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objection ch2

enjoy!

[10.5.25 EDIT] - this won't be version that's being written into a comic. will be writing a new one for that.

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Z

Great chapter! Will you continue it soon? Seems like we’re just about to get to some intensive scenes.

Z

That’s great to hear - can’t wait to see how you’re going to develop this story. Also, personally I would love to see you take a darker turn with one of your stories, with more dominance and broken resistance, if you’re looking for some ways to mix things up.

Treva Obbard

Do you think you’ll ever return to this story? I really enjoyed the element of trigger phrases putting her in a temporary obedient/horny/impressionable state which she didn’t remember later, as a variation on the more permanent changes that you typically write. Though I wouldn’t mind if it built up to a more permanent state, either! But the idea of this woman as a functional lawyer AND part of her job is unknowingly serving as a sexual office perk for the partners or anyone who does well enough or is a valued enough client to earn the “password” to use her… 👀😳