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Hey guys, I need your help with MKNB. Not financial, I need you guys to communicate with me. There's over a hundred of you, and we need to talk.

So I really have been writing MGKNB by the seat of my pants this entire time. I have the ending in mind, along with major story beats, but not a proper outline. I need to hammer one of those out. What I need from YOU guys is proper feedback about what you want from this story, and what you will want from the rewrite "Magic Knows No Boundaries Minus the Crack."

Also do you all just prefer my writing crack? Do I need to start writing more crack instead of serious, well-written stories? You only ever vote for MKNB.

Also. Started a second job because grandma had some medical bills she was hiding. I have much less time to write. So little, that I am going to take a month off of comissions in a couple weeks too.

BUT that doesn't mean I'm stopping work. I will be hammering away at this outline but I NEED your help! You're my patrons. You pay me. So, talk to me.

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NonsensicalRants

Also, I might cave and use AI. Train it on the quarter million words I've already written, give it the outline, spruce up what it spits out. But I think you guys deserve better than that. If I don't sweat and bleed for the chapter, is it even good enough to share with you all?

Austin

Love the story so far but it’s your call

SheepReaper

TBH, I didn't know this story was crack until we started talking about crack. I just thought it was good but funny. But maybe I'm skewed by what I thought was crack. You got me good with the name shenanigans with Romulus. I was saying, please let him stay, Romulus, but then I saw the Hermione gag and thought maybe it was worth it. Is this a crack? idk. It kills me that we're at the "good part," but I guess that also means it's critical to end strong. I love that Voldy and co know that Hadrian's a traveler, but everyone else still thinks he's a time traveler, even Romulus. There's an opportunity for a gag there, but I have no idea how that could be resolved. I would prefer that this went full redemption for Voldy, not a tragic anti-hero. Dumbledore, Hadrian, and Voldy seem like a power trio, running the light, gray, and dark spectrum if they could get along. It might be possible for Hadrian to become a permanent mediator, at least until Dumbledore dies. If there are too many subplots to wrap up (Bellatrix), you could dangle a second book and continue them there. After the shitstorm gets resolved, what's next? The statute is gone, there's a possibility to hyper-accelerate technology with magitech as long as the mundane don't start shit. So maybe go full Star Gate, and have anyone who's too strong try and Ascend. Or actually, Starget period, that'll give them a new thing to fight. Or anything involving the planet vs anyone else, really.