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At long last, I got this chapter done.

I'm not sure why it was so hard to write, except that getting the interaction between Talla and Tara just right felt vital to the entire project.

That said, the Pilgrims finally reach the first City of the Temples of Women, the place where the gods made the first Goddess, and they find themselves... not celebrated?

Anyway, read and enjoy! I think I know where I'm going now, as the next few chapters are well understood.

Cheers,

Xavier.

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Vitaly

Oh, that was epic!

xaviertorch

I am glad you guys liked it. I was really worried about giving the whole thing the heft it needed.

Christopher Gist

I’ve always wondered why the women never questioned Talla and Zhair’lo after they saved Beshenna? They just seemed to ignore Zhair’lo’s strength and Talla’s. And the lack of questions at the various Temples they passed thru it seems like they are ignoring them! Great chapter. I hope everything is alright with you I haven’t seem much activity lately. Chris

Christopher Gist

Glad to know you’re recovering take care of your health cause once that goes your downhill from there. Looking forward to new chapters and seeing how Talla's and Zhair’lo’s story continues Chris