page updates + notes (Patreon)

still adjusting a couple thingzzz but i thought this might be interesting 2 share ?? basically i hated the versions these pages i did back in january LOL so heres new versions + notes on my changes.. its hard sometimes working w my old roughs bc my tastes r changing all the time and i think my writing/composition tendencies r both pretty different now u_u back in january i didnt make enough effort 2 update my roughs to my current taste and as a result i was rly dissatisfied w them looking back, hopefully theyre noticeable better and im not just insane ^_^ <3

also here's the old ones cuz they're not super visible under my notes https://www.patreon.com/posts/33153706