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Hottie in the Mirror Epilogue (Patreon)

Published:
2024-09-24 22:32:09
Edited:
2024-09-24 22:57:38
Imported:
2026-06

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Hello Everyone!

I hoped to be done with this a little sooner, but I had an extremely busy weekend.

Here is the epilogue to "Hottie in the Mirror!

This may need some expansion as well, just like the main story. Would love to hear any feedback you have positive or negative!

Two specific questions:

I considered adding a brief mention that Lexi had gone no contact with her father. Would it be a good addition, or too much of a bummer?

At the end, I imply that the wedding might turn into an orgy. Do you think that that is a good direction, or should the throuple be exhibitionist but monogamous? If you like the idea of an orgy, should there be a description of it?

Comments

Brack

Personally I'm anti 'no contact with father' and pro orgy (with description)

Blake One

So good!! Although considering the somewhat perfunctory nature of the final sex scene I think I agree with the commenters who wanted more from the first threesome. I really would love to see the "Claire and Anton try to be tender and loving but Lexi ends up demanding degradation" dynamic you mentioned. Also I wouldn't mind getting some closure about Lexi's dad! Doesn't have to be no contact necessarily but that was a pretty defining thing for character and I would like to hear how it turned out. I don't think no contact is a bummer -- her dad sounds like a dick, and it can be very positive to think about it as like "she came out to him and he freaked out and disowned her, but she realised she didn't care at all. She no longer needed his approval, she had the approval of her boyfriend, and girlfriend, and her sisters. People who loved her for who she really was. And on a practical level, she didn't need his money. She had a new rich daddy to take care of her."

Blake One

I don't need to see the orgy. I like them being... Monogamous isn't the right word. Bigamous? I don't think having a fun orgy on their wedding day undercuts that but also it's not really what the story's about-about.

Blake One

Also Faria has been on a really hiring spree recently! Can't help imagining Hailey and Luke Brandt at the office Christmas party, she's judging him for being a dorky accountant until she asks him if he's married and he says "yeah kinda but my wife lives full time as my submissive puppy and I got another girl as my cat." Like damn dude I got my toes sucked by a tgirl in college once but uhhh clearly gonna have to step up my game.

DeetsandDoots

I emailed you more in depth thoughts along with some outline notes for CAS, but to put it in fewer words: Nay on the orgy, yay on the father plotline resolution

DeetsandDoots

We've yet to explore the depths of Hailey's freak game. HitM barely even covers the surface of it.

Rabblelaid's Stories

It sounds like the final threesome needs more punch! Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback!