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Hello!

I'm thrilled to say that "The Cool Mom" is doing really well on Literotica! 12,000 views on the first day I believe is some sort of record for me. It puts a little more pressure on me to knock it out of the park for the sequel, but I am hoping I am up to the task.

I've attached the next small section of Downward Dog 2. It seemed like the great majority of people either were pleased to get the chance to read the draft in progress, or didn't mind if I released them, but had no plans to read them. So if you are one of the people who didn't like the periodic releases, I apologize. I will try to to clog the feed with them.

Any feedback, whether public or through email or messaging, would be most appreciated.

As stated before, the attached document, is just a small portion of Downward Dog Part 2. If you would prefer to wait for the full draft and not be spoiled, don't read this. 

Comments

Be_Be

"Downward Dog" is fantastic! 🔥🔥😈😈 I'm a huge fan of Jackie as a Bratty Queen who puts her PAWG toy in her place. There's something almost indescribably erotic about a gorgeous Dominant Brat mindfucking (and body fucking) a beautiful older woman into her natural place under her mistress.

Rabblelaid's Stories

I have a lot of fun writing bratty doms! And I can tell based on the response to my stories, that people have fun reading the bratty doms I write too! I think it would be fun to write a story where one of my bratty doms like Jackie or Renee is defeated and tamed by an older man. Would people be interested in reading that, or is it more fun if they are untouchable?

Be_Be

Part of the fun for me is not quite the 'untouchable' aspect. So much as the 'insideous sleazy infection' to her target's daily life. Jackie returning to their house dressed in a quintessentially slutty hot pink "Naughty" shirt & uber tight bubble butt displaying yoga pants. The first thing she does when the target husband opens the door is flex her erotic mind hooks. Even if he doesn't immediately admit that he already can't get away. Then she sinks them deeper by overwhelming his PAWG wife first professionally to deepen her personal weakness to Jackie's Bratty Dom charms. It's not that Jackie doesn't work for things. She has to boldly take the chance when offered to turn the table to her advantage. Then the way she mentally blankets her targets with high competency at work laced with a cocktail of overtly delicious mentally corrosive sleaze. Plus an undercurrent of reinforcement via dominant behavior on her part. All the while daring her jealous bimbo target to try impotently to do something about. Convincing an independent minded lady that she's actually a stuttering simp who can't help but be aroused by her inability to resist the humiliation of it all.

Abgazil

Would absolutely be interested to see one of the brats tamed!

Jc

I prefer bratty doms who remain untouched, as they should be. One way to tame them is by acquiring a more bratty dom, which can help establish a clear hierarchy of power!