels so my perspective is from the outside cuz i dont create cliffhangers, but from reading many stories ive grown to love cliffhangers for what they r, the climax to a chapter, the part of each chapter thats usually but not always the best part, sometimes the best part is in the middle and the most tantalizing is at the end where we have to wait for more. :) sorry for the wall of the text :P lol

chris

true, he may need dove or mayb "the god of fucking magick" as dove called him and i prefer to call him ever since, the 5th divine the other 4 killed as the sacrifice for the deal with the 3 old gods of entropy for divinity. raise him as a lich from the old gods realm to fight the other 4 divines with his parents and him. i hope theres many more lvls and class advancements than just lvl 100+ which is supposedly where the divines were at b4 they met the old gods and made their deal. :)

chris

thank you for making my day and making me lmao. :D

chris

i hope he created his own but if others created their own and their owners r gone or trapped or w/e he can eventually make a way to claim ownership on all of the ownerless created pocket dimensions. itd b great if were all created pocket dimensions of his realm but insane and awesome if it were all pocket dimensions that have collided with and eroded his realm like the rifts. less awesome if he found out he were able to but had to go thru each rift to gain access to any pocket dimensions created in those other realms. tho ofc that means if some1 created a pocket dimension to lock something away that could b bad. if he can do this that means he can gain access to any necromancy pocket dimension of the past, like if arhinan made a pocket dimension b4 or after he decimated the kingdom he fought, which is on the other side of these barrier mountains going by dove and tyrons conversation i while back.

chris

i agree, also tyron is all about details complete spells and specialized class and stuff. the gates being semi-permanent makes more sense, tho mayb it can b both but not till gold rank does he get the portable, easier, emergency option. since at least 1/2 the ritual and the magick used was to create this thing and the connection to him. now next time he does the ritual elsewhere will take around 1/2 the time, magick and ofc b a shortened ritual.

chris

some1s always gotta b the drama queen/person, only caring about their novel and whining about how a new chapter for BOD being uploaded instead is center of the solar system lvl of self centered. especially since some of BODs fanbase only heard about chrysalis cuz they found BOD and the reason y they even found rinoz at all and r currently supporting him. -_-