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Laura and Bailey, caught in a lie, are required to do something special together, by way of apology.

After that, it becomes a question of competition in terms of, shall we say, 'exposure'.

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John Wakefield

Fun chapter. I caught a couple typos, if it's not too late to make edits: Page 3, two-thirds of the way down, Bailey says "I can go fist" instead of "I can go first". Top of Page 4, line that starts with "Kent always gropes me" has a section that reads ". I wouldn’t imagine Laura would even touch my butt me until we start..." The "me" after "butt" probably doesn't belong there.

xaviertorch

Thanks! It is never too late for typos. ETA: that should be fixed. Don't be afraid to let me know if you see anything else.

Mark

Was kissing each others nipples intended to be a Talla's Temple reference, or a happy (well, awkward for Bailey and Laura) coincidence?

xaviertorch

Wow. I never even thought of that, and it happens frequently in the Talla series. I wish I'd done that on purpose, a subtle homage to 'sisterhood' in those novels, but it's more like a coincidence. Well, not quite. Really, it's just me, through Kent, visiting my own fetishes. :-)