Gajevy Fancomic Page Comparison (Patreon)

If you're following me on Tumblr you already know that I'm working on a gajevy fancomic based on the story of MaxB.One year and half ago I've had to put this project in pause because of my studies (exams and thesis) so I decided to restart it from the beginning.What do you think about the change? Have I improved?The page will be in english too, don't worry, but I dunno if to upload one page or more (for example 5 pages) at a time.What do you prefer? Tell me what do you think ;)